Week 7: Killing Spree (2-3) vs Jutebox (1-1) Jutebox wins by NS

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LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules

10 lines
(unless agreed upon by both battlers)

No Bullshit Allowed

MUST CHECK IN BY WEDNESDAY!!

VERSES DUE FRIDAY 11:59 PST

24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent

BATTLES CLOSE SUNDAY

Going 10

Check for 10.

Quick draw..

Kill Spree? Nice name, what are you a punk kid pressing controller buttons?
Need more than twenty-four? Cause' he weak off the head like this soldier got a concussion.
Damn son, when me and this weak willed man done fightin',
I'll put an end to Kill Spree like a civilian w/ a concealed handgun license!
And yo, I see you dickriding - w/ enormity while A.Diction licks your orally.
Knock off kid's shoe like Dorathy, when I stomp out this Admin like I got an issue with authority.
You bore me. I saw your last spit w/ King. I was embarrassed for you, didn't seem like a battle at all.
You looked like a piss stained peasant beatin' his head against a castle wall!
You ain't got a solid spine, Admin on a power trip all the time. The bottom line is,
Everybody look's down on Kill Spree- Your name and your game a shame like some Columbine shit!

@Kill Spree

Kill Spree? Nice name, what are you a punk kid pressing controller buttons?
Need more than twenty-four? Cause' he weak off the head like this soldier got a concussion.
...theres a weak simile here and that's it...
Damn son, when me and this weak willed man done fightin',
I'll put an end to Kill Spree like a civilian w/ a concealed handgun license!
...this is super played....
And yo, I see you dickriding - w/ enormity while A.Diction licks your orally.
Knock off kid's shoe like Dorathy, when I stomp out this Admin like I got an issue with authority.
...decent. no reason to include my name but whatev...
You bore me. I saw your last spit w/ King. I was embarrassed for you, didn't seem like a battle at all.
You looked like a piss stained peasant beatin' his head against a castle wall!
...again a weak simile, I like u tried to tie in king with castle wall tho, try to include more of that...
You ain't got a solid spine, Admin on a power trip all the time. The bottom line is,
Everybody look's down on Kill Spree- Your name and your game a shame like some Columbine shit!
...no. weak simile, set up was good then a let down...

If u worked on some shit u got potential to write some good verses

like I got an issue with authority was fire, the rest was light and i think Kill spree could of won if he showed, fuck that guy LOL.