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    stream of consciousness: Self-Awareness

    Fear is distilled out of my system cuz I already died
    Ramses reincarnate Earth is ma afterlife
    Eye for an eye, tooth for a tooth
    Whenever attacked, holster it out and shoot
    Don't know much about ma History or Zoology
    But that an avatar descended by links of hagiography
    So "Who am I?"
    Ruler of an system autonomy
    God's Holographic memory
    I am painting a picture that even Homer would see
    I am breathing words into life with my breath
    So that animism would spreath,
    Non-stop keystyling, tryna find me before the wreath covers by layeth body
    I am a Nobody tryna be a Somebody in this cosmic game
    Political evil plane where I gotsta be like Machiavelli
    With Mach-V hydro power accelerating to High
    Stream of consciousness enters my mind
    As if God's the ventriloquist, and my wrist
    Is just autowriting without making any sense
    Just not leaving entrance open without deleting the past tense
    Hence I say to seize the oppurtunity
    Awake and the Holy Ghost and Trinity
    Am I just writing to make sense
    Am I a mere target in Satan's lens
    His M-16, waiting for a clean shot to demean me under Styx
    I feel like taking a dynamite sticks and swallow it
    Without wallowing too much and if i ever on crutch
    Then grow my feet back like Magrittes touch
    Of doing the impossiblity
    Without causing the fossility of my memory
    Photographically even if it was enhanced
    Photogenitically even if I had a chance with her to be together
    I wouldnt bless her...fuck what am I trying to sponser
    With my lyrics...am I just wasting your time, but everytime I try to rhyme
    It censors my thoughts, and when I cut it it regrows the Hydra's head so if I behead...damn
    Why do I have to kill my thoughts, and just not erupt to with 60 words a second
    Get the wheel at the deck's end and begin commence a journey of self realization
    and my esteem it seems that i am now getting in the groove if emperors couldnt see his own clothes
    does it smotes that we are wearing an invisible cloak and not aware? is that what Adam couldnt consider
    as i sober up i smolder out another verse so terse that you have to dig into it
    and shovel up the shit before you geth through the inner meaning
    ma words are kabbalistic feeling so start at aleph and alphabetically
    trim down everything sporadically real meaning would regenerate
    and penetrate your head till it feels like you have just hit it
    so spit it out and posit with hypo theories and conspiracies
    never bereave rather weave a web of wizardy with words....


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    I myself dont understand what I wrote but had a haiku like inspiration to do just autowrite. feel free to rip it apart and abuse me. cuz i think we are too gentle here!

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    Re: stream of consciousness: Self-Awareness

    Here is the final product edited...

    "Know Thyself." - Socrates

    Fear is distilled out of my system cuz I already died
    Ramses reincarnate Earth is ma afterlife
    An avatar descended by links of hagiography
    "Who am I?"
    Ruler of a system autonomy
    God's holographic memory
    Stuck in light-dark dichotomy
    A psychological projection of shadow-puppet illusion
    A causation of separation
    From One
    Eye for an eye, tooth for a tooth
    Whenever attacked, holster it out and shoot
    Default street-code, situational ethics
    Arithematics of machination to Machiavellian tactics
    Clock slowly ticks, time dilates, inner voice speaks
    God's the ventroloquist, as if He is playing whist
    Through me as I move my wrist
    Breathe life into words with every twist
    A shamanist spelling out voodoo animism
    Opening inner wisdom
    Thaumaturgical partition of sea to God's Land and Kingdom
    Prophet searching solution
    E is the energy, emcee squared the equation
    My words kabbalistic find meaning through analysis
    Weed smoke as catalyst leading either to Hell or Styx
    I feel like taking dynamite sticks and swallow it
    Without wallowing too much and spit out flames
    My mind is altered and untamed, sick n tired of playing cosmic games
    Trillion thoughts running at 60 words per second
    I am at my wits end as if on mental treadmill running Marathon
    Deeper than Sphinx's riddle a million-dollar question
    Where only lifeline to spare would be my own life to know the answer.

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