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KnowP -vs- TopDolla
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yesir....check....good luck man
There is no value to the loss of you and that matter is known
So i guess i'm destined to rid of P, like my bladder was full
His user title is sheer, and he ain't finna learn, so dumb
Because It's friendly fire, so it ain't gunna burn no one
I've always been greedy, that's why we won't share the vote
This ain't battling, Assassin murdered you, i'm performing the burial
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=403628
How this bitch going to get threw me? Even his hallways is a maze
He got puppets for his avatar, because he's always gettin played
I'm on the hunt and everyone sees that this lame sits as prey
It's obvious even 'PKnows' this win is just a name flip away!
KP, back in the grind and in the thick of things
Only thing Dolla be on Top of is a sticky G string
Do yo thing, and then when you done, go splitcha spleen
We only encourage you to get involved when we need specimens for guillotines
Switch up ya team, My hardest worker is my psycho burner
33 holes in ya back but tombstone wont say Micael Turner
This girl’s a pro, K mergin hookers and athletics
Cause when I pump at this fake tramp, the morgue wont wanna ask the medics
Dog forget it, when the clip speaks, aint no producer yellin ACTION
Ya fam wont think theres movies in a red-box the shape of a casket
good shit p....
uppin!
dolla had a few almost hits. the opener was cool but predictable. assassin personal was iight. friendly fire coulda been flipped nice. knowp had his opener which was creative. michael turner line coulda been.. idk. i think dolla was slightly more consistent. could go either way.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...726/index.html
RETURN THE VOTE.
good looks man
1-0
uppin, i'll return the votes
There is no value to the loss of you and that matter is known
So i guess i'm destined to rid of P, like my bladder was full
Ok..
His user title is sheer, and he ain't finna learn, so dumb
Because It's friendly fire, so it ain't gunna burn no one
pretty good
I've always been greedy, that's why we won't share the vote
This ain't battling, Assassin murdered you, i'm performing the burial
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=403628
Ok
How this bitch going to get threw me? Even his hallways is a maze
He got puppets for his avatar, because he's always gettin played
Lol
I'm on the hunt and everyone sees that this lame sits as prey
It's obvious even 'PKnows' this win is just a name flip away!
Decent
Vs
KP, back in the grind and in the thick of things
Only thing Dolla be on Top of is a sticky G string
Meh ok
Do yo thing, and then when you done, go splitcha spleen
We only encourage you to get involved when we need specimens for guillotines
ight
Switch up ya team, My hardest worker is my psycho burner
33 holes in ya back but tombstone wont say Micael Turner
Ok
This girl’s a pro, K mergin hookers and athletics
Cause when I pump at this fake tramp, the morgue wont wanna ask the medics
Ok
Dog forget it, when the clip speaks, aint no producer yellin ACTION
Ya fam wont think theres movies in a red-box the shape of a casket
ok
Not the best battle but it was pretty close. IMO dolla came the most consistant with his bars but KnowP was pretty good too.
Vote Dolla
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...085/index.html
thanks fam i'll hit you back
2-0
uppin
Close calls on all votes but i aint gettin no love in the polls
good stuff Dolla
UP!!!!!!
right back at you sir
Vote up!
vsOriginally Posted by TopDolla
KP, back in the grind and in the thick of things
Only thing Dolla be on Top of is a sticky G string
meh
Do yo thing, and then when you done, go splitcha spleen
We only encourage you to get involved when we need specimens for guillotines
meh funny
Switch up ya team, My hardest worker is my psycho burner
33 holes in ya back but tombstone wont say Micael Turner
lol
This girl’s a pro, K mergin hookers and athletics
Cause when I pump at this fake tramp, the morgue wont wanna ask the medics
nah
Dog forget it, when the clip speaks, aint no producer yellin ACTION
Ya fam wont think theres movies in a red-box the shape of a casket
nah
vote/Known
2-1
uppin
TopDolla - Rid of P was a solid nameplay. Friendly fire was a good concept that u coulda made a dope punch outta, but u didn't develop it or use it creatively enough. The Assassin thing, same thing, u coulda made a nice personal out of it, but didn't do enough with it. Try combining those personals with dope wordplay. Puppets thing was decent, but the closer was weak. Overall, u had some good ideas, but gotta work on doing more with the ideas.
KnowP - Opener was too simple to really hit, as was ya 2nd bar, there was no wit in it really. The Michael Turner thing was an alright idea, but ya didn't really do a whole lot with it. Fake tramp thing was the same as ya first two bars, just not creative enough. The closer's concept was more creative, but the wording wasn't direct at all. Overall, wasn't impressed with ya verse, there wasn't much to it.
Overall - TopDolla, I saw you signed into LLL so I was checking out what u got to see if ur ready. Ur clearly not there yet, but u had some decent ideas and just gotta work on developing them more. KnowP, ur whole verse was just too basic and there was nothing witty or harsh in it.
Vote - TopDolla
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