Just Feel Me out

I wrote this in class
recorded it a few hours ago

just tell me what u think


The arrival of a new day, the beginning of a new way, you’ve never heard this before but I will say, when I begin to portray you better check yourself and back the fuck out of my way, On a bad day you wouldn’t want see the fury as I release my rage to watch the other roaches scurry, in a hurry my spit mangles inside my head with no feelings left I burst because at times I just feel dead, and I’m seeing red and black attack the censorships that lack the gusto found up in my track or the plums within my sack, And I will attack , myself when I feel that I am getting soft , and I will not let the other stop till I feel that its on top or till my head falls off, words will leak from out my head until the whole world becomes of things that I have never said, don’t be mislead this is a time of revelation, a transformation has occurred and now its time to tell the nation

Its time to feel me, now or never here is the chance,
Its time to feel me, live for the moment that wont last
Its time to feel me, throw your words up to the wind
Its time to feel me its over I’m ready to begin


The greatest trick the devil ever played was hiding himself inside of me until his plan was made
I’ve been released, at last I see my vision clear, I can feel it getting stronger putting distance to my fear
It will sear into your bones once it takes you by surprise, and leave you to despise the sight you see through blood shot eyes. Your colored skies darken quick to times arise to feel what I have now is greater then your richest prize

Its time to feel me, now or never here is the chance
To resist your ignorance and to hold it as your final stance
Its time to feel me this stuff doesn’t happen every day
You wouldn’t know the power till they hang on words you say
Its time to feel me its over I’ve broken free from the grasp
Cheers to new beginnings and to the start of your collapse
Cheers to all the how’s? and whys ill never let you ask
Its time to feel me now because ill never give it back

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I like this. It was pretty decent man. This gets a 8.5 outta 10. Keep droppin.

yeah this was a pretty good piece i thought too, good read, it flowed pretty well through out the piece as well, your vocab was good too, overall id say it was a good piece, keep dropping.

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