quick pointless, introducin myself with some bars

so ruthless i keep your mom in this brief case
rappin with a knee brace ill get you high they call me freebase
Heres a quick ten bars for yall to get to know me
think your hot homie? Get your mind set to show me
i came to the site hopin I can spit with the best
recognize after these bars and admit it im blessed
im above average your as sick as the rest
im sick with the vest while you get hit in the chest
as your gaspin for air the police is impressed
your mother your daughter your niece is depressed
if you wanna battle call me out, ill knock out ya teeth
start a war bring it on im all bout the beef
im all bout the girls and im all bout the green
im talkin money and buds nigga you know what i mean
i got a flow so sick and my greens so thick
ill run through all u motha fuckas my sixteens so sick
call me out for a battle i get mean so quick
i wont tell ya i won ill let the negroes pick
ill battle everyone one on this site starting with you
what up im free and im tryin to be part of a crew

i really got knee brace, buddy and i got in a car accident, thats why ill be on the puter so often

kinda shitty couple bars, real quick, I had nothing on the mind, im fresh to the site, let me know what yall think… and is there crews on this site?

Not bad...

You need to follow the forum rules. Drop some feedback on other people so you can get some on yours.

i will i will i just registered homie but thanks

dude, i like the flow alot in this one, i had a good time readin it lol
ur lyrics are pretty tight, all in all that was a nice intro... props...

peep mine....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ck-372590.html

yo thanks alot that was some good feedback appreciate it

keep em comin

id stop writing stuff about how dope you are and starting writing something that has meaning and wit....

dude when i feel like droppin somethin with meaning id name it somethin other than quick and pointless, correct?

That wasn't actually shitty. Had a solid flow and nice rhyme scheme. That was a nice drop. If that was shitty drop, i wanna see what a good drop of yours is like.

Before you even begin to drop more....
....try reading the rules..

Oh and your piece wasn't good at all.

good day to you sir.