paul england vs. King Cobra

[King Cobra]

10 lines
blind spit
due 2morrow
300 posts 2 vote

[I Got Pwnd]

Is this serious?....Really.

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.werd

[paul england]

check see ye 2 morow

[King Cobra]

check. drop 2morrow

[paul england]

king cobra your a baby snake, thats all you do is bite
the rest of the shit you write is total fucking shite
everytime you drop a line we know ye not a king
gold plated corny rings, thats what you wear as bling
it's amazing how you drop a rap without no legs or arms
you'd make more on the corner selling ye ass crack 4 dimes
ye bitch she squeals in bed, so I had 2 fucking gag er
she said you was a G but I said your just a blagger
your not even a fucking snake theres no venom in ye crap
I ye bitch is in love,(why)cos I had her leaking like a tap

[King Cobra]

yo ur career in rap came 2 an abrupt halt when ur were 0 and 5,
now ur like 0-17 Pfft.....ur like and RB crew from yesturday 2day u jus died,
son ur punches are where ur From.................no were,
cuz ur verse is like a deer in the headlights.........bored stare,
for a guy that has 2 L's in his name literally is carring 2 many,
bascially ur battles are like south park episdoes and u be playing.......kenny,
ur are not even close 2 satisfactory work but shows effort on ur bars,
dissin u is like fillin out a special ed kid's...........report card,
shit wack fuck battlin u flow is like a broken lock door........jam,
and if ur from england how come ur punches never.........ehh(eng) land,

[Smoka Joka]

not even funny king croba complete merkage

[King Cobra]

up.1 g'l

[Smoka Joka]

shit i don't have enough post my bad

[b_rEEz]

Alrite....King had nice personalz...nice punches, an overall consistant flow....the rhyme scheme and everything was amazing, blah...nothin really, i know you can still elevate nigga, but its all good

Paul man, your elevatin nigga, i see it, your punches are commin thru more, also fix your structure, and try and throw in personalz...and when ya do...throw in bold letters to make the personalz stand out....just some advice, i know ya wont take it tho...decent verse tho meng..

v/ Kobra overall consistant verse

[paul england]

cheers breez you r comitted i'll give ye that

uppin 1

[paul england]

uppin 2

[King Cobra]

2 up

[Tae Profit]

paul stepped it up, but still not nice

paul/structure
cobra/everything else

v/cobra

[Tae Profit]

damn, didnt see the 300, my bad...................