ditto^Originally Posted by SmokaJoka666
ditto^
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To Be Completely Honest, And Harsh . . . I Thought It Sucked ..
Learn Not To Force Multies, Flow Was Blah Due To The Stretched Bars . . The Concept Of It Was Cool But It's Been Done A Million Times, And Each "Member Group" Has Been Portrayed So Differently Each Time, It's All A Matter Of Opinion On "What The Member Group Is Like"
Lyrics Were Bland, Nothing Really Stuck Out To Me And Said, Wow That's Dope ..
Work On It A Little Bit, You Have Potential, I Guess..
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very good concept..thats what attracted me to read it in the first place
was pretty good...
maybe could have been done a bit better from certain aspects
i liked how you personalised each verse...worked well
and actually seemed like a first person experience
props
fin
You need Ghost Dog in your DVD collection
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it's a bold statement - the new youtube
wow fgee is back...that's good to know....and i kinda expected that from Cyph or someone of that nature...oh yeah...IJL hasnt been at RB for 3 years.....we've been at RB for about 8 months...
peace
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one more up wouldnt hurt
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This shit was dope, really accurate perception of the site through everybodies point of view. You're rhymes and flow was perfect, vocab was ok for the content. NOthing wrong with this at all. Told a decent story too...I felt this alot, just don't have all the time in the world for a huge reply.u know what I thought about it anyway
peace
I.J.L.
this was a great piece you put together here smoka..
I also was trying to figure out in which of these categories I belonged in..
..and the things u said up as far as I am.. in some way or another have been exactly accurate and true..
this was an amazing piece.. the content of it and meaning behind it
I loved every bit of it.. and the way u put it together
dope. peace
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nominate it for hall of fame this month
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this was a very nice piece man......it was long as fuck lol but nice and well worth the read.....the topic was good and extremely true..crisp flow...some nice multies and vocab usage was good...but i liked the story u told through out this piece and how u said what u wanted to say....thats what made this piece a good read....this is definately a good verse man really liking it seriously
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