Force vs. Nicotine

[Nicotine]

5 bars
due in 1 hour after check

goodluck

[Nicotine]

check............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................

[Force.]

fo sho yo..check......................................... .................................................. ..............................................

[Force.]

yo i rip dis cat/
And flip his scripts/
You about as hard as a dog witout a dick!/
Whoa whoa whoa...haha you thought i was a noob kid..shit.
Change your name...
Cuz people never wanna read your verses again after they peep it.
Word i read your shit......................and your straight garbage kid.
Your probley the only thing about ciggs that make niggas go impotent.
I dont even gotta try...& yet ill still walk away with a win.
And hes fire..now ima throw him down and step on this bitch.

[Nicotine]

what make you think you better than these other fools
you as fake as all yah damn jewels
you get scared when I shoot you that glare
Ill embarrass you worse than a stain in yah underware
you aint got a cd worth lisyenin to so dont even spin it
you wish you were a b-ball hoop cause balls are always in it.
yah probably got a fine ass girl but dont be a boaster
tha bitch has been rode more times than a rollercoaster
its been fun battlin its almost like a trek
you thought gettin ass was gettin a part on Shrek

[Force.]

yo shizz waz fiyah fo realzzzz anywayzz uppz yo................................................ .................................................. .....

[Young blazer]

kk breakdown

Multies - neither
punches - nicotine
complexity - pssh neither
personals-neither
flow- nicotine

basically you need to add loads more to your pieces like multies and personals to make the punch harder no a bad battle for rookies

[HighTimes]

yo i rip dis cat/
And flip his scripts/
You about as hard as a dog witout a dick!/
^^fire!! lols jkin..weak
Whoa whoa whoa...haha you thought i was a noob kid..shit.
Change your name...
Cuz people never wanna read your verses again after they peep it.
LOL
Word i read your shit......................and your straight garbage kid.
Your probley the only thing about ciggs that make niggas go impotent.
ehh wack
I dont even gotta try...& yet ill still walk away with a win.
And hes fire..now ima throw him down and step on this bitch.
lol decent

vs.

what make you think you better than these other fools
you as fake as all yah damn jewels
NO
you get scared when I shoot you that glare
Ill embarrass you worse than a stain in yah underware
wack but funny lol
you aint got a cd worth lisyenin to so dont even spin it
you wish you were a b-ball hoop cause balls are always in it.
WTF U FAG!
yah probably got a fine ass girl but dont be a boaster
tha bitch has been rode more times than a rollercoaster
played
its been fun battlin its almost like a trek
you thought gettin ass was gettin a part on Shrek
no

weak battle..but force gonna take it in my book.

[Force.]

yozzzz uppin fo some votezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

[Force.]

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[Muweed]

HahahahHAhahHAhhahaHAH

1st battle, 2nd, or 3rd was cool
both did it good...not bad. but ya'll kno this thread, i must drop my vote
so...........
who gon' get it????????????????
HhaHahHAHAHhAHAHAHhHAh
soo so so FUnNY!

V-Nicotine cuz not spit his shit wacky
ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
no hate
peace
and fuck BUSH
haha



BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHa vote DQed...AHAHAHAHAHAH
-Smoka

[Force.]

The fuck at your vote son....weak...........Uppin....................... .................................................. ............................

[KAWN]

tha battle woz weak!!!i wudv voted force..............
............................kawn.................. ..........
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[TEARZZ]

This Battle Was Trash.................................id Vote Nicotine....................for Better Punches......................and Better Flow............
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[JDoe]

yo i rip dis cat/
And flip his scripts/
no
You about as hard as a dog witout a dick!/
Whoa whoa whoa...haha you thought i was a noob kid..shit.
no
Change your name...
Cuz people never wanna read your verses again after they peep it.
Word i read your shit......................and your straight garbage kid.
Your probley the only thing about ciggs that make niggas go impotent.
...ok concepts but rhyming horrible...
I dont even gotta try...& yet ill still walk away with a win.
And hes fire..now ima throw him down and step on this bitch.
...didnt rhyme at all...came too easy...

vs.

what make you think you better than these other fools
you as fake as all yah damn jewels
no.
you get scared when I shoot you that glare
Ill embarrass you worse than a stain in yah underware
ok.
you aint got a cd worth lisyenin to so dont even spin it
you wish you were a b-ball hoop cause balls are always in it.
ok.
yah probably got a fine ass girl but dont be a boaster
tha bitch has been rode more times than a rollercoaster
meh.
its been fun battlin its almost like a trek
you thought gettin ass was gettin a part on Shrek
...?
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Force really didnt try at all...but the problem is Nicotine did...he tried wording and tried punchlines which werent bad for startin out...i gotta say he did his' thing...i think Force underestimated em'...

V/Nicotine