ruin my awesome verse about penis warts why dont you
*uber bans*
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ruin my awesome verse about penis warts why dont you
*uber bans*
Woohoo!
Congrats To Eng!
Hahahahahaha!
How fuckin stupid do you have to be to bite off someone CURRENTLY IN THE LEAGUE!!!
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You must eat your own shit when you're not molding it into little friends to play with.
Asshole.
Anyway...
Smoka...eh...
No offense, but it sounds like you tried to go my route and write a witty, yet slightly perverse and gross joint.
However...this one dragged on and on, didn't have really nice flow...
And ended very thrown together like.
Humorous, yes. Inventive and creative, I'll give you those.
But very weighed down my excessive vocab and slow flow.
I'd have voted the other way...but you're in luck...kid's a biter!
Peace, compadre.
wasn't going your route, although I have had a few tell me I do write alot more of a story style as you do, instead gay verses of nothingness....and appreciated critique...I know the rhymescheme and flow of the piece wasn't hot, I knew it wasn't before I dropped...next week will be different...I promise you that....prepare yourself Cry!!