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Gluck
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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...571/index.html
"damn good battle here, but $pit was just outclassed here"
won't be any different this time around Joe..
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Spit via PM
I started a media company, built my own studio, and started studying film. I'm about to launch a new album and music videos this year, probably by June I'll drop the album. I just started producing an artist I've known for a while named AliBob, I actually filmed his first music video using only a cell phone and a GoPro.
i see you made a comeback just so i could bleed ya friend
that juncture ain't gonna win. ‘at this point’ we wish you'd just leave again
3/5 = three-fifths. you’ll nod & say yes w/out a disagreement
you know all about Fractions. when you two battled his kicked ya teeth in
you’re dumb as fuck man. barely even makin pennies in fact
i’d call you a halfwit. but AT BEST an eighth of your verse will have any of that
i’m mean w/ some wrath. i step in rings & i lead with a jab
i punch like ‘Paki-Ow’. you yell that to greedy when he goes too deep in ur ass
rolls upon rolls of the green. bitch i'm paid n’ been a threat
the bandwidth is insane. your broke ass can barely pay for internet
currently i’m worth $100,000. honestly the scratch is insane
wrap ur head around ^disfigure. one punch from me is bout to do that to your face
nobody’s nodding to your tracks. all this audio is useless bitch
closest u’ve come to Producing A. Bob was making that wack fuckin music vid
running some third rate media company w/ a crappy staff
when it comes to bizarre u gunna succeed?! no. the thought alone is exactly that
get real gramps. stop claiming u got a young bae that’s horny
at best ur getting some ‘old-wives tail’.. & even then its probably a made-up story
so wack it’s pathetic. w/ those bars this’ll never be a wrap for Blue
when it comes to ya discontent... well, i cant help but feel sad for you
one of the best ever?! get real dawg that ploy isn’t tough
ya ‘you'll be getting someones goat’ nomination.. honestly ur annoying as fuck
a fallen “legend” that's about to get laughed from the site
if we say wheelchair issue it’s cuz ur crippled ass is gunna need one after the fight
boastin & braggin that you’re quick to finish a chump
okay i admit it Spit, you’re bad ass.. one insult isn't enough
where’s ur fire gone?! lately u been appalling me dawg
writing like you’ve been ‘checked out’ so long you booked ur first modelling job
in the mirror practicing wack pickup lines. you should be ashamed prick
NFL teams running the ball 20 times in a row’s more exciting then ur Game Script
i’ve actually been hit w/ a shell. straight from a mag it’s shitty
& while i know about Shooting Pains.. Spits got em in his joints cuz the fag is sixty
u’ll never hear me sayin that ya punch has found the mark this time
i’m not one to Gasol Legends up. especially one as old as Pao n’ Marc combined
i inherited the title by spitting loco flames hard
Spit’s known for successions too... every Friday night at his local gay bar
ur fake it’s true. a petty never-was that’ll never be a great to Blue
blow your brains out at the California border just to leave ya mindstate in two
i carry twin glocks that pop w/ the most timely a blasts
we'll see Jolene when they both start Singing.. no Dolly & Miley collab
i'm proven the best. two in his chest just killed this herb w/ the led
docs’ll yell CLEAR. but the only Corresponding will be a news anchor confirmin he's dead
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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
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Originally Posted by The Real Spit
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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
You phony. little. faggot. court's in session, you're pathetic & here's the buzz.
everything you write is fake, so I'm outing ya forgery of our peers to judge.
later you'll be like "dope battle Spit".. I'll say fuck off dummy get schooled faster
cuz I'm bringing that supernova heat & there's zero chance that we cool after.
I give props to legends before me. plus I'm grateful for every tourney I'm in.
but when I thank you next, it's for being a grande loser & ensuring my win.
I'm bringing the pain, you should quit text now & I'll let you retire fine.
otherwise bitch, I'll torture career & make it hurt like hell the entire time.
stop acting like you're presidential, cuz nobody find that you're suitable.
I still got you running for office tho, where you'll try & hide in your cubicle.
Blue your girl must love mexican. she always offers me a couple of blows.
& this extra enchilada difference cuz now she's having multiple O's.
you can't even win in a 1-2.. it's like everything that you touch fail.
& they all know I'm the Haymaker, cuz I box you up and you just bail
if you putting in that much effort bruh that HOF rejection really burn nowQuote:
Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
& Idk why you brag about volume when you're always getting turned down
you took a huge risk calling me out, knowing I'm the goat & you're just practice.
now your rep's so dependent on my failure, I went & claimed it on my taxes.
I'll have you gasping for air.. you're already Blue so it's obvious you're a goner
& I always thought your name was gay, but it truly compliments your persona.
I laughed when u said you're the best. was that jest, or mediocre veteran bluffing?
I mean, u thought your battle with Bar was rock solid & everyone sediment nothing.
you can't even score with the ladies, prolly due to that ugly face when you smile.
in fact I heard the last girl you courted was testifying rape at your trial.
you're a drama queen who eats up attention. so I'ma put you to bed fed.
you think you're a rockstar, but this verse is the only reason you're read dead.
you need that liquid courage to battle. I'm like, I can't believe it this fags boozin.Quote:
Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
next time you knock back a couple pints it'll be cuz you needed a transfusion.
prolly drunk when you challenged me, alcoholism's infringed on your game.
not sure if you're an arrogant bastard or that's just the ale you binged on today.
you drink too much cuz you're a pussy.. it'll kill a coward with prowess
bitch I bet your kidneys you in the nuts if you withhold his allowance.
you're so fucking timid, without the sauce you feel lost & your ego narrow
since you like gun bars, sit down and have couple shots from my single barrel.
you tryin to be net famous.. champ 7 sites, you still ain't gaining fame faster.
at least when I crush your fucking jaw, you'll finally see your face plastered.
you keep talking like you're a legend. I'm just sitting back, enjoyin the fable.
it's true, I've always respected your work.. they obviously employ the disabled.
PM'n me like a friend, asking me to come back so you can guarantee a duel..
my guess is you planned this. which makes it all the more embarrassing for you.
RIP Blue Bayou
2005 - 2019
illiterate Idiot.Quote:
Originally Posted by Blue Bayou via PM
i read this last night and didn't really think of a winner but lets give it a shot here.
blue-
i see you made a comeback just so i could bleed ya friend
that juncture ain't gonna win. ‘at this point’ we wish you'd just leave again
alright open
3/5 = three-fifths. you’ll nod & say yes w/out a disagreement
you know all about Fractions. when you two battled his kicked ya teeth in
didn't love it
you’re dumb as fuck man. barely even makin pennies in fact
i’d call you a halfwit. but AT BEST an eighth of your verse will have any of that
good
i’m mean w/ some wrath. i step in rings & i lead with a jab
i punch like ‘Paki-Ow’. you yell that to greedy when he goes too deep in ur ass
eh this was alright
rolls upon rolls of the green. bitch i'm paid n’ been a threat
the bandwidth is insane. your broke ass can barely pay for internet
kinda predictable not that hard of a hit
currently i’m worth $100,000. honestly the scratch is insane
wrap ur head around ^disfigure. one punch from me is bout to do that to your face
not bad, not great but not bad
nobody’s nodding to your tracks. all this audio is useless bitch
closest u’ve come to Producing A. Bob was making that wack fuckin music vid
ok
running some third rate media company w/ a crappy staff
when it comes to bizarre u gunna succeed?! no. the thought alone is exactly that
this was better put together and a solid punch
get real gramps. stop claiming u got a young bae that’s horny
at best ur getting some ‘old-wives tail’.. & even then its probably a made-up story
chuckle worthy
so wack it’s pathetic. w/ those bars this’ll never be a wrap for Blue
when it comes to ya discontent... well, i cant help but feel sad for you
not bad
one of the best ever?! get real dawg that ploy isn’t tough
ya ‘you'll be getting someones goat’ nomination.. honestly ur annoying as fuck
wasnt feeling this one as much
a fallen “legend” that's about to get laughed from the site
if we say wheelchair issue it’s cuz ur crippled ass is gunna need one after the fight
a bit forced for me but it works
boastin & braggin that you’re quick to finish a chump
okay i admit it Spit, you’re bad ass.. one insult isn't enough
haha liked this one
where’s ur fire gone?! lately u been appalling me dawg
writing like you’ve been ‘checked out’ so long you booked ur first modelling job
decent but not that hard
in the mirror practicing wack pickup lines. you should be ashamed prick
NFL teams running the ball 20 times in a row’s more exciting then ur Game Script
meh
i’ve actually been hit w/ a shell. straight from a mag it’s shitty
& while i know about Shooting Pains.. Spits got em in his joints cuz the fag is sixty
wasn't really feelin it
u’ll never hear me sayin that ya punch has found the mark this time
i’m not one to Gasol Legends up. especially one as old as Pao n’ Marc combined
good
i inherited the title by spitting loco flames hard
Spit’s known for successions too... every Friday night at his local gay bar
lol good wp
ur fake it’s true. a petty never-was that’ll never be a great to Blue
blow your brains out at the California border just to leave ya mindstate in two
decent
i carry twin glocks that pop w/ the most timely a blasts
we'll see Jolene when they both start Singing.. no Dolly & Miley collab
alright at best
i'm proven the best. two in his chest just killed this herb w/ the led
docs’ll yell CLEAR. but the only Corresponding will be a news anchor confirmin he's dead
decent closer
in all a good verse, maybe not as direct with punches but good wp throughout - just tough to really tie them all in 100% of the time and land strong.
spit -
You phony. little. faggot. court's in session, you're pathetic & here's the buzz.
everything you write is fake, so I'm outing ya forgery of our peers to judge.
nice opener, first read felt forced, now reads better
later you'll be like "dope battle Spit".. I'll say fuck off dummy get schooled faster
cuz I'm bringing that supernova heat & there's zero chance that we cool after.
solid
I give props to legends before me. plus I'm grateful for every tourney I'm in.
but when I thank you next, it's for being a grande loser & ensuring my win.
wasnt feeling it
I'm bringing the pain, you should quit text now & I'll let you retire fine.
otherwise bitch, I'll torture career & make it hurt like hell the entire time.
good
stop acting like you're presidential, cuz nobody find that you're suitable.
I still got you running for office tho, where you'll try & hide in your cubicle.
eh
Blue your girl must love mexican. she always offers me a couple of blows.
& this extra enchilada difference cuz now she's having multiple O's.
haha
you can't even win in a 1-2.. it's like everything that you touch fail.
& they all know I'm the Haymaker, cuz I box you up and you just bail
meh
if you putting in that much effort bruh that HOF rejection really burn now
& Idk why you brag about volume when you're always getting turned down
this was good
you took a huge risk calling me out, knowing I'm the goat & you're just practice.
now your rep's so dependent on my failure, I went & claimed it on my taxes.
lol decent flip
I'll have you gasping for air.. you're already Blue so it's obvious you're a goner
& I always thought your name was gay, but it truly compliments your persona
not really feelin this one
I laughed when u said you're the best. was that jest, or mediocre veteran bluffing?
I mean, u thought your battle with Bar was rock solid & everyone sediment nothing.
good complex bar here
you can't even score with the ladies, prolly due to that ugly face when you smile.
in fact I heard the last girl you courted was testifying rape at your trial
again decent but heard this before
you're a drama queen who eats up attention. so I'ma put you to bed fed.
you think you're a rockstar, but this verse is the only reason you're read dead.
not terrible
you need that liquid courage to battle. I'm like, I can't believe it this fags boozin.
next time you knock back a couple pints it'll be cuz you needed a transfusion.
just ok
prolly drunk when you challenged me, alcoholism's infringed on your game.
not sure if you're an arrogant bastard or that's just the ale you binged on today.
lol
you drink too much cuz you're a pussy.. it'll kill a coward with prowess
bitch I bet your kidneys you in the nuts if you withhold his allowance.
eh - purposeless wp here
you're so fucking timid, without the sauce you feel lost & your ego narrow
since you like gun bars, sit down and have couple shots from my single barrel.
not bad
you tryin to be net famous.. champ 7 sites, you still ain't gaining fame faster.
at least when I crush your fucking jaw, you'll finally see your face plastered.
ok
you keep talking like you're a legend. I'm just sitting back, enjoyin the fable.
it's true, I've always respected your work.. they obviously employ the disabled.
wasn't feelin
PM'n me like a friend, asking me to come back so you can guarantee a duel..
my guess is you planned this. which makes it all the more embarrassing for you.
decent closer
overall good verse, some misses for me in there, a little more direct at times with the punches.
Tough to call, Blue had some good wp, some better than others some a bit off, Spit had a few that were a bit forced or didnt work too well too, though. I think in wp Blue did better at connecting them to the punches by a little bit. Spit had a few more direct disses - wit and creativity go to Blue, solid punches maybe close to a tie - both read well no choppy shit - really tough to call this one there were some good lines from both and some crap lines from both - blue was a bit more consistent at least line by line in shit being put together and seems to me some of spits lines that i didnt feel as much was almost less effort or taking the easy way out and just posting a line that made sense rather than hit hard. kinda true for both at times, though. Tough call really.
vote - not sure yet.
@The Real Spit @Blue Bayou vote on 2 battles. Theres atleast that many in fl...I think, ik atleast 1 lol
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Then I'll vote
Fuck your vote bitch you already showing bias in other threads
I merked Blue it's obvious Idgaf about the votes tbh
lmaoooooQuote:
Originally Posted by The Real Spit
The delusion just leans me
Quit fucking crying and saying like an immature child. " I win I dgaf about other pols votes." Typical sore loser.Quote:
Originally Posted by The Real Spit
To be a sore loser you have to lose firstQuote:
Originally Posted by Meks.
And saying idc about the votes isn't the same thing as crying about losing. After all of Blue's behavior it's just not that important to me. Obviously, it was to him, because after I dropped my verse, before a single vote or comment was made, he started behaving like a child.. checking into my champ match in the Haymaker.. makeing up fake quotes about me in his sig.. it's whatever man, it really doesn't matter to me.
I've been doing this long enough to know when I win or lose, if I came up short, I would admit it. I hear what you're saying though I should have left it out of the thread but enough is enough with his BS
He didn't even set the poll with rules.. there wasn't one vote in the the thread, just two votes for him in the poll.. no explanations, nothing. Whatever, doesn't matter.
Why u clogging the thread complaining when his vote was no one lol. The poll bullshit should be taken care of by the mod...if we had one
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And yall still ain't voted on other battles. Me vs KS would be a start
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And yall shoulda did this in LLL as a spotlight battle
lmao
Come over to NC
This was a dope battle.
Blue Bayou - Good verse you have here. The 'Wives Tail' line was dope, a long with more good lines throughout here. You're a dope battler, and it shows. You have good wordplay, and I like your style. Keep this up, man.
Real Spit -
Real nice verse, the sediment line and the kid nuts line was very good. I enjoyed this very much, you had a lot going for you. Nice verse, man.
Overall -
Dope battle, but I thought Spit had the more lines that were quoteable here. Good work, guys.
I couldn't care less about this.
Why is it still up in week one?
I didn't put it hereQuote:
Originally Posted by hello there
Good call tbh I'll move it
I moved it to get more eyes and a winner. It was in FL
Yeah for sure I figured.. just figured now that the leagues back happening it's best to get it out of thereQuote:
Originally Posted by Ronin
@Meks can you finish your vote?
you’re dumb as fuck man. barely even makin pennies in fact
i’d call you a halfwit. but AT BEST an eighth of your verse will have any of that
rolls upon rolls of the green. bitch i'm paid n’ been a threat
the bandwidth is insane. your broke ass can barely pay for internet
running some third rate media company w/ a crappy staff
when it comes to bizarre u gunna succeed?! no. the thought alone is exactly that
get real gramps. stop claiming u got a young bae that’s horny
at best ur getting some ‘old-wives tail’.. & even then its probably a made-up story
where’s ur fire gone?! lately u been appalling me dawg
writing like you’ve been ‘checked out’ so long you booked ur first modelling job
i’ve actually been hit w/ a shell. straight from a mag it’s shitty
& while i know about Shooting Pains.. Spits got em in his joints cuz the fag is sixty
ur fake it’s true. a petty never-was that’ll never be a great to Blue
blow your brains out at the California border just to leave ya mindstate in two
VERSUS>>>>>>
You phony. little. faggot. court's in session, you're pathetic & here's the buzz.
everything you write is fake, so I'm outing ya forgery of our peers to judge.
I'm bringing the pain, you should quit text now & I'll let you retire fine.
otherwise bitch, I'll torture career & make it hurt like hell the entire time.
Blue your girl must love mexican. she always offers me a couple of blows.
& this extra enchilada difference cuz now she's having multiple O's.
you need that liquid courage to battle. I'm like, I can't believe it this fags boozin.
next time you knock back a couple pints it'll be cuz you needed a transfusion.
you're so fucking timid, without the sauce you feel lost & your ego narrow
since you like gun bars, sit down and have couple shots from my single barrel.
So yea man this battle was definitely a good read.. some dope wordplays on both sides and an obvious disdain for eachother seemed to elevate the battle to grandiose proportions. Truly content to have read this without even voting, simply cause we have two very capable artists here that perform at a high level often and have the accolades to prove it, none-the-less I will.
This one came down to the delivery and the more quotables for me. Every bar wasnt hitting on either side but tbh these lines could hold up to or torch most FL opoonents nowadays for sure! What made the difference here imo was that Blue's short bar format vs $pit's regular bar format gave the former's punches the opportunity to hit what seemed like more often or atleast a bit harder consistently throughout. Im honestly much more of a fan of putting relevant words in a lengthy setup rather than Not having a good setup and pushing that punch that wasnt well formulated. Blue however managed to setup nearly all of his short bars well and delivered what was a smoother, slightly more entertaining read.
V/ Bayou
Neither of these provided voting links. I'm closing the thread.