10 lines
due in 20,
blindspit
no hate votes.
10 lines
due in 20,
blindspit
no hate votes.
check.
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
Last time i saw your custom title it said "is back".
But i don't remember you leaving......................
....................And i don't really care cuz ur wack.
With you in the family ya'll probably get divorced.
Because no way you can flow...........................
..................................except when it is forced.
Nice avatar bitch, i see your into the fuckin Trix
But before you supposevely left......................
........................your specialty was suckin dicks
that's his only skills besides lyrically spittin shit
this dude calls himself mystique....................
...............that rappers too good for you bitch
take "mystique's" advice and fuckin "watch youself"
Kids skills are so small kid could be considered an elf
Nice avatar bitch, i see your into the fuckin Trix
But before you supposevely left......................
........................your specialty was suckin dicks
he had a that trix bunny as an avatar a few mins ago.
'I Squeeze-Shotz an watch yuh Kneez-Pop, N I leave yuh Feindz-Hot'
'Cuz yuh fake, Yuh could `Watch a Jadakiss video` n still no see `D-Block`'
'Yuh Man-In-Rotation, Bulletz like `Jetz` how they `Land-In-Yuh BaseKid`'
'An ~yo~ wit gunz, Yuh not `clappin at me` wit `Stan-Din-Ovations`'
'Ima straight Hound-Wit-Rap-Werds, N Im known tuh Pound-You-Bas-Tards'
'An tha way I leave ya wit `3-2-1` yuh think hes `Count-In-Back-Wards`'
'Werdz is sicc, I take yuh set, Like `broken computers` how yuh `Click-Gets-Mamed`'
'Cuh I `Spread Death` when I put more `Eagles on yuh body` than `Dip-Sets-Chain`'
'My Words 'Wore-His-Text' An The Roarin-Tecs Rip An Have Pourin-Necks '
'An Now Im 'Sourin-West' To Grab The 'Hatchet' An Go For 'The Organs-Next'
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
uppin # 1 for votes.
uppin # 2.
good battle two completely different styles going at it here which is what i like to see.
yo- you had a great structure and flow was on point, i liked the personals in it and i think wordplay played a decent part in your verse, i think you might have been able to up the vocab of the rhymes but you still had a lot of power.
mc- you had so great wordplay going on, however i don't like it at all when words are spliut up with dashes and quotes and all that jazz, if your readers don't get, they still arn't gonna get it with all that. back to the punches you hit hard and left some bruises but i just didn't think you had enought to over power his personals
v/ yo
I EMBRACED THE DARK SIDE WHEN YOU STOLE MY SON
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
With you in the family ya'll probably get divorced.
Because no way you can flow...........................
..................................except when it is forced.
vs
'Ima straight Hound-Wit-Rap-Werds, N Im known tuh Pound-You-Bas-Tards'
'An tha way I leave ya wit `3-2-1` yuh think hes `Count-In-Back-Wards`'
o ok..yal both my homies...
yo-nice vocab and low..your strucure was good to me..
not bad wordplay..keep it up..you came strong on the
begining and the end......nice shit
mc mystique......not a bad verse..good mettas and multies.
good ryhme...good shit.....you came a lil weak toward the end tho
no beef.. ot hate
v.yo....by a hair
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
uppin # 3 leave links.
that's his only skills besides lyrically spittin shit
this dude calls himself mystique....................
...............that rappers too good for you bitch
vs.
'Werdz is sicc, I take yuh set, Like `broken computers` how yuh `Click-Gets-Mamed`'
'Cuh I `Spread Death` when I put more `Eagles on yuh body` than `Dip-Sets-Chain`
but... mc mystique takes it due to having an attempt at creativity...
this is how it goes:
multies: mc mystique
structure: yo
didnt hurt my eyes with their verse: yo
punches: mc mystique
creativity: mc mystique
overall: mc mystique
yo ur punches were just not hard hitting.. i wasnt really feelin any of them except for that one line..
v/mc mystique
peace
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-Eminem
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