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    "Count The Tears" LV & AMOR

    AMOR = blue
    LV = red

    Count the tears I've cried
    Each time I wished to be by your side
    Eyes opened wide yet to my love you were blind
    Even as I said and showed it, you couldn't see the signs
    Count the tears I've cried


    My heart was hardened beyond recognition
    And there's so many that beg to be in your position
    I got so much love to give and you won't even accept it
    It's like you can't even detect it, much less respect it
    I'd give you all I could, entirely “me”
    Heart and soul, even my body
    You gave the illusion and even "said" you loved me too
    But now you act like you don't, can't help but wonder if it was ever true


    Count the tears I've cried
    Each time I wished to be by your side
    Eyes opened wide yet to my love you were blind
    Even as I said and showed it, you couldn't see the signs
    Count the tears I've cried


    A title means nothing to me, you'll "always" be my Queen
    Can't deny that you're love is all I need
    Never shed tears cuz no others were worthy
    Yet the reason I cry is cuz you hurt me
    Pains in my heart, like waters run deep
    Thoughts of you run through my head, awake or asleep
    Plans for "our" future and talks about us together,
    Float from your thoughts like light winds under a feather
    Yet my dreams remain in limbo cuz for "us" there'll be no forever


    Count the tears I've cried
    Each time I wished to be by your side
    Eyes opened wide yet to my love you were blind
    Even as I said and showed it, you couldn't see the signs
    Count the tears I've cried



    your love is unbearable, the thought of you not in my life is like, death from hands of cannibals . .
    I hope you don’t ever leave, cause if you do its like cutting my heart out, and leaving it there to bleed . .
    your kisses planted the seed, you not caring about the way I love you, turns my passion to weeds . .
    I cant give you my all, cause the love I attempt to give, you hide bob and weave . .
    I smile why, the love you pretend to give I take it half heartedly . .


    Count the tears I've cried
    Each time I wished to be by your side
    Eyes opened wide yet to my love you were blind
    Even as I said and showed it, you couldn't see the signs
    Count the tears I've cried


    I bury the pain inside of me, I cant stand to see you not knowing I exist, I play the role of loved, but really my heart fills dissed . .
    the touch from your warmth, turns my warm body to a cold winters mist . .
    you say you love me, but why, when the words to me sound like your fist . .
    I know you not real, nor love in your minds feature will ever exist . .
    you say we can get together later, when, when I’m died off earth, and worms are eating my optics . .
    or when I hand my self cause you left, in the box called my closet . .
    <center>fem: You can talk to my kitty?
    male: yupp
    fem: What you tellin her?
    male: I be like,"meow mix"
    fem: LMAOOOOOO

    male: CenTz=the greatest oral sex performer on femalez
    fem: Prove it
    male: shit im so good i'll make ya baby have an orgasm
    fem: LMAOOOOOO..Ohhhh shit!!..*faints*

    LadyFrost: most chicks ain't "straight" physiques dat bend like front fenders
    plus I'm a pimp, so I figure, why limit myself to one gender



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    Narcicyst
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    DAMN...that shit was deep and got me thinkin... i like that in poetry..not weak it was beautiful nahmean...i really liked this one...y'all got some talent right there...one

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    I guess this was nicely done...

    ..i mean it's a subject that some would say is cliche...but it had a smooth and, well, nice flow and feel to it...

    ..no real critique to offer, i'm sure someone else can give you that...but some pieces i just don't feel criticising (for reasons of my own that are either very complex, or very simple, all part of being my esoteric and unusual self...i.e. i'm sure you don't give a fuck!)....

    .....solid collab, respect....
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    ^^ haha...thanx 4 da relpiez so far...check out my other one father down on tha page here, it has NO repliez yet...love...

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    <center>fem: You can talk to my kitty?
    male: yupp
    fem: What you tellin her?
    male: I be like,"meow mix"
    fem: LMAOOOOOO

    male: CenTz=the greatest oral sex performer on femalez
    fem: Prove it
    male: shit im so good i'll make ya baby have an orgasm
    fem: LMAOOOOOO..Ohhhh shit!!..*faints*

    LadyFrost: most chicks ain't "straight" physiques dat bend like front fenders
    plus I'm a pimp, so I figure, why limit myself to one gender



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    that was breath taking.. sad but breath taking..

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