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TJC
...Art
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Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
Check
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
check....
You should've probably just ducked me...I might even let you try to sway...Originally Posted by TJC
we already know the outcome...
...Just like your dates, you getting fucked.....just in the wrong way...
Dude could trade liquor for L's...he'd be drunk as fuck, brain'll be rattled...
Then when he got pulled over...
...He'd have a legit excuse for cop'ing out on our battle...
you're 0-4, that's ridiculous...your verses couldn't get any cruder...
hind sight's 20/20............I still can't see a Victory in your future...
even your life's whack...you should probably find another hobby...
like model airplanes...s'the only way you'd be fly on the internet, doggy...
this is really a waste of time...cause you were hopeless from the start...
he has no confidence...
...Hell, even his post'll end Vote=...Art...
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
w/e here goes nothing
fuck my losses, fuck this shit, you know, I'm tired, fucking your mom five time
and your so ugly, she showed me you, never knew you sucked dick, when u were nine
I'm sorry to disapoint you, an easy win?, but your mom sell's herself on the street
but with a pre-mature birth, I wounder if you know your true dad, I herd he ejaculated asleep
you think your all that.... and I'm a newb, but you need to write a better sentence
did I mention you swayed, cause I checked your battles, and you lost agaisnt Divine Intervention
go ahead quote me bitch, yeah I know, you cant help it, without a quote it aint art
but art shouldnt be that hard to find, under a shoe maybe, when ur brains suffer a broken spark
I go hard, and you, kinda like what your mom did to my dick, made it all numb and solf
but fuck the beef talk.... I'd rather do some music, then to see you ontop, when you fall off
shit, cant edit... here it...
my bad, it looks bad... quoted
fuck my losses, fuck this shit, you know, I'm tired, fucking your mom five time
and your so ugly, she showed me you, never knew you sucked dick, when u were nine
I'm sorry to disapoint you, an easy win?, but your mom sell's herself on the street
but with a pre-mature birth
I wounder if you know your true dad, I herd he ejaculated asleep
you think your all that.... and I'm a newb, but you need to write a better sentence
did I mention you swayed
cause I checked your battles, and you lost agaisnt Divine Intervention
go ahead quote me bitch, yeah I know, you cant help it, without a quote it aint art
but art shouldnt be that hard to find
under a shoe maybe, when ur brains suffer a broken spark
I go hard, and you, kinda like what your mom did to my dick, made it all numb and solf
but fuck the beef talk.... I'd rather do some music, then to see you ontop, when you fall off
how many times you gonna post your verse dude? lmao! And you fed off my verse, that's an automatic DQ but I'd rather take the KO...VOTE!!!!
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
sry bout that, should of read rules... and yea, had some trouble... sry bout that shit, wont happen again.... cauze i should of made my lines shorter... my fault art.... ok.,.. cool?
yea
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
You should've probably just ducked me...I might even let you try to sway...
we already know the outcome...
...Just like your dates, you getting fucked.....just in the wrong way...
Meh...
Dude could trade liquor for L's...he'd be drunk as fuck, brain'll be rattled...
Then when he got pulled over...
...He'd have a legit excuse for cop'ing out on our battle...
Ok...
you're 0-4, that's ridiculous...your verses couldn't get any cruder...
hind sight's 20/20............I still can't see a Victory in your future...
needed to be worded better
even your life's whack...you should probably find another hobby...
like model airplanes...s'the only way you'd be fly on the internet, doggy...
meh...
this is really a waste of time...cause you were hopeless from the start...
he has no confidence...
...Hell, even his post'll end Vote=...Art...
I liked this
VS
uck my losses, fuck this shit, you know, I'm tired, fucking your mom five time
and your so ugly, she showed me you, never knew you sucked dick, when u were nine
No
I'm sorry to disapoint you, an easy win?, but your mom sell's herself on the street
but with a pre-mature birth
I wounder if you know your true dad, I herd he ejaculated asleep
No
you think your all that.... and I'm a newb, but you need to write a better sentence
did I mention you swayed
cause I checked your battles, and you lost agaisnt Divine Intervention
no
go ahead quote me bitch, yeah I know, you cant help it, without a quote it aint art
but art shouldnt be that hard to find
under a shoe maybe, when ur brains suffer a broken spark
Needs to be worded better...
I go hard, and you, kinda like what your mom did to my dick, made it all numb and solf
but fuck the beef talk.... I'd rather do some music, then to see you ontop, when you fall off
No
TJC you need to elevate, Art you have alot of potential, some lines could be worded better but if you keep elevating you could be really good
Vote=Art
vote art
better punches
better wordplay
better flips
tjc's where too simple in execution and the punches where too wordy
and stretched overall...need better disses
work on that...do better in the future
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You should've probably just ducked me...I might even let you try to sway...
we already know the outcome...
...Just like your dates, you getting fucked.....just in the wrong way...
-eh
Dude could trade liquor for L's...he'd be drunk as fuck, brain'll be rattled...
Then when he got pulled over...
...He'd have a legit excuse for cop'ing out on our battle...
-decent
you're 0-4, that's ridiculous...your verses couldn't get any cruder...
hind sight's 20/20............I still can't see a Victory in your future...
-ok
even your life's whack...you should probably find another hobby...
like model airplanes...s'the only way you'd be fly on the internet, doggy...
-miss
this is really a waste of time...cause you were hopeless from the start...
he has no confidence...
...Hell, even his post'll end Vote=...Art...
-alright
VS
uck my losses, fuck this shit, you know, I'm tired, fucking your mom five time
and your so ugly, she showed me you, never knew you sucked dick, when u were nine
-miss
I'm sorry to disapoint you, an easy win?, but your mom sell's herself on the street
but with a pre-mature birth
I wounder if you know your true dad, I herd he ejaculated asleep
-miss
you think your all that.... and I'm a newb, but you need to write a better sentence
did I mention you swayed
cause I checked your battles, and you lost agaisnt Divine Intervention
-miss
go ahead quote me bitch, yeah I know, you cant help it, without a quote it aint art
but art shouldnt be that hard to find
under a shoe maybe, when ur brains suffer a broken spark
-strectched
I go hard, and you, kinda like what your mom did to my dick, made it all numb and solf
but fuck the beef talk.... I'd rather do some music, then to see you ontop, when you fall off
-nope
Vote art
any tips or w/e for me to improve is welcome
upping this
You should've probably just ducked me...I might even let you try to sway...
we already know the outcome...
...Just like your dates, you getting fucked.....just in the wrong way...
meh
Dude could trade liquor for L's...he'd be drunk as fuck, brain'll be rattled...
Then when he got pulled over...
...He'd have a legit excuse for cop'ing out on our battle...
haha
you're 0-4, that's ridiculous...your verses couldn't get any cruder...
hind sight's 20/20............I still can't see a Victory in your future...
no
even your life's whack...you should probably find another hobby...
like model airplanes...s'the only way you'd be fly on the internet, doggy...
no
this is really a waste of time...cause you were hopeless from the start...
he has no confidence...
...Hell, even his post'll end Vote=...Art...
meh
VS
miss
v/Art, work on punches not seeming so statement like TJC
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