L.C.R:IC
Welcome To Ic's New Collaboration
I'm Afraid Ur About To Battle The Best Rapper In The Nation
selfglorifacation not into that
When This Battles Done It Will Be Ur Biggest Resentment
Ur Bout To Be Murdered I Dnt Follow The Any Amendments
2nd line slightly nonsensical but ok...
After This U And Ur Lines Will Be Completely Demolished
My Dad Probly Rhymes Better Then U And Hes An Alcoholic
lol ok slap
Best Study This Battle It Would Be A Good Conemplation
All Thats Goin Through My Mins Id Total Annhialation
mm ok i guess
Now I Dnt Wanna Run Ouut Of Lines So Ima Have To Cut It Short
U Should Give Up Rappin Dog
Its Just Not Ur Sport
closer a bit weak but works ok
pyromaniac
u outta place here at RnB like pots and pans outside da kitchen/
cause ya punches like kids that aint been home they fuckin missing/
lol like this good punch
while my rhymes hotter then a 1-800 sex line/
i bet u,bruise ya virtabrae and break u like dishes/
mm okish punch like it but not too strong
hit u wit da buscuit it rupture disces shit as a kid my role model was sid visious/
while ya candy ass probably taste magically delisous/
first line seemed a little stretched but other than that ok
like lucky charms, but u fucking wit a kid wit a mind like a time bomb/
u could forget a truce when i see u i'm a rock u in da jaw fuck a tooth i'm a knock ya fucking face loose/
like the rythm of the 2nd line works well!!
While i'm gone tell the truth i dont know if u a girl or a bitch but i know u ain ready to fuck wit who u dealin wit/
like your closer nice and strong
so there you go a few of my opinions on your battle.L.C.R:IC you've got the vocab but that's not what it's all about just finding large words that rhyme or work together you got a couple of funnies, but selfglorifacation doesn't work if you can't back it up....pyromaniac flow and structure was good, thought some of your lines worked really really well.
vote : pyromaniac
