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LLL Season 24
Regular Season Rules
10 lines
(unless agreed upon by both battlers)
No Bullshit Allowed
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VERSES DUE FRIDAY 11:59 PST
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Bro.. Im not writing 16 lines... Shit say 10lines..i havent wrote a verse in 5yrs... You need to edit that shit to 10 bro.. No hate i just dont have time for that shit
S'why u'll never write for the green, w/ quotes like that can yall tell he ready?Quote:
Originally Posted by miracle
You aint bust off in five years? Then U should have blue balls Not a yellow belly!
Coward keep it quiet and leave, snuffin fucks like you is how I became violent
Don't be shocked not to hear'em again, Miranda glock gotta right to remain silent.
He'll be This close to his last breath, as I flatten his chest like a sports bra
I'll beat u within an inch of your life, Mir I think yu just drew the short straw!
Back from hiatis wit new rules.. Cole makin them kinda demands'll get u shot
How could you be so insistent on the windows, can't tell if I got a fullclip or not?
The mag reads like a toss up, well u better shogun damn you cuz im skeptical
Naw Im just samurai got honor to fight for, n I wish dude would commit Seppuku!
10
@miracle 10 it is
Glad u are going 10, And im not trying to get a thank u from people that vote
I just couldnt fucking imaging having to read 16lines that you wrote
we can freestyle bar 4 bar..go ahead, spit them rhymes coming out your head
but the second you pull a blankets, over like scared kids in bed
2 guns in my fists i''ll unload clips..you don't wanna die? I bet
With both sides i'm pulling, and you will die from this magnet
His wife is a slut, So going home is something he dreads
guy's showing up outta no where to get IN that bitch more than week 7 sign up threads
You won our 3way fight in 1-2.. For voters It was a close race
But if any1's on the fence in this battle it's to see me stomping your face
S'why u'll never write for the green, w/ quotes like that can yall tell he ready?
You aint bust off in five years? Then U should have blue balls Not a yellow belly!
He'll be This close to his last breath, as I flatten his chest like a sports bra
I'll beat u within an inch of your life, Mir I think yu just drew the short straw!
vs
we can freestyle bar 4 bar..go ahead, spit them rhymes coming out your head
but the second you pull a blankets, over like scared kids in bed
those are the best bar from both for me...
V- Net ….I can notice subtle improvements to ur approaches...
bump, brb with vote
networth
Coward keep it quiet and leave, snuffin fucks like you is how I became violent
Don't be shocked not to hear'em again, Miranda glock gotta right to remain silent.
vs
mirical
Glad u are going 10, And im not trying to get a thank u from people that vote
I just couldnt fucking imaging having to read 16lines that you wrote
You won our 3way fight in 1-2.. For voters It was a close race
But if any1's on the fence in this battle it's to see me stomping your face
basically it comes down to these bars for me, I got networth having the miranda bar and stomping your face, and 16 lines that you wrote goes to mir, I feel myrical was going for networth's throat more than he was going at myrical, I mean he has the personal about networth wanting to do 16 lines, and basically saying networth wasn't worth that, it could of been a viscous punch to, but it did what it needed to win IMO. I got myrical edging this.
V/myrical
I got it smack deadeven 3-3
Sports bra
Miranda
Quote punch
Vs
Opener
Fence and
the week 7 punch made me smile nice way to add humor
There were some misses and some filler in both, I got it smack even, I'm yelling tie
Vote-draw
S'why u'll never write for the green, w/ quotes like that can yall tell he ready?
You aint bust off in five years? Then U should have blue balls Not a yellow belly!
Coward keep it quiet and leave, snuffin fucks like you is how I became violent
Don't be shocked not to hear'em again, Miranda glock gotta right to remain silent.
vs
we can freestyle bar 4 bar..go ahead, spit them rhymes coming out your head
but the second you pull a blankets, over like scared kids in bed
2 guns in my fists i''ll unload clips..you don't wanna die? I bet
With both sides i'm pulling, and you will die from this magnet
i got it even in quotes but i think nets yellow belly line was a nice personal attack and lotb so hes gonna get my vote
v/ networth
S'why u'll never write for the green, w/ quotes like that can yall tell he ready?
You aint bust off in five years? Then U should have blue balls Not a yellow belly!
...good concept even tho it was obv after reading the quote, not a fan of the delivery and wording. Decent....
Coward keep it quiet and leave, snuffin fucks like you is how I became violent
Don't be shocked not to hear'em again, Miranda glock gotta right to remain silent.
...its miranda rights but I'll over look that even tho u coulda worded it to include rights. How does a glock have the right to remain silent? It has the ability not the right. This coulda been nice but as is its aite...
The mag reads like a toss up, well u better shogun damn you cuz im skeptical
Naw Im just samurai got honor to fight for, n I wish dude would commit Seppuku!
...good idea delivered poorly....
Vs
Glad u are going 10, And im not trying to get a thank u from people that vote
I just couldnt fucking imaging having to read 16lines that you wrote
...well written but to obv...
we can freestyle bar 4 bar..go ahead, spit them rhymes coming out your head
but the second you pull a blankets, over like scared kids in bed
...cool...
2 guns in my fists i''ll unload clips..you don't wanna die? I bet
With both sides i'm pulling, and you will die from this magnet
...worded odd but it hit, felt u coulda done more with it tho...
His wife is a slut, So going home is something he dreads
guy's showing up outta no where to get IN that bitch more than week 7 sign up threads
...decent....
You won our 3way fight in 1-2.. For voters It was a close race
But if any1's on the fence in this battle it's to see me stomping your face
...lol cool...
Overall this battle was better than expected, I can tell yall elevating and taking suggestions and implementing them. Keep writing you'll keep getting better.
This was a close battle both were consistent which is the first thing I look at, miracle had one or two solid connections tho whereas net stayed in the decent area. Miracles verse was a smoother more enjoyable read. Good battle
V. Murr
3-3 bump