I'm sorry I didn't get to this earlier....
my rating for this piece: 10/10
i think you should get a post of the month nomination for December.
don't know why this got slept on.....My favorite part about this piece was the Imagery....I woulda liked if you gave the guitar man a name....like "John"...or "Scott"...but i see also that that would have defeated your purpose in making him the Protagonist but at the same time painting his portrait as a nobody.
I loved how you did that you made him the main character and the focal point
but in his world he is a no-name poverty-stricken guitar player.......
that was a very deep writing Technique...
keep posting and I'll definitely keep Reading.
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