The Hidden Diaries:Demonic Seeds

[P. Mortuus]

i liked the 1st part better than the 2nd......u're a true artist....keep rhymin.if i had 2 rate this id give it 9.5/10. holla!

Thanks dog, i actually spent 2 days writing and correcting this, usually i only spen 40 minutes on my rhymes, so it's quite encouraging seeing my hard work being paid off in appreciation

[DonOwnsYou]

Deep...Sick.

Keep it up.

[EyeCandy]

imaginery was dope, flow was good all tha way... vocabulary was perfect..
fa real u got talent hun.. keep @ it...

[P. Mortuus]

Thanks Laydee, preciate it

[EyeCandy]

Thanks Laydee, preciate it

itz aiite hun.. 1

[GrimmyReaps]

dog that shit was deep as hell kind of crazy but it made sense that was deep i liked it

[P. Mortuus]

Thanks ma dog, preciate ya takin time and leavin' feed

[mastercopy]

i thought it was good. I definitley can see the emotio in it
You keep knoccin on the devils door long enough, somebody gon answer . .

Just in response to that dont knock on deaths door ring the doorbell and run I dont think he likes that lol

[Automatic.]

this was pretty good. The vocab was straight, the topic was pretty good too, but played. You did a good job on the topic, though, I felt it. The length was perfect, not too long, not too short. The flow was good, but the vocab is what really took the show here. Keep it up.

[P. Mortuus]

Yeah thanks, preciate the feed

[~mcbigll~]

aight pak this was sick...really good flow nice vocab,i could imagine it,it was really tight...keep up like this

[P. Mortuus]

Lol ,yeah thanks big, i quite prefer this style myself cept i just have ta spend more time making the rhymes

[P. Mortuus]

i thought it was good. I definitley can see the emotio in it
You keep knoccin on the devils door long enough, somebody gon answer . .

Just in response to that dont knock on deaths door ring the doorbell and run I dont think he likes that lol

Lol, yeah word

[T Marcell]

say thats nice you on that kanye west shit dude keep it up.

[U.N.T.O.L.D]

This is a nice piece and a nice read. It was very imagenery and portryed well thru wrds. Wrdplay was nice and ryhmes were aight Didnt rely c much sylable rhymin or multis but its all gd. It a nice piece, i always seem to write so it sounds gd spitten i culdnt rely spit this, but mayb it jst coz it aint my piece. Neway nice drop bro 8.5/10 probs.

Thnx for chekin mine

Peace