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    "Only this mic..." (keystyle)

    a ghost who flows to beats, he's grown with beef
    even knows these streets, from his own two feet
    he sits and holds the heat, while zoned and speaks
    he's alone and needs, a girl to just love and create
    hug and embrace, somebody to just shove and hate
    too much of this weight, got him to budge and break
    he's just achin' to die, constantly mistaking for lies
    he tried but fucked up.. finally he's breaking to size
    it's making him cry, to see this couple just walkin'
    they cuddle while talkin', they chuckle so often
    he buckles the coffin, he tried releasin' his heart
    beefin' would start, water starts feedin' the spark
    only this mic, picked up the pieces and parts....


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    Re: "Only this mic..." (keystyle)

    expression, flow and style was actually pretty nice
    only thing is it seems so incomplete, like the verse just stopped in mid-flow
    i feel say you could of written quite a bit more to this and it would of been soo dope
    multies was cool too
    just blow it up some more next time

    pz
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