The Last Of Us

a martyr traveling on a path of broken souls
hope provokes an open road that's frozen cold
it use to glimmer, shine like it was rolled with gold
now it's crumbled, fallen with empires that have been broken/sold
the old have spoke an ode that's tragic and ominous
a story baleful, full of regret that lacks any consciousness
it has haunted us, since the day's of time relapsed in a grain of sand
a forsaken man with blatant plans to let hatred stand and make us damned
it was told since the times of ancient land, before fate was planned
after the fall of supreme's but before they could take a stand
so now we're stuck with the trials and tribulations of wild vindication
incarcerated in a vile sinner's sanctum masquerading as a tyrants civil nation
we're are carcass's piled in damnation


Your soul was sold the day god created it, you still have the relationship
so stray from complacent-ness
..be yourself..
when it comes to sin don't relate to it
this is the truth and something you can find as fact
if you stay on the right path, he might just buy it back

it's corruption that has to gain from what the past has slain
a passive stain on blood en-grained in the hands of pain
the mask is vein, captivated but has no task or name
a faceless past of what destruction has embarked on the masters face
so we masquerade & let the masks parade in a passive state
demise and deception, a rise of inception
decline in the mind of the giants that tempt it
the grind is redemption, and once the timing reflects it
we will find the hand of the clock will supply our ascension
it's not just something you can find in a sentence
or even between the lines of who said this
this is my mind and I spread it, until it's the thought that is passive
until it is passed like the past and embodies the captive
know your not trapped, take not you've adapted
this is a fact you can quote to your grand kids
hold it with a motive so captive, know it's astounding
now the great souls are surrounding
& know you are not the last of us, because it was those who have found me.

Thou art on thine period, bitch. Terrible read.

Ur forever on ignore faggot, quit following and commenting on my every word u fan boy loser.

@Johnny Soul for some feed

if people critique this now it could mold the outcome of future votes in SS. Patience young grass smoka, thisll get thoroughly looked over during voting time. i will say its a decent piece but im not gonna break it down at the moment

Alphabet art but a dull minded codpiece that is gay.

I'm gonna have to close this until:

1. The SS week is done.
2. You got your feedback links.

Sorry brother, rules are rules. When the requirements are net I'll reopen it, delete the free posts and leave you feedback.