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    IJL Presents: Killer Klowns Pt.2

    The Circus:
    Killer Klowns Pt. 2
    An IJL Collab.
    Smoka, Johnny 6 Feet, Tene, Ntalek

    The ringmaster of this circus so there's no point in tryin me
    The crew that rolls in the darkness, criticized and hated but now a dynasty
    Underestimated, and if you ever wondered....blood is our face paint
    Text heads that juggle opponents with ease, and with topical it's the same
    Poets that leave the crowd in awe, and musical artists that spit fire
    In middle of this I stand as the show goes on and our respect gets higher
    Each desire from my brethren is the same as mine, let me make it clear
    Beat down our opposition, make gay jokes, enjoy porn and drink beer
    I'm glad I'm here, my family is always on display all you have to do is pay
    Spotlight's on them, please please!! .....come through this way

    I escaped with the cheese and then spat in the trap
    Hey, it's 6-feet the magician with his vanishing act
    Spewing a cloud of chemicals, make you high and delirious
    Cut your cheeks into a smile and ask 'Why so serious?'
    An acrobat who hits a somersault and catches the pen
    Blast with it then, buckshot punchlines, you're no match for us men!
    Tight-roping 50 feet up between genius and insanity
    Half drunk and half weeded, watching the planet bleed
    My brain's an acid bath, calculate with drastic math
    And formulate some kind of rawness to make the plastic crash
    So if Satan is my source of power, fuck, i'd borrow more
    Coz i'm a 6 feet deep killer klown and horrorcore

    Coming out the tiny mobile, the last clown of the group
    A haggard looking sight, stomping kids down with the boots
    Standing upon the vehicle, recieving a better view of the area
    Demonic painted face, his actions sure to cause hysteria
    The clowns begin circling his "stage", as he removes his hat
    Dreads falling, and his eyes cold, as they settle into this trap
    He hold's the mic, and at first he's calm and soft spoken
    Then the possesion took place as the ripped coat opens
    As the crows leave his jacket, to point out the next victim
    And commence with the order as talons grip their neck ripping;
    Flesh, still pulsating and moist as the screams are unleashed
    Steel doors trap customers inside, leaving the entrance unbreached
    My followers disturbingly wicked, laughing at your feeble exsistence
    Jamming syrigines into veins, while smashing backs for lethal resistence

    I'm the crazy klown with a painted smile here to taint your child
    They're in danger now as I juggle limbs for the anxious crowd.
    complasiant shrouds their faces loud as a screaming victim in jasons house
    there's no escaping now this circus's purpose is just shaping out.
    Bleak shrieks my balloned animals come to life and rip apart physiques
    in a curious techinique I could see the others pointing and laughing at me
    but their laughs would be screams cause i'm not here for fun and games
    I've mimed their minds so they come closer as I pull on this invisible chain
    somewhat insane but yet sane inside my striped domain where to be
    entertained means losing your jugular vein

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    Re: IJL Presents: Killer Klowns Pt.2

    nice collab guys, good read.

    IMO the best parts of each verse were:

    Poets that leave the crowd in awe, and musical artists that spit fire
    In middle of this I stand as the show goes on and our respect gets higher

    Spewing a cloud of chemicals, make you high and delirious
    Cut your cheeks into a smile and ask 'Why so serious?'

    The clowns begin circling his "stage", as he removes his hat
    Dreads falling, and his eyes cold, as they settle into this trap
    He hold's the mic, and at first he's calm and soft spoken
    Then the possesion took place as the ripped coat opens
    Flesh, still pulsating and moist as the screams are unleashed
    Steel doors trap customers inside, leaving the entrance unbreached

    I'm the crazy klown with a painted smile here to taint your child
    They're in danger now as I juggle limbs for the anxious crowd.
    but their laughs would be screams cause i'm not here for fun and games
    I've mimed their minds so they come closer as I pull on this invisible chain

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    Re: IJL Presents: Killer Klowns Pt.2

    Brining this up.
    All links will be RTF.

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    Re: IJL Presents: Killer Klowns Pt.2

    bumpity bump. nice job on this guys.

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    Re: IJL Presents: Killer Klowns Pt.2

    not bad guys. Smoka entered aiight, never really seen him do a self props type of piece so this was new for him at least as far as ME reading it goes ahah.. he did cool, some fresh lines, decent intro.. Johnny 6's verse had to be my favorite lol.. the why so serious shit was pretty fuckin slick.. that part just had me like "haha, nice!" lol.. then came tene, and I noticed that your style has improved fuckin DRASTICALLY since the last time I read it, your flow was dope.. nothing was forced.. and you had a couple gems in there as far as lyrics go. Ntalek closed good.. had some dope lines too, his internals are the best in the piece as far as everyone goes.. not sure about the ending, cuz it didn't really end on a solid rhyme imo.. but you still got the jist of the piece summed up and did well in closing for the most part.. decent shit guys.. keep dropping. OM's getting it's skittles back every time us oldies get in here.


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    Re: IJL Presents: Killer Klowns Pt.2

    I enjoyed this. Everyone did well in my opinion. I enjoyed each persons flow & material. From each verse I gained a good sense of imagery. But what I liked the most was the twisted placement in each verse. Good job.
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    Re: IJL Presents: Killer Klowns Pt.2

    REALLY NICE stuff.All verses were great..I didn't tumble over lines or skipped any.Smooth through-out.
    liked the "Why so serious" part..lol.

    Props!

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    Re: IJL Presents: Killer Klowns Pt.2

    um yeah uppin for real feed. leave links.

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    Re: IJL Presents: Killer Klowns Pt.2

    Agreed, Uppin thisss...
    Leave links either myself or Ntalek will rtf.

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    Re: IJL Presents: Killer Klowns Pt.2

    lol dam that was kewl...FINALLY saw SmokaJoka drop something...GOT DAMMIT ive been waitin forever...yall on tha clown shyt...thats kewl tho...im with it...idk mayn yall rele doin ya thang on this one...easily made for audio...idk who does audio in IJL...but yall some good fukin writerz...i think 6-feet did tha best...he just killed it...but u all did a good job...rele its not ya rhymez...its ya wordin...its just GOOD SHYT...i mean it just came out solid...it never let up even for a sec..i cleary see y u guyz run this shyt...but imma keep droppin my bombz until evryone is fukin dead...anyway...good flow...good conceptz...good vocab n shyt...great imagery n shyt...great wordin n shyt...n some rele great metaphorz in this shyt...YALL KEEP ON WRITING THAT FUKED UP SHYT!!!

    my fav lines are...

    I escaped with the cheese and then spat in the trap
    Hey, it's 6-feet the magician with his vanishing act
    Spewing a cloud of chemicals, make you high and delirious
    Cut your cheeks into a smile and ask 'Why so serious?'
    An acrobat who hits a somersault and catches the pen
    Blast with it then, buckshot punchlines, you're no match for us men!
    Tight-roping 50 feet up between genius and insanity
    Half drunk and half weeded, watching the planet bleed
    My brain's an acid bath, calculate with drastic math
    And formulate some kind of rawness to make the plastic crash
    So if Satan is my source of power, fuck, i'd borrow more
    Coz i'm a 6 feet deep killer klown and horrorcore

    yep yep his whole fukin verse just killed it...GOOD SHYT PPLZ!!!

    yo come fuk with me guyz...im insane with my shyt too!!!

    idk which one to drop umm this one is good...

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...le-397712.html

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    Re: IJL Presents: Killer Klowns Pt.2

    appreciated I'll get to that link in a bit.

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    Re: IJL Presents: Killer Klowns Pt.2

    last ups...

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    Re: IJL Presents: Killer Klowns Pt.2

    yo mayn my link got closed...so fuk with one of my other dropz...
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