from the top

this is my first post on here.. comin off the top tell me wat yall think.

Keep the green twisted up
Wit tha system up
You aint shit ta us
N you can't fuck wit the shit we mixin up
Boilin hot water, Choppin it down, then flip it up
Fuckin wit techh get ya soul lifted up
Got a bag of choices i just picked it up
That cat got the gat i got the nine for you i switched it up
Pulled the glock on ya block and lit it up


I will metaphoracally, imortaly, destroy you b
you cant fuck with me
i be shootin at you while on the interstate swervin
come backs like Irving
Fitzgerald on the seam route
Ill show you what this beam bout
im a boilin pot just gotta let the steam out
see the toster on my holster
put you on R.I.P. posters
all over the city ya crew will post ya
you sub par at most kid
always bragged and boasted
till he got clapped with the back of the gat and got his fuckin head broken
i stay strapped with the mac go clap that rip his fuckin chest open



Get at me..

Don't 'come off the top' until you can write something with substance. Practice.

How many times do you think people have read this kinda stuff before?

i do write man this is just right off the top expressin shit that my peoples and me go though

K I'm just sayin' I've read stuff like this a hundred times before. If you wanna stand out, you gotta be different. That's AFTER you play with basic verse structure, multi's and punches. We're all still learning, you just gotta practice.

ya i got u just expressin myself

uppin i edited it with another off the top freestyle