10 lines
house rules
due midnight tomorrow...
10 lines
house rules
due midnight tomorrow...
Inizzle........................................... .......................
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bxp is scared to drop, been online this whole time
dudes leavin the crowd silent like they were mimes
he has no dope lines, i'll never fear bxp
like first born computers....he cant burn cds!
dude has no battles, scared to put this in
like everyone else i beat, he'll feel chagrin!
came in unconfident, 7 wins is what his rec holds
knew he's takin a loss, so he put me on top of the polls
dudes new to the site, and he's also new to the game
and like his crew intials, hes a TeeNaged Lame
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No time for tricks I know this Kid is a Joke..time will tell
Like his crew name I started where he Left off with an…L(oss)*
Like Gotham City..Wheres Batman? cause the Circus is in town
shove red noses up your hole so your ass is really Clownin around
But Jug is whack his birth has somethin to do with astrology
His mom gave birth to his whack ass he owes the world an apology
His skillz are old throw him out back with the rest of the pigs
Nobody likes him....Fatjoe doesnt even want to be in his Sig**
Im leavin this clown crushed but all shit needs to be flushed
He moved out to the MidWest but hes way late For the Gold Rush***
*I.J.L is his crew..Insane Joker Lyricsts
**Doesn't it look like fatjoe doesnt want to be in his sig?
***Hes from the Midwest
mistake..on the fifth line..
But Jug is whack his birth has somethin to do with astrology
His mom gave birth to his whack ass she owes the world an apology
Jug- your shit wasnt that good man, your flow was alright and your structure was good, but damn wtf were you thinkin throwin up punhces like that man..they were not even direct, and your personals were not that good either..overall good job on everythin except punches and personals
BXP- good verse from you man, nothin to boast about but good job.. your flow and structure was fine, and you did attempt personals and punches that were good, basically the line that you said about his sig(the fatjoe line) took this for you man, cause all you needed was one personal or punch that hit and that did it..
V/BXP
return the favor and hit up one of the battles in my sig
Jug- your verse was nice I liked how it flowed but i dont think it was enough. Only punch that was creative was "came in unconfident, 7 wins is what his rec holds
knew he's takin a loss, so he put me on top of the polls" that line was good and i feltl ike that was the only Great part in your verse.
BXP- nice man, strong opener and everything. you just came with non stop punches. Pretty good personals too, Made me laugh a couple of times. Though I thought your closer was a little cheesy the rest of your verse did it for ya.
Good job both of ya.
Vote= B.X.P
......................IF yall could please check out one of my battles I would really appreciate it..........................THanx.............
return the favor please, and hit up a battle in my sig..................
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