battle noob

[mcl]

16 bars

[Alcoholocaust]

yo!!!!!!!!!
ok spit first homie im goin to go watch 8 mile for insparation

[mcl]

8mile for inspiration
i get my inspiration from ya bitch when she gets that sensation
ur a bitch about to be slapped
a fucking homo about to be macked
u say ur a noob with posts like that
u must be on here all the time, a real spiolt brat
or u a nosey motherfucker
a dick rider a weird dick sucker
i dont need inspiration im ready to battle whenever
ur about as good as englands wether
maybe sometimes you have good days
not good spits, but embrassing sprays
iv seen ur lyrics on the other pages
getting with lil kids, by making up ages
u cant handle these g unit sneakers
u get scared when u hear me on the speakers

[Alcoholocaust]

yo ok good spit homie! lets see


wordplays non-existent..your fuckin diction is a nightmare
but I'll try to think like an idiot, so we can call this fight fair
see I'm not one to call this kid a retard or a fool..
but he doesn't just spit man, he dribbles and drools..
"blah blah"..'s all you do, I'll leave you holy for babblin'
when i take your fuckin soul n spirit with a javelin
i'm dressed for success but kid's stressed whenever he raps
's why i'm breaking his fat shins n swinging bats at his kneecaps
i'll tie this fuck to a steak n whip him till dawn
until i turn his scrawny ass into a flay mignon
see i can come played as fuck, lame, wack n still win
like 40 pound bookbags breakin the backs of children
i bullshited you haha blah blah you got the worst timin'
kid's never seen a pussy n not even close, tour hymen
even my fillers iller than your shit, you're hard for me to knock when
you're nobody's fool, but then again, there's always adoption

yo OMG good batleee duide? drop your verse ok or waz tat your verse!!!

[Alcoholocaust]

omg utping the battke!

[Alphabetized]

EASY..

Hands of god gets this for better flow, harder punches
a better structure, actually had a metaphore and was
a lot more enjoyable to read.
Mcl lots of your stuff was elementary you gotta really elevate
both of you didnt come really hard but its still lopsided

v/ hands of good for everything i just said...

[Alcoholocaust]

werd home e! up in

[Alcoholocaust]

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[verbalviolence]

This battle sucks.

[Alcoholocaust]

wtf go away split personality

[Airforces]

ll hey mcl battle me.....this is funny shit,,.,,hand ur messed up! lol picking on newbs

[~Mike Macs~]

8mile for inspiration
i get my inspiration from ya bitch when she gets that sensation
ur a bitch about to be slapped
a fucking homo about to be macked
u say ur a noob with posts like that

That was dull same old punch lines, dumass not makin sense rhymes too, and ya need to reword most of that shit different.

[Alcoholocaust]

ll hey mcl battle me.....this is funny shit,,.,,hand ur messed up! lol picking on newbs

lol i get a stiffie every time i smack herbs