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@plethora @BashEmUP
I'll match w/e pimp g/l
Doctors gotta patch u, revolver split ya skull w/ ease
Leave ya dome wrapped, its almost like he rocks a fkn weave
Miss w/ the heat? I'm trackin' this geek in the range rover
Bobby Bouche, either i wet ur team or im runnin' ur ass over
Send u back to ya bitch in pieces, my tactics gruesome bro
If I slip her some tongue, its gonna be urs in a fkn envelope
He’s suspect forreal, on his knees for free w/ dudes in bunches
Guarantee Suncup more fluids in his mouth than middle school lunches
We dont tango often, let me just say all ur accomps r dawg shit
NEWS FLASH! Why would we respect a record thats 40% Joe Boston?
Thrash ya click, run ya dope & strip u naked...im savage bitch
I’ll snap & take the weight off ya body like before & after pics
MVP of the streets, step on my block & u'll flop hard, facts
Dawg Im goin' Harden shootin' foul if ya arms draw contact
Piss me off & catch the backhand, watch ya chin hit the roof
The contact w/ the left nasty, im the butler from Scary Movie 2
BashEmUp aka OddWays..
BashEmUp/OddWays heaven bound, whichever chosen to die
or you can team up Up & a Way, til both floating in the sky
bout to get 5-0'd in the champ match, bodied in two
swept on the big stage.. indonesian boy bands feel sorry for u
no choking allowed, give up the dub & forfeit now
either cough it up easy or i'll leave you foaming at the mouth
on respirators while family nervous & anxious inside
they're on Pins & Needles, hoping that last ditch effort keeps u alive
chrome split ur dome open to allow some sun on in
let Odd Top See daylight, before coroners perform one on him
unknown before ur LLL run, but i deaded that energy
first u were a Dark Horse, now they pour some out in ur memory
gotta suffer L's before u champ, & sniped at long range
those Groin Pains get u taken out from the lineup, LeBron James
catch you at the crib, guns sparking at this lower tier
see Arms wave at Bash soon as he steps in, nigga party over here
Doctors gotta patch u, revolver split ya skull w/ ease
Leave ya dome wrapped, its almost like he rocks a fkn weave
nah not feelin this
Miss w/ the heat? I'm trackin' this geek in the range rover
Bobby Bouche, either i wet ur team or im runnin' ur ass over
decent, lacking sting
Send u back to ya bitch in pieces, my tactics gruesome bro
If I slip her some tongue, its gonna be urs in a fkn envelope
lol nah
He’s suspect forreal, on his knees for free w/ dudes in bunches
Guarantee Suncup more fluids in his mouth than middle school lunches
decent
We dont tango often, let me just say all ur accomps r dawg shit
NEWS FLASH! Why would we respect a record thats 40% Joe Boston?
nah
Thrash ya click, run ya dope & strip u naked...im savage bitch
I’ll snap & take the weight off ya body like before & after pics
dope
MVP of the streets, step on my block & u'll flop hard, facts
Dawg Im goin' Harden shootin' foul if ya arms draw contact
thats old wordplay, wasn’t feelin the line overall
Piss me off & catch the backhand, watch ya chin hit the roof
The contact w/ the left nasty, im the butler from Scary Movie 2
ok
1 good
1 ok
2 Decent
4 misses
Vs
BashEmUp/OddWays heaven bound, whichever chosen to die
or you can team up Up & a Way, til both floating in the sky
nah
bout to get 5-0'd in the champ match, bodied in two
swept on the big stage.. indonesian boy bands feel sorry for u
def coulda been done better but this is a fresh concept, not bad
no choking allowed, give up the dub & forfeit now
either cough it up easy or i'll leave you foaming at the mouth
no
on respirators while family nervous & anxious inside
they're on Pins & Needles, hoping that last ditch effort keeps u alive
nah
chrome split ur dome open to allow some sun on in
let Odd Top See daylight, before coroners perform one on him
this was cool
unknown before ur LLL run, but i deaded that energy
first u were a Dark Horse, now they pour some out in ur memory
we pour out wine for the dead homies now? Lol nah but I’ll give you the benefit of the doubt. This was ok
gotta suffer L's before u champ, & sniped at long range
those Groin Pains get u taken out from the lineup, LeBron James
decent
catch you at the crib, guns sparking at this lower tier
see Arms wave at Bash soon as he steps in, nigga party over here
played on him, you know that
1 good
2 ok
1 Decent
4 bad
Close battle here, you guys kinda write your lines the same - similar styles. Definitely not the best I’ve seen from you guys but I’m sure you’re both way more focused on the triple L playoffs which is more important of course. But yeah this is a close call, I have plethora edging it.
Vote plethora
Bash -
Doctors gotta patch u, revolver split ya skull w/ ease
Leave ya dome wrapped, its almost like he rocks a fkn weave
lmao..not bad..man..could use some improvements in wording..but okay..
Miss w/ the heat? I'm trackin' this geek in the range rover
Bobby Bouche, either i wet ur team or im runnin' ur ass over
Not too good here..could be better..
Send u back to ya bitch in pieces, my tactics gruesome bro
If I slip her some tongue, its gonna be urs in a fkn envelope
Nice..here..reminded me or some eminem criminal shit..lol..niice.
He’s suspect forreal, on his knees for free w/ dudes in bunches
Guarantee Suncup more fluids in his mouth than middle school lunches
Not bad..but could be better..
We dont tango often, let me just say all ur accomps r dawg shit
NEWS FLASH! Why would we respect a record thats 40% Joe Boston?
Again..needs to be better..
Thrash ya click, run ya dope & strip u naked...im savage bitch
I’ll snap & take the weight off ya body like before & after pics
LOL, niice on here..
MVP of the streets, step on my block & u'll flop hard, facts
Dawg Im goin' Harden shootin' foul if ya arms draw contact
Okay..was decent..i suppose..
Piss me off & catch the backhand, watch ya chin hit the roof
The contact w/ the left nasty, im the butler from Scary Movie 2
lool..cool..
@plethora -
BashEmUp/OddWays heaven bound, whichever chosen to die
or you can team up Up & a Way, til both floating in the sky
LOL,, niice on here..enjoyed the imagery..good..
bout to get 5-0'd in the champ match, bodied in two
swept on the big stage.. indonesian boy bands feel sorry for u
Nah..not too good..
no choking allowed, give up the dub & forfeit now
either cough it up easy or i'll leave you foaming at the mouth
Not bad here..but okay..
on respirators while family nervous & anxious inside
they're on Pins & Needles, hoping that last ditch effort keeps u alive
Niice. you're best bar..
chrome split ur dome open to allow some sun on in
let Odd Top See daylight, before coroners perform one on him
not too bad here..but could be better..
unknown before ur LLL run, but i deaded that energy
first u were a Dark Horse, now they pour some out in ur memory
this was okay..but could be better..
gotta suffer L's before u champ, & sniped at long range
those Groin Pains get u taken out from the lineup, LeBron James
what in the world?..lol..naw, not feeling this..
catch you at the crib, guns sparking at this lower tier
see Arms wave at Bash soon as he steps in, nigga party over here
Not too good..lol..what in the world..?
Overall -
decent battle..but bash was more consistent..i'm giving this to him..imo..
v/ bash
Quote:
Originally Posted by BashEmUP
Both had nice punches and a couple misses. Bash had the before/after and harden lines that I thought were cool but I wasn't the biggest fan of the range rover line or the news line, but on the other side pleth had some bad misses like odd top see and groin pains. Foaming at the mouth line just seemed lazy imo. But both had solid drops. Not either of theirs a-game but still a solid read.Quote:
Originally Posted by plethora
Going bar for bar I have it as
1-Pleth
2-Pleth
3-Bash
4-Bash
5-Toss up
6-Bash
7-Bash
8-Pleth
I think Pleth's misses hurt him a bit here.. Both have def dropped better verses but for an FL match this was good. I'm going w/ Bash for a more consistent verse
v/ Bash
Happy Gday tho @plethora
Big Bash:
opener- nice visuals. kinda light tho. but i fuck w it
waterboy- didnt like this one at all. flat out miss right here imo
slip toungue- ok this was fkn fire
suncup- light
joe boston- nice peronal, and i thought this was pretty dope overall, but i feel like "all u beat was joe boston" lines are played on him
before and after- nice. i fk w it
harden- overall decent, but the harden wp is hella played
closer- lmao those fkn visuals man. this was dope
vs plethore:
opener- nice. off to a good start
swpt- ehh decent enough. i didnt like the reference tbh. i wish youdve taken a different sewpt angle here
foam- this was good. not the typical harhness i usually see from you tho. u def coulda made this a haymaker. as is, its still good tho
pins and needles- i like the concept. but something about it feels light to me. def coulda done ore w this
autopsy- forced wp. i cant give you this, but the overall cocept, i fk w it
dark horse- fire. fuck what zelph talking about. theres a dark horse beer too. this was pretty dope
groin- no. flat out miss imo
closer- lmao this was dope. anything super visual gets my attention. this was fire, for a bash flip
hmmmmm. vote Bash
plethora, idk man. idk if u burnt out or what, but i seen you do way better than this before. the nasty harshness u usually have just wasnt here. but what it came down to was the misses.
Bsh- u had one bar that i absolutely hated.
plth- u had one too, plus that autopsy joint fk'd u up here, imo
bash
Doctors gotta patch u, revolver split ya skull w/ ease
Leave ya dome wrapped, its almost like he rocks a fkn weave
nah, lazy
Miss w/ the heat? I'm trackin' this geek in the range rover
Bobby Bouche, either i wet ur team or im runnin' ur ass over
ok. had potential to be dope, but execution hurt it
Send u back to ya bitch in pieces, my tactics gruesome bro
If I slip her some tongue, its gonna be urs in a fkn envelope
decent enough concept but gruesome bro/envelope? lol nah. this didnt hit
He’s suspect forreal, on his knees for free w/ dudes in bunches
Guarantee Suncup more fluids in his mouth than middle school lunches
cool
We dont tango often, let me just say all ur accomps r dawg shit
NEWS FLASH! Why would we respect a record thats 40% Joe Boston?
nope
Thrash ya click, run ya dope & strip u naked...im savage bitch
I’ll snap & take the weight off ya body like before & after pics
ok
MVP of the streets, step on my block & u'll flop hard, facts
Dawg Im goin' Harden shootin' foul if ya arms draw contact
old + its not one of the better ones
Piss me off & catch the backhand, watch ya chin hit the roof
The contact w/ the left nasty, im the butler from Scary Movie 2
lol whack
1 gd punch
2 jabs
5 misses
vs
pleth
BashEmUp/OddWays heaven bound, whichever chosen to die
or you can team up Up & a Way, til both floating in the sky
ok. creative pts, but soft
bout to get 5-0'd in the champ match, bodied in two
swept on the big stage.. indonesian boy bands feel sorry for u
ironic setup considering the robbery-in-progress lol this was decent tho, dope concept
no choking allowed, give up the dub & forfeit now
either cough it up easy or i'll leave you foaming at the mouth
yikes, no
on respirators while family nervous & anxious inside
they're on Pins & Needles, hoping that last ditch effort keeps u alive
ehh, ok.. just
chrome split ur dome open to allow some sun on in
let Odd Top See daylight, before coroners perform one on him
if this is said aloud in a live battle, it works. i like it, these type of wps test the mind but also they ensure themselves they arent played. risk & reward here IMO
unknown before ur LLL run, but i deaded that energy
first u were a Dark Horse, now they pour some out in ur memory
dope
gotta suffer L's before u champ, & sniped at long range
those Groin Pains get u taken out from the lineup, LeBron James
whack
catch you at the crib, guns sparking at this lower tier
see Arms wave at Bash soon as he steps in, nigga party over here
filler
2 gd punches
3 jabs
3 misses
v/plethora
Send u back to ya bitch in pieces, my tactics gruesome bro
If I slip her some tongue, its gonna be urs in a fkn envelope
Thrash ya click, run ya dope & strip u naked...im savage bitch
I’ll snap & take the weight off ya body like before & after pics
Vs
catch you at the crib, guns sparking at this lower tier
see Arms wave at Bash soon as he steps in, nigga party over here
So yeah I wasn't feeling much from either side. I've seen both drop much better and this seemed almost rushed, but definitely lacked some luster.
V/Bash 2 bars to one. Pleths Dark horse line almost tied it but wouldn't have saved him most likely.
Vs
Send u back to ya bitch in pieces, my tactics gruesome bro
If I slip her some tongue, its gonna be urs in a fkn envelope
He’s suspect forreal, on his knees for free w/ dudes in bunches
Guarantee Suncup more fluids in his mouth than middle school lunches
We dont tango often, let me just say all ur accomps r dawg shit
NEWS FLASH! Why would we respect a record thats 40% Joe Boston?
Thrash ya click, run ya dope & strip u naked...im savage bitch
I’ll snap & take the weight off ya body like before & after pics
vs
bout to get 5-0'd in the champ match, bodied in two
swept on the big stage.. indonesian boy bands feel sorry for u
unknown before ur LLL run, but i deaded that energy
first u were a Dark Horse, now they pour some out in ur memory
catch you at the crib, guns sparking at this lower tier
see Arms wave at Bash soon as he steps in, nigga party over here
It was a couple of bars yall couldve spiced up hear but good spar I feel like one had the better overall material the autopsy was a reach and the opener bar with up and a way was creative and couldve hit heavy with a better concept at its structure .. before and after bar was fire and the part over here bar fire. v/ Bash
@Kill Spree 5-2
Bash wins