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Thread: Time 2 Die (MUST READ!!!)

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    Time 2 Die (MUST READ!!!)

    i talk to da almighty lord as i look upon the sky
    slowly i start to Vigilize the day i die
    walkin up the street, i suddenly feel bullets bombin' my chest
    then i hear his safety click, no more bullets left
    rushin' to the hostipal. 187 they gotta the catch criminal
    my father screamin as i die "who shot at you"
    i can feel the pressure on my chest as i try to breathe
    i can see god's light, finally its time to leave
    thinkin' back on the sins i committed
    catching innocent lil jooks cuz to cop a fitted
    masterminding dope deals & robberys
    even tho im surrounded by people im always alone it doesnt bother me
    to see, this corrupted society, & how people think
    Get Rich Or Die Tryin' like 50 thats my Mentalty
    as i think back sum more, saying i was bad n i always negative
    but im real to myself so i neva got on my knees & beg
    i juss try to hustle to make it back on my bed
    while im sleepin' tru happiness feels my head
    when im a wake & im alive
    i think to my self "shit another day i gotta try to survive"
    i rather juss die and get it ova with
    i got nuttin else to live for after i lost my "first kiss"
    srry i couldnt live as an angel, i had to be a demon see
    Fuck All Yall Only God Can Judge Me

    Lord lemme Live. i Dont Wanna Die
    in the event of my demise, gotta cross on my side
    tears coming down my eyes i guess its time to die

    damn the pearly gates are really that beautiful, its a sight to see
    hopefully, god will gimme the ability to enter his kindom, possiblity
    or im heading down to hell, where Darkness Compales
    cant even see ur shadow, its like god has ur soul on sell
    cross the river of death, Livin' Dante's Inferno
    up in the hood, ur snitch iz fuckin' ur silly hoe
    neva did i wanna go, neva did i wanna die slow
    i juss wanted to enter god's hands, n juss do me wit my sick flow
    people will neva understand when its there time to die
    people will always question u lord, but i always have u by my side

    Lord lemme Live. i Dont Wanna Die
    in the event of my demise, gotta cross on my side
    tears coming down my eyes i guess its time to die
    Last edited by Dark_Shadow; April 9th, 2006 at 12:25 PM

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    yo0oo this was excellent wordplay vocab, and ghetto wordplay ha.... structure was hot vivid imagery... was really feelin this piece the title grabbed even though it said (MUST READ) hahaha :ROFL: keep it up.... oh thanks for leavin feed on Rest In Peace good looks pa

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    no problem ma, that was you that wrote that?

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    yeah this ma alias nynena <<~~~ yupperz..

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    u from Bronx.... me too 161st and concourse...

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    Yea ma i kno who u r u kno me too...its Saint Jerzey ma

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    lol ha.... hmmm long time no call whore lemme stop freepostin in ya thread... pm me daddy

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    lol ok baby hol up

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    not bad.but try and work on ur composure,time of delivery and shit.good piece though
    keep it up.peace

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    2 things, 1) post both links in either your thread start or your first reply next time and 2) don't rate stuff out of /10. Since you bothered to make the effort to give decent replies this stays open but stick to the rules next time mate.

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    ^ok thnx rize.

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    Yo uppin this...

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    dam this had a lil length to it namean but good shit you dropped
    i wa sfeelin this bra you brought out the subject pretty well emotion was good there you had a good flow to the verse
    vocab wasnt too original from start to finish oyu brought out the subject well from many angles namean
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