waddap!

my first impression got em second gessin/
my suggestion, is that u correct n refrane from tryna claim your perfection/
lessons i demonstrate with flaming aggression/
will have u interested in different destinations n changin direction/
feelin pain n depression, mess with lames you stain your perception/
parental discretions advised on my name n collection/
all i need is fame n protection, good aim with a weapon/
to run the city like polititians winning tainted elections/
your just anal rejection, cant even gain an erection/
i entered this game as a virus n became an infection/
like a shameful confession, pressured by an angels profession/
take the lords name in vein, thats a dangerous injection/
my brain is posessed by the cane n maryjane's my obsession/
stressin remains of dead bodies that were slained by my wesson/
wreckin chains, but maintainin connections/
im the same, its clearer, look in the mirror gotta blame the reflection/

I liked it bro, your vocabulary is pretty god and you seem to maintain the same rhyme the whole time, i thought it was pretty hot really. good work man.

yo thanks for the feed bro...i'll be checkin up on ya.

nice topic and wordin',rhymes and consistent subject and all good
but hey,the concept is played man,try creativity

nice work though!peace