ill style

[Sawed-Off]

digging up a mutha fucking grave
so be afraid, it's too late
this is your fate, i got my glock
to blow off your mutha fuckin block
all over the spot, now you drop
your bodies falls, standing tall
with my back towards the wall
you'll be sure to make a downfall
in your life, i got my steakknife
driving it threw your fucking windpipe
do what's right, you die tonight
put up a fight, put up your fists
lil bitch, catch throat slits
blood spills, feel the chills
i do crimes for the big bills
pop a couple pills, o.d
now your a dead o.g, from the slums
i got my gun
one shot and your mutha fucking done!

[Sawed-Off]

yeah yeah check it out

[TwixSin]

not great at all... try to read some other om's to learn to add some complextiy because its not on audio people can't just bust 50 style rhymes and expect people to like them... you gotta go deeper dude...

but keep trying :P.

[Shunned1]

^^^thats real.....throw some more vocab up in it...and get a lil more creative wit ur verse...wasn't feelin it to much....but keep practicin

[Zone]

wow no hate homie but that was that was horrrible
the vocab was not good, you should try to throw in sum mulites
work on your flow a WHOLE lot more
and make the verse longer
but i think that if you elevate you could be decent OM rappa
juss work on vocab and flow
OVERALL- 3/10

[Johnny 6-feet]

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