LLL Season 11: Week 5
Standard Rules (can be found in LLL Office)
Check in by Wednesday
Drop by Midnight Friday (Eastern Time)
16 Lines Minimum
Vote on 5 Battles
Leave links in your check in or lose 2 votes per missing link
Good Luck
LLL Season 11: Week 5
Standard Rules (can be found in LLL Office)
Check in by Wednesday
Drop by Midnight Friday (Eastern Time)
16 Lines Minimum
Vote on 5 Battles
Leave links in your check in or lose 2 votes per missing link
Good Luck
i can drop tonight.
^ he dropd a played line w/ no flip & won. i'm booin the lames.Originally Posted by Josh S
but yo i know YOU won't scratch the surface. ur 2 afraid it'll ruin your nails.
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..ps i love u. 300. all remind me why my bars tougher
cuz i'll murder WHATEVER axesent.. like ANY film with gerard butler.
plus i fuck all the time. i guess i'm a born addict ..
son ya sex drive is sooo slowww even old women blast their horns at it.
u nvr connect proper. i stay clean. y u doubtin me cousin
u punch like a herpes scare. a slight tingle at first that turns out 2 be nothin.
i heard the MMA news. u've no chance of even jumpin me.
ya Strikeforce is so below average. Fedor's already tryna leave the company
just know i'm an Iron Man 2. no spoilers but this dude is nxt
so u'll be leaking Scarlet outta Johansonn even if somehow u DO connect.
but ur oldschool. a real gangster & u'll drive thru currently
so if u got that G-Force .. u prolly downloaded it & enjoyed it thoroughly.
ur here years & been wack. i'll get technical so u better not run
i know axis a straight line .. it's just ironic that he's NEVER dropped one.
u a poet tryna pull. that's as pathetic as miles's loss i saw dude
face it ya verses couldn't make a bitch move if $in City wrote them for u.
oh my punches torture ya. u'll bleed & die sittin' ..
leave ya rockin' so much 'scar tissue'. i'll make ya wipe ur eyes with it.
20.
chop...im glad u dropped early.
^ he dropd a played line w/ no flip & won. i'm booin the lames.
but yo i know YOU won't scratch the surface. ur 2 afraid it'll ruin your nails.
cool, never seen this concept flipped like this.
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..ps i love u. 300. all remind me why my bars tougher
cuz i'll murder WHATEVER axesent.. like ANY film with gerard butler.
alright..
plus i fuck all the time. i guess i'm a born addict ..
son ya sex drive is sooo slowww even old women blast their horns at it.
ha...pretty good.
u nvr connect proper. i stay clean. y u doubtin me cousin
u punch like a herpes scare. a slight tingle at first that turns out 2 be nothin.
wasn't feeling this.
i heard the MMA news. u've no chance of even jumpin me.
ya Strikeforce is so below average. Fedor's already tryna leave the company
eh ok..
just know i'm an Iron Man 2. no spoilers but this dude is nxt
so u'll be leaking Scarlet outta Johansonn even if somehow u DO connect.
ok again..decent wp.
but ur oldschool. a real gangster & u'll drive thru currently
so if u got that G-Force .. u prolly downloaded it & enjoyed it thoroughly.
coo, just not hard hitting.
ur here years & been wack. i'll get technical so u better not run
i know axis a straight line .. it's just ironic that he's NEVER dropped one.
seen this wp.
u a poet tryna pull. that's as pathetic as miles's loss i saw dude
face it ya verses couldn't make a bitch move if $in City wrote them for u.
alright cool.
oh my punches torture ya. u'll bleed & die sittin' ..
leave ya rockin' so much 'scar tissue'. i'll make ya wipe ur eyes with it.
nope
Overall: Pretty consistent throughout, and I woulda quoted 3 or 4 of your bars..but some of your concept were old, some were cool and creative though. Solid, above average verse though.
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plus i fuck all the time. i guess i'm a born addict ..
son ya sex drive is sooo slowww even old women blast their horns at it.
Hahahaha! I dunno...thia made me almost laugh outloud!
i heard the MMA news. u've no chance of even jumpin me.
ya Strikeforce is so below average. Fedor's already tryna leave the company
Hahaha! Again, nice...
but ur oldschool. a real gangster & u'll drive thru currently
so if u got that G-Force .. u prolly downloaded it & enjoyed it thoroughly.
Slightly...
ur here years & been wack. i'll get technical so u better not run
i know axis a straight line .. it's just ironic that he's NEVER dropped one.
Aight too...
That's how I read it...
Pretty consistent...I'd say more high's than lows.
Peace
Casanova wins (1 - 1)
Axe loses and is booted (0 - 2)
Last edited by phlymo; August 10th, 2009 at 10:52 AM