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LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules
10 lines
(unless agreed upon by both battlers)
No Bullshit Allowed
MUST CHECK IN BY WEDNESDAY!!
VERSES DUE FRIDAY 11:59 PST
24 hour EXT must be granted by opponent
BATTLES CLOSE SUNDAY
Lol ez
you're dead
I'll keep it at 20 if u can write that many
Vs diasick
U delusional, dude confused n rude; insane to clash cuz what u spit is trash...
Claim he smash like brock Lesnar, I'm Velasquez following u around kicking ur ass.
U prob a liberal, literal: they'll hang themselves with enough rope...
Him walk in the room and the climate change? that shit is proven to be a hoax.
Imma hitman, all u drop is shit man; today's the end...
I'll put forensics fam, dig out the bullets...n get away with it again.
Grab his bitch by the hair, she loving it rough...
See ya girl at the gym, she work that coroner gut's getting deez nuts.
U gay as shit, I hate this bitch. Better learn to make a shiv...
Cuz u stuck as an addict, now he gotta rent one for a place to live.
...Go darker than joker....Wear ur face as a mask n ur hair in a bun...
Buffalo Bill this bitch: Fuck Achilles gonna get tortured...and theres no where to run.
Bet u wear pink, shit been girly; ur preferences rattle me...
See u impeachment inquiries have to be launched into ur sexuality.
He white but not privileged, saying he not done...
When I was young, had to hustle n flip phones...ur broke ass still got one.
This administration had been top notch, like in jail waiting for shop....
U the destroyer of rb, that's a reign of fire even Christian Bale couldn't stop.
Lol @ me dr'ing bash, he mid tier; Ur lower still...
Cause the only way u could beat him was voters with little to no skill.
Vs ronnin aka useless, aka a.diction
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Originally Posted by a.diction
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Originally Posted by jutebox
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Originally Posted by A.diction
He tries to mock me with fake shit, bragging about early drops when his style sloppy and basic.Quote:
Originally Posted by A. Diction
It makes sense, he would useless time to think of a concept, when he’ll just copy and paste it.
Your monikers fit you well, you keep talking about your contributions when you’re so useless.
Why u over here begging to mod, when you’re about as reliable as a condom with a hole thru it.
You being a vet is a fake claim, cuz you’re fucking garbage, that’s a fact that I’ll make plane.
You’re trying to make your family proud when being a faggot aint an act, nigga you’re kate kane.
They rigged the league in my favor, it’s an early knock out, so think twice before u challenge me.
If you top floor, I’ll pull up in an el camino, and u’ll see a fuckin dead man fall from the balcony.
You’re acting like I can’t drop 20 lines? Drop in a bucket, you’re actually missing a few more.
Because I think it plays right into my wheelhouse, if rules are bent so I’m dissing you more.
You vote for trash bars like they’re fantastic, it doesn't add up cuz the shit I’m peeping is whack.
Heroin is a helluva drug, if your addiction is getting that bad, bitch you can sleep on your back.
You claim to be creative, and good for the site, acting like circle jerking can help the ratio.
Those are weird fetishes, putting your foot in ya mouth, and stay on ya own dick, like self felatio.
Keying up against me is a bad mistake, why do you think it makes you look nice and stronger?
Half assing is an excuse for being whack, telling us showing effort, will take you twice as longer!
I’m sicker on the mic, it aint going to earn you a mention, just because ur quicker when ya write.
Fuck fake personals, how is a ur bitch bar, gonna work against the uggliest member on the site.
Roasting you is getting old like your whole deal, you have no skills, that’s more than a little flaw.
complaining bout played lines when I can predict your next punch without needing a crystal ball.
@King
open for votes
He white but not privileged, saying he not done...
When I was young, had to hustle n flip phones...ur broke ass still got one.
vs
He tries to mock me with fake shit, bragging about early drops when his style sloppy and basic.
It makes sense, he would useless time to think of a concept, when he’ll just copy and paste it.
guess no more 10 line limit.... those were the best bars IMO... Dia won this with that bar alone... no more 20 lines from either of u though
V- Dia.....
Flip phone line
4 in sick line
The coroner and addict lines had potential
Lots of garbage in this verse tho worded awful, smooth rhymes still, kinda all over the place with it. Definitely is a pain to have to read all this awfulness
Dias whole 20 were directed at a.diction he came with some name flips and executed everything. Nothing epic but alot of 4 out of 5 lines here. Nun fake all real personals
Condom line was nice
Felatio line was executed perfect
Copy n paste line took his head off
Again 20 is a bit much but at least there was structure to dias 20 he stayed on subject n strokes away
Vote dia
bump
Cool battle.. Ronin had the forensics bar which was coolbut i thought worded different could of hit even harder.. Impeachment was ok but mild.. Overall the rest didnt seem worth quoting.. I thought your wording on most was nice tho.. Jad a decent flow thru out but the overall sting on the punches wasnt really there.. Alot of them came off little soft.. As for diasick he had the useless bar which was pretty decent and the kate kane which was okish.. Overall not much from both.. Alot of misses.. If you guys would of dropped 10lines each this would of felt like a better battle.. No hate but vote diasick for slightly harder quotables
it's always cool to read heated battles when dudes establish beef...That being said I was hoping the personals would come out on both sides a bit stronger..still, the battle taking into account the drama in chat threads, didn'y disappoint.. some cool wordplay, some comedic shots, and some obvious disdain..this was a cool showing on both ends for the most part.
U prob a liberal, literal: they'll hang themselves with enough rope...
Him walk in the room and the climate change? that shit is proven to be a hoax.
...Go darker than joker....Wear ur face as a mask n ur hair in a bun...
Buffalo Bill this bitch: Fuck Achilles gonna get tortured...and theres no where to run.
He white but not privileged, saying he not done...
When I was young, had to hustle n flip phones...ur broke ass still got one.
vs
He tries to mock me with fake shit, bragging about early drops when his style sloppy and basic.
It makes sense, he would useless time to think of a concept, when he’ll just copy and paste it.
You being a vet is a fake claim, cuz you’re fucking garbage, that’s a fact that I’ll make plane.
You’re trying to make your family proud when being a faggot aint an act, nigga you’re kate kane.
I’m sicker on the mic, it aint going to earn you a mention, just because ur quicker when ya write.
Fuck fake personals, how is a ur bitch bar, gonna work against the uggliest member on the site.
So yea, i got it bout even in terms of landed bars.. and it's a preference thing after that... Dia's long baar i prefer but it got windy and over worded at times, while Ronin's attempted wordplay and short bar setup-mid bar finish was cool but annoyingly to the point at times.
V/Dia by a small margin..you both did well.
@Bash @Unfukwitable @Cred @Allen Knight @Blue Bayou @King @Zunto @EXalted @Aero @Fresh
U prob a liberal, literal: they'll hang themselves with enough rope...
Him walk in the room and the climate change? that shit is proven to be a hoax.
Imma hitman, all u drop is shit man; today's the end...
I'll put forensics fam, dig out the bullets...n get away with it again.
Grab his bitch by the hair, she loving it rough...
See ya girl at the gym, she work that coroner gut's getting deez nuts.
He white but not privileged, saying he not done...
When I was young, had to hustle n flip phones...ur broke ass still got one.
vs
You being a vet is a fake claim, cuz you’re fucking garbage, that’s a fact that I’ll make plane.
You’re trying to make your family proud when being a faggot aint an act, nigga you’re kate kane.
They rigged the league in my favor, it’s an early knock out, so think twice before u challenge me.
If you top floor, I’ll pull up in an el camino, and u’ll see a fuckin dead man fall from the balcony.
I got more quotes for ronin and it hought his hit harder.
v/ ronin
U part of the prob rn not votingQuote:
Originally Posted by Barcotic
Reserved
Im out at the moment but ill give a thorough vote if still open in the morning