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10 lines
Due 24 hrs
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This is my check
Tomorrow midnight, just in case
If u ask me? ur trash B. U got bodied in ya last three, son
Fuck a reality check, they're adding a stimulus package to ur tax refund
This spells the end of his boss status position. His bitch ass can go free
The way I throw out letters, I'll be a dead ringer at the National Bee
You'll be out cold, literally, when I bash, beat n clobber you
Cuz when I punch ur fuckin lights out, they'll shut off ur gas, heat and water too
If u don't wanna die young, a nigga better hide from this rifle when it shoots
Or they'll find ya corpse with more holes in it than ur recycling excuse
No surprise he'll cry himself to sleep, we knew this guy was gay for years
Shoulda thrown in the towel, Let. Now u need a travel-size pack to wipe away ur tears
Shafi aka ill clinton
Still nursing those wounds from Wordz, now this Arab's dead
But Isis not gonna be able to help, when I chop off this faggot's head
Yeah we're cool & there's a chance that you'll win, hardly
Nobody's thinking ill will...but after this you'll have a lot towards me
Chicks welcome me in their homes but sidestep your bullshit
Cuz soon as you step on the matador gets slammed in your face quick
You'll be widely recognized after this. I swing with the purest fashion
& The punches I landmark your face so much, it'll become a tourist attraction
Your girl has the filthiest cunt. Bet it's a resident to infection
We see that bush with so much gore...it could rival the 2000 presidential election
Open for votes @Fresh @Wordz AhGod.
If u ask me? ur trash B. U got bodied in ya last three, son
Fuck a reality check, they're adding a stimulus package to ur tax refund
Kinda cool
This spells the end of his boss status position. His bitch ass can go free
The way I throw out letters, I'll be a dead ringer at the National Bee
Iight
You'll be out cold, literally, when I bash, beat n clobber you
Cuz when I punch ur fuckin lights out, they'll shut off ur gas, heat and water too
Cool
If u don't wanna die young, a nigga better hide from this rifle when it shoots
Or they'll find ya corpse with more holes in it than ur recycling excuse
Lol, dig this
No surprise he'll cry himself to sleep, we knew this guy was gay for years
Shoulda thrown in the towel, Let. Now u need a travel-size pack to wipe away ur tears
Cool.. Thinks its played on him tho...
Vs..
Shafi aka ill clinton
Still nursing those wounds from Wordz, now this Arab's dead
But Isis not gonna be able to help, when I chop off this faggot's head
Iight
Yeah we're cool & there's a chance that you'll win, hardly
Nobody's thinking ill will...but after this you'll have a lot towards me
This pretty cool... The will shit prolly real played tho, seen a couple
Chicks welcome me in their homes but sidestep your bullshit
Cuz soon as you step on the matador gets slammed in your face quick
This tied together real well.. Nice bar
You'll be widely recognized after this. I swing with the purest fashion
& The punches I landmark your face so much, it'll become a tourist attraction
Lol, cool
Your girl has the filthiest cunt. Bet it's a resident to infection
We see that bush with so much gore...it could rival the 2000 presidential election
Lol, cool
Iight I feel y'all both came nice pretty even on quotes n personals, the recycle bar was nice but I feel let just had the stronger hits IMO... If Shafi woulda had one mo solid hit i woulda went him but IMO got let edging this.. Matador bar was dope... Good read fellas...
Vote let
Shaf you came with lots of played metaphors which really hindered the connection of your punches, the corpse line was decent nothing crazy, then finished with a played closer. Feel like you don't really think all your bars through before posting. You have the idea but need to stay away from the played material.
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Lett had the matador punch which I've seen numerous times, the landmark was pretty played as well, then you finished with a gore bush punch, I honestly felt like this was a played punch concept battle your verse was played all over the place, but played is better then missing. Your wording helps you out tremendously because it allows the bars to continue smoothly even if the punch isn't as strong.
This was close battle nothing great on either side, letterman was just a tad smoother when reading.
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Originally Posted by Letterman
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first off i did not no shafi was ill clinton.. boy do u need to shake the rust, i remember u being alot better no hate lol anyways..Quote:
Originally Posted by shafi
i thought letter came slightly better, a better hit from either side would have got the win. close match but vote; letterman
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If u ask me? ur trash B. U got bodied in ya last three, son
Fuck a reality check, they're adding a stimulus package to ur tax refund
ok
This spells the end of his boss status position. His bitch ass can go free
The way I throw out letters, I'll be a dead ringer at the National Bee
decent
You'll be out cold, literally, when I bash, beat n clobber you
Cuz when I punch ur fuckin lights out, they'll shut off ur gas, heat and water too
cool
If u don't wanna die young, a nigga better hide from this rifle when it shoots
Or they'll find ya corpse with more holes in it than ur recycling excuse
cool personal
No surprise he'll cry himself to sleep, we knew this guy was gay for years
Shoulda thrown in the towel, Let. Now u need a travel-size pack to wipe away ur tears
ok closer
vs.
Still nursing those wounds from Wordz, now this Arab's dead
But Isis not gonna be able to help, when I chop off this faggot's head
nah
Yeah we're cool & there's a chance that you'll win, hardly
Nobody's thinking ill will...but after this you'll have a lot towards me
lol cool
Chicks welcome me in their homes but sidestep your bullshit
Cuz soon as you step on the matador gets slammed in your face quick
good
You'll be widely recognized after this. I swing with the purest fashion
& The punches I landmark your face so much, it'll become a tourist attraction
been done
Your girl has the filthiest cunt. Bet it's a resident to infection
We see that bush with so much gore...it could rival the 2000 presidential election
cool closer
You'll be out cold, literally, when I bash, beat n clobber you
Cuz when I punch ur fuckin lights out, they'll shut off ur gas, heat and water too
If u don't wanna die young, a nigga better hide from this rifle when it shoots
Or they'll find ya corpse with more holes in it than ur recycling excuse
vs.
Yeah we're cool & there's a chance that you'll win, hardly
Nobody's thinking ill will...but after this you'll have a lot towards me
Chicks welcome me in their homes but sidestep your bullshit
Cuz soon as you step on the matador gets slammed in your face quick
Your girl has the filthiest cunt. Bet it's a resident to infection
We see that bush with so much gore...it could rival the 2000 presidential election
decent battle both had some hits and misses. i got letter takin this barely. he had one more quoteable n was a lil more consistant. good battle.
vote - letterman.
Letter got this one, ice is Isis was weird for me because when you pronounces Isis you don't put much emphasis on the first s but you do on the second, however after a couple of re reads it worked out. The way the ill will punch was worded thought it was gonna be about the rapper but it wasn't and was cool landmark wordplay was a big no no bush and gore is a little old lol shit was like 3 terms ago and the other two bars I didn't mention were meh shafi I thought your lights out and more wholes than your recycling excuse were solid and the rest meh, this came down to two quotes and I enjoyed letters more. No hate vote letterman
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