structure and wordplay was kinda off, not really a flow with it. but its imagery was on tap. aight peice, think ya could of done better. i aint saying there was nothing bad with this peice but ya could of elevated it. stay up though. peace.
joey
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structure and wordplay was kinda off, not really a flow with it. but its imagery was on tap. aight peice, think ya could of done better. i aint saying there was nothing bad with this peice but ya could of elevated it. stay up though. peace.
joey
yo son ur shyt was hott. need more flow. and stop hatin joey juss keep it real. uno
was a strong piece...just a good 'perspective' and 'viewpoint' like piece....imagery was good...even though the piece did seem to be at times off...but its all good...nice piece...respect..