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Vote Yo
YO- I thought most of your punches where a little forced and kind of played they attack yor opponent but in that all too familiar way when it came to your open and close the rest was decent at best as I said it just felt forced mostly because of the wording so work on that but you did manage to put forth a decent attack at your opponent.
MCM- let me say this I HATE YOU SLANG EVERY OTHER WORD SPELT WRONG STYLE it really fucks up your verse and I thought a few of YO's punches were a little forced until I seen your stop with the slashes and shit it it doesn't flow with out them then guess what it doesn't fucking flow if it doesn't make sense the slashes don't change the word definition. I seen u had some ok attempts at metas and similis but the wording was bad and when you add on to it the fucked up spelling of everything it helped water down the punches
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iite check it out
yo- You had old concepts i wasnt feelin them u had one bar that was fresh
With you in the family ya'll probably get divorced.
Because no way you can flow...........................
..................................except when it is forced.
And it was a personle but your shit was just too basic for my likein
Mc- I like your style you didnt have aas much punsh as ~yo~ but urs hit harder you had much better wordplay as welll
Vote/mc For have'n The fresher concepts and harder punchs
plz vote in my battle vs fuck <3 thx
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Booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooo...... na j/p
YO! .................. Serios Elevation in your situation will result in better endings
Your wording was not well chosin, such as that "Lyrically Spittn", Lyrically anything just sounds wack, shit was getting played back when i was a rookie, 2001
Mystique, Forcing your multi's but you did try, you remind me of someone.
'My Words 'Wore-His-Text' An The Roarin-Tecs Rip An Have Pourin-Necks '
'An Now Im 'Sourin-West' To Grab The 'Hatchet' An Go For 'The Organs-Next'
you killed it with that last line, i was feelin everything by the "Sourin West", although it was added for wordplay i suppose
Vote : Mc Mystique
Thats my Two Cents.
Peazoz
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Vote-Mc Mystique
Good battle but i have too give this to Mc cuz he had better concepts...Yo your verse was good but i didnt see to many eyecatchin concepts which stood out more...and thru parts of your verse it couldhave been worded better...Mc your verse was good but your slang i didnt like that much cuz i almost didnt understand sum of your verse barely...but in tha end Mystique had tha overall better and less played verse so he gets my vote
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Meh nothing really.
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'My Words 'Wore-His-Text' An The Roarin-Tecs Rip An Have Pourin-Necks '
'An Now Im 'Sourin-West' To Grab The 'Hatchet' An Go For 'The Organs-Next'
v/mc
I thought mc took this battle with more direct punche's and creative line's. yo you had a basic verse with really no punches read LLL to get concpets,..