Destructive Suicidal

[AlphaMetric]

yo, guess what, "what" I got epilepsy
about to drive fast like at one eighty
and plus I'm drunk as fuck full tilt
about to have a seizure right on the wheel
your about to have the chills of your life
when I crash right off a bridge at night
I'm motherfuckin' destructive suicidal
what ever I do come along this recital
I know you'll like it as much as I do
when I pick you up with a tree fly through
the two back seat from yesterday ride through
now we going to crash in the night booth
get high on acid to numb the pain in you
be a celebrity for the surviving few
and I excite the raw in you to be dope
cauz when I'm finish, only see the bodies float


links after or tomorrow night....

[AlphaMetric]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...198/index.html

other link be edited later

[AlphaMetric]

yoooo

[Chris-Poth]

Im sorry bro, this piece was no good.. First off, im a big advocate of if people cant rhyme then stay the fuck away from rap. Your first bar, you rhymes eighty and epilepsy... Hmm... No good.

I'm motherfuckin' destructive suicidal
what ever I do come along this recital
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what does that even mean bro... Think about your shit more indepth before you drop. It can either have meaning and be whack, like most OM's on this site (OM's on this website are basically poems) or it can just be raw rhymes and lyrics... But this lacked either

[AlphaMetric]

your a fuckend newb... gtfo.... have you ever herd of non rhyming words but having the ending sound almost the same.... this shit is equal sick flow on audio.... and get the story right.... ......

Definitions of recital:

noun: performance of music or dance especially by soloists
noun: a detailed account or description of something
Example: "He was forced to listen to a recital of his many shortcomings"
noun: a detailed statement giving facts and figures
Example: "His wife gave a recital of his infidelities"
noun: the act of giving an account describing incidents or a course of events
noun: a public instance of reciting or repeating (from memory) something prepared in advance

[Chris-Poth]

Dont get upset. I just feel like maybe if you cant rhyme, dont rap... And you cant... So quit

[AlphaMetric]

I can rhyme..... but then i'd have to totally change the story... I did this while spitting at it to see if it would sound good even without the rhyme and when spit fast,,,, you dont notice shit all....

[AlphaMetric]

and look at inners... you dumbass