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MIstaken
yea I do poetry too....
Mistaken
whirlwind of emotional storm
curled into twists of devotions torn
sprawls the fumes of latent hatred
gravely mistaken for tolerance
with haste the crumbling foundation falls
tossed by the winds of anger's call
aimlessly tearing with claws of heartbreak
deeply wounding the soul
silence of the closure within
collapsing the love that life begins
slowly remaining thoughts of maddness
fade away into reality
softly the breeze of lonliness motions
existance is lost in endless ocean
laid are thoughts of resting forever
sadly mistaken for smiles
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This was nice spitacular you had great details and your vocab was real good.
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