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    How I Got My Name (Rap Epic)

    How I Got My Name- The Rap Epic

    It was a cold night, 3rd day of June, maybe around dusk
    Lust was present, ever present, as I slowly collected dust
    Been in this seat for 11 hours, or maybe it was minutes
    I haven't did it, maybe dent it, fuck life, we only rent it
    But that's the truth......

    So allow my to relate to you my own little fairy tale
    Of how I came in grips with my own name myself
    I was hopping through a graveyard, as few ever do
    With an axe-handle, because, well I was scared too
    A dare, it started to be, but i felt shadows creeping
    But I'm a man, so I got pissed instead of just weeping
    And like men do, I spun to my right like I was Rambo
    Got struck like Ron Gold, and screamed out like J-Lo
    It was me, but it wasn't, a crued reflection of my body
    His skin was ash colored, hallowed eyes, kinda soggy
    Looked like me in another world, circles around his eyes
    "Oh sweet Jesus, am I mad.. or have I already died ?"
    "Nah man don't sweat it guy," Came his swift reply
    He pulled a deck from the mirror, and sat with a sigh
    "You have a smoke on you ?" that was his question
    But all he heard was "fuck it" and was left guessin
    I ran through gardens of stone, throwin heartless
    With my chest tighter then my dead uncle's carcuss
    To this day I still don't know who was laughin
    Of course who would, in a situation that happened..

    tic toc tic toc
    The mouse ran up the clock
    tic toc tic toc
    tic toc tic toc
    tic toc tic toc
    tic toc...

    I must have ran for hours, but is seemed like it was weeks
    My arms were getting heavy, and my legs were growin weak
    I tried to speak, then the whole world started to crumble
    I fell, seemed like for weeks, then i hit dirt with a rumble
    Climbed to my feet, peered around, and started talkin riddles
    and all in all the world as it was seemed dead, cold, and brittle
    I looked around, shocked at first as what didn't seem earth
    Until a man grew from the rubble, and climbed from the dirt
    He was at least 6'3", carrying a stick, and covered in a black sheet
    Hallowed voice, endless eyes, mythology the God of Sleep
    "Come into my parlor," said this spider to my own eyes
    I was his fly, and followed like a kid in an assorted lunch line
    No, fuck this, I picked up a bone that scattered his home
    Threw a blow to his head, and ran as quick as I had flown
    But before I made it out, hands grabbed at my feet
    Pulled me to my knees to bow at the gremlin's teeth
    I kicked and screamed, but Death had caught me finally
    He pulled open my eyelid and climbed inside of me
    "I am you, you are I. Forever into each other"
    "We are one. You are two. Like sick simese brothers"
    "One mind. Two beings. A third and it's too much."
    "Plethora." is the last word I heard before I woke up....

    tic toc tic toc
    Your veins become my river
    tic toc tic toc
    Kingdoms slowly collapse
    tic toc tic toc
    I'll sail on my lonely vessel
    tic toc tic toc
    On the blood of your relapse

    Plethora.... a saint, sinner, virgin, and a whore
    Plethora.. I wrote it in blood on the asylum floor
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    you have a good a imagination. it shows well in the imagery of this. Dope

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    pretty good story telling..
    it was easy to read...didnt want to stop at any time
    the first verse was a slower pace than the second..and then it picked up rapidly in thwe latter stages

    'I kicked and screamed, but Death had caught me finally
    He pulled open my eyelid and climbed inside of me
    ^dope lines
    and the lines after that were nice as well

    ' looked around, shocked at first as what didn't seem earth
    Until a man grew from the rubble, and climbed from the dirt
    that caught my eye as well..got a dope image from that

    wasnt too sure of what the tic tocs represented and their relevance...obviously something to do with time but i wasnt sure
    well it kept me entertained as a reader which is what it should do
    could have done with a few more multies perhaps but the word usage and images kept it ticking along
    props

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    You need to leave a link to a reply that you left on another open mic or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...70#post1319670

    There's my reply you great mod^

    Thanks for the feedback fgee it is very much appreciated. I always enjoy your feed on a piece I drop. Ace of Aces thanks.
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