8 Bars = 16 Lines
Due by midnight. Good luck, let's have some fun.
Consider this my check.
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8 Bars = 16 Lines
Due by midnight. Good luck, let's have some fun.
Consider this my check.
Check, check.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...OPEN-FOR-VOTES
I voted on this battle.
I'll vote in a bit. Lemme get this up before I get pulled away tonight...
You get 10.
Listen faggot,
I'ma beat this kid like he's Irish... so 'shakin the rust?'
That's me finger bangin' his mom - knuckles deep in her taint n' her muff..
Disrespect flagrant as fuck... My chill is "No." Not settled..
This kid "old school" cuz when I visit now, head at blowjob level...
Flows so far above you... Try n' piece it all together..
When we bang, it's liquid fire like I'm creepin' in the Nether..
I Red your Bull shit.. You write like some Quickie Mart scrubber..
So take this Monster to the head till your fuckin' heart flutters..
You're vanilla as fuck... just a twig and a shirt...
So I'll be balls deep in your girl's ass when I'm diggin' up dirt..
Ez.
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Also voted on this one.
We agreed on 16 so you get the whole clip kid.
I’ll take that bet, mother fucker you can double down.Quote:
Originally Posted by hello there
Trouble found, lyrically I’ll gun you down and shuffle round,
through the rubble on the ground. Hello kitty.
You yellow bellied bitty, with a shitty flow, run you and your fellows out the city.
Mention you? I’ll dismember you, I’m fixin’ to.
When I do like a pigeon do, you get split in two.
Lyrically I’ll beat you to a pulp, lyrically I’ll eat you in a gulp.
Thanks for the inquiry, but lyrically I defeat you in a jolt.
I do this frequent on the daily bitch, and I don’t expect much
from someone who couldn’t even come up with a decent alias.
You earned a custom title, you better read something from the bible,
I’m a leader, you’re a child. Rank and file. Get spanked cause’ I ain’t spit nothing in a while.
I know he said he would post by the next moon, but he’ll be perplexed
with post-traumatic stress in the next room, Jutebox complex with the text doom,
Your avatar is silly stupid, you must be really stupid and spit trash. Get smashed, and denied to rap,
Hello, goodbye. Lyrically I could kill you with 4 bars and 2 hands tied behind my back.
Up for voting please.
I'ma beat this kid like he's Irish... so 'shakin the rust?'
That's me finger bangin' his mom - knuckles deep in her taint n' her muff..
versus
I do this frequent on the daily bitch, and I don’t expect much
from someone who couldn’t even come up with a decent alias.
So yea, i havent seen hello battle in a while but i've read much better and maybe he dropped to suit the competition, which was almost a mistake because 16 lines vs 10 puts you at a clear disadvantage in a more closely contested battle, Jutebox I've never seen battle and i can tell off the bat he's mostly into audio rap which can be different and difficult to adopt a text style to at first(it was for me). That being said this verse from Jute was better than my first text verse so i can see u improving greatly with just a few battles if you work towards it. Nice rhyme structure but not enough direct punches and/or thought provoking/comical lines. Good try, really man, but you were slightly outclassed here.
V/ h.t.
Up for votes.
I'ma beat this kid like he's Irish... so 'shakin the rust?'
That's me finger bangin' his mom - knuckles deep in her taint n' her muff..
this legit right here lots of humor nice flow n multi nuun heavy tho 4 out of 5
Disrespect flagrant as fuck... My chill is "No." Not settled..
This kid "old school" cuz when I visit now, head at blowjob level...
you reaching here but it lands cuz the flow is here 3 out of 5
Flows so far above you... Try n' piece it all together..
When we bang, it's liquid fire like I'm creepin' in the Nether..
you missed with this 1 out of 5
I Red your Bull shit.. You write like some Quickie Mart scrubber..
So take this Monster to the head till your fuckin' heart flutters..
whew this is hot lava right here
You're vanilla as fuck... just a twig and a shirt...
So I'll be balls deep in your girl's ass when I'm diggin' up dirt..
back to back hay makers
I’ll take that bet, mother fucker you can double down.
Trouble found, lyrically I’ll gun you down and shuffle round,
flow supreme
through the rubble on the ground. Hello kitty.
You yellow bellied bitty, with a shitty flow, run you and your fellows out the city.
okkkayeee flowing hot lava
Mention you? I’ll dismember you, I’m fixin’ to.
When I do like a pigeon do, you get split in two.
flow filler? get to it now
Lyrically I’ll beat you to a pulp, lyrically I’ll eat you in a gulp.
Thanks for the inquiry, but lyrically I defeat you in a jolt.
bleh blah first line solid fall off second line
I do this frequent on the daily bitch, and I don’t expect much
from someone who couldn’t even come up with a decent alias.
4 out of 5
You earned a custom title, you better read something from the bible,
I’m a leader, you’re a child. Rank and file. Get spanked cause’ I ain’t spit nothing in a while.
streching em out now n just kinda swinging wild here
I know he said he would post by the next moon, but he’ll be perplexed
with post-traumatic stress in the next room, Jutebox complex with the text doom,
elementary shit here not impressed getting bored with this verse
Your avatar is silly stupid, you must be really stupid and spit trash. Get smashed, and denied to rap,
Hello, goodbye. Lyrically I could kill you with 4 bars and 2 hands tied behind my back.
nice concept but the mention of your bars is not a fact you lost this one jack
hello there killed him in this one
I Red your Bull shit.. You write like some Quickie Mart scrubber..
So take this Monster to the head till your fuckin' heart flutters..
You're vanilla as fuck... just a twig and a shirt...
So I'll be balls deep in your girl's ass when I'm diggin' up dirt..
Vs nothing
And ur supposed to match the first person to drop so technically this a dq win for hello there
We agreed to a specific amount of bars prior to setting up the battle. So I imagine it would technically be a DQ on 'hello there' for not meeting the requirements. But doesn't make any different to me because y'all are like congress you skim through the shit and vote by party lines.Quote:
Originally Posted by Ronin
Doesn't matter u still gotta match who drop first or tell them to add bars. But u still lost what sadQuote:
Originally Posted by Jutebox
Nigga fight me
So it doesn't matter the amount of bar agreed up in the before hand the first person to drop decides how many bars the battles is going to be. That's brilliant. And while your opinion is appreciated it's worth less than you intranet accomplishment.
This post is a perfect example of ur stupidityQuote:
Originally Posted by Jutebox
According to you. You can make a call out. Agree upon a set number of bars and timeline. Then the first person to drop can decide how many bars they actually want to spit and the second person must match.lQuote:
Originally Posted by Ronin
Minimum is 10 fyiQuote:
Originally Posted by Jutebox
Nah hello there agreed to the battle rules and hasn’t posted the full verse required. Jute wins by dq