jmb vs eddy

[jmbstat]

10bars
30min

house rules

time starts 30min after ya check

check

[Uhb.]

ok 10 lines or 10 bars (10 bars being 20 lines) ???

[jmbstat]

sorry 10lines

[jmbstat]

check it,,,killin emcees my game---and all i need is one token
bust ya dome swollen like hulk hogan ill rip ya----shirt----open
crushed and broken,,,,drink'n out of a straw and ya---still---chokin
leave ya drownin like the philippines and im----the---pacific---ocean
bars so hot ya need sun screen---and ya moms milk ya lotion
got that potion,,,,to cure ya wack skills with a remedy
your a bitch----with a body like hennessey ("bottle of")
and although im your buddy,,,,im still the weiser----
so heres some advice "quit spittin"----cuz yea lil sisters shit is tighter,,,,
word to the wiser--dont restart this game, cuz when i say "im rippin lames" im not a lier

[Uhb.]

10lines or ten bars u'll still get split, trust im the shit
i got punches that'll twist J so tight u wont get a hit
im punch 4 punch...people feel my delivery like molesting mail
Skillwise? im weigh above him like Jesus checkin the scale
im wreckin him WOW! ill imprint ur head with the metal like faces on quarters
and u'll be quick to See an end,(CNN) u'd think about news reporters
ur weak..i mean really, always dropping trash but no one cares tho
cuz the shit u put up scares everyone away like the purpose of a scarecrow
not tough scary either,your a dead man walking i mean that literally
when i make sure you die In Pussy like failed birth deliveries

[jmbstat]

upp

[Uhb.]

uppin this shit

[jmbstat]

upp

[luke illestry]

check it,,,killin emcees my game---and all i need is one token
bust ya dome swollen like hulk hogan ill rip ya----shirt----open
-ehh

crushed and broken,,,,drink'n out of a straw and ya---still---chokin
leave ya drownin like the philippines and im----the---pacific---ocean
-wtf is the ---- for? lame

bars so hot ya need sun screen---and ya moms milk ya lotion
got that potion,,,,to cure ya wack skills with a remedy
-didnt rhyme

your a bitch----with a body like hennessey ("bottle of")
and although im your buddy,,,,im still the weiser----
-na

so heres some advice "quit spittin"----cuz yea lil sisters shit is tighter,,,,
word to the wiser--dont restart this game, cuz when i say "im rippin lames" im not a lier
-no

vs

10lines or ten bars u'll still get split, trust im the shit
i got punches that'll twist J so tight u wont get a hit
-mehish

im punch 4 punch...people feel my delivery like molesting mail
Skillwise? im weigh above him like Jesus checkin the scale
-eh

im wreckin him WOW! ill imprint ur head with the metal like faces on quarters
and u'll be quick to See an end,(CNN) u'd think about news reporters
-eh

ur weak..i mean really, always dropping trash but no one cares tho
cuz the shit u put up scares everyone away like the purpose of a scarecrow
-no

not tough scary either,your a dead man walking i mean that literally
when i make sure you die In Pussy like failed birth deliveries
-played but ok

easy to eddy he took this for an overall better verse

[Lil Cap0ne]

check it,,,killin emcees my game---and all i need is one token
bust ya dome swollen like hulk hogan ill rip ya----shirt----open
not gonna lie i liekd dis haha
crushed and broken,,,,drink'n out of a straw and ya---still---chokin
leave ya drownin like the philippines and im----the---pacific---ocean
eh
bars so hot ya need sun screen---and ya moms milk ya lotion
got that potion,,,,to cure ya wack skills with a remedy
naa wasnt feeling
your a bitch----with a body like hennessey ("bottle of")
and although im your buddy,,,,im still the weiser----
na man
so heres some advice "quit spittin"----cuz yea lil sisters shit is tighter,,,,
word to the wiser--dont restart this game, cuz when i say "im rippin lames" im not a lier
wasnt feeling dis either


10lines or ten bars u'll still get split, trust im the shit
i got punches that'll twist J so tight u wont get a hit
haha decent
im punch 4 punch...people feel my delivery like molesting mail
Skillwise? im weigh above him like Jesus checkin the scale
naaa
im wreckin him WOW! ill imprint ur head with the metal like faces on quarters
and u'll be quick to See an end,(CNN) u'd think about news reporters
haha good
ur weak..i mean really, always dropping trash but no one cares tho
cuz the shit u put up scares everyone away like the purpose of a scarecrow
naa
not tough scary either,your a dead man walking i mean that literally
when i make sure you die In Pussy like failed birth deliveries
naa

iuno i think eddy got it.. wasnt a great battle sum lines here and there but keep at it imma ahve to give this one to eddy came a little harder

v/ eddy

[Sw0ne]

bars so hot ya need sun screen---and ya moms milk ya lotion
got that potion,,,,to cure ya wack skills with a remedy
cool bar, best one of your verse. im not feeling all the hypens.. you still need some work on your punchlines make them meaner and more direct.

10lines or ten bars u'll still get split, trust im the shit
i got punches that'll twist J so tight u wont get a hit

this was tight, smooth flow and solid punch. best bar of the battle.
the quarter line should have been better after CNN w/o the ()

v/Eddy

[Adept The Euphuist]

jmbstat

check it,,,killin emcees my game---and all i need is one token
bust ya dome swollen like hulk hogan ill rip ya----shirt----open
um i just seen this in another battle today. 1/5
crushed and broken,,,,drink'n out of a straw and ya---still---chokin
leave ya drownin like the philippines and im----the---pacific---ocean
nice. 2/5
bars so hot ya need sun screen---and ya moms milk ya lotion
got that potion,,,,to cure ya wack skills with a remedy
ok. 1/5
your a bitch----with a body like hennessey ("bottle of")
and although im your buddy,,,,im still the weiser----
ok. 2/5
so heres some advice "quit spittin"----cuz yea lil sisters shit is tighter,,,,
word to the wiser--dont restart this game, cuz when i say "im rippin lames" im not a lier
ok. 2/5

jmbstat - 8/25

Eddy HasKuL

10lines or ten bars u'll still get split, trust im the shit
i got punches that'll twist J so tight u wont get a hit
nice. 2/5
im punch 4 punch...people feel my delivery like molesting mail
Skillwise? im weigh above him like Jesus checkin the scale
alright. 2/5
im wreckin him WOW! ill imprint ur head with the metal like faces on quarters
and u'll be quick to See an end,(CNN) u'd think about news reporters
good. 2/5
ur weak..i mean really, always dropping trash but no one cares tho
cuz the shit u put up scares everyone away like the purpose of a scarecrow
ha. 2/5
not tough scary either,your a dead man walking i mean that literally
when i make sure you die In Pussy like failed birth deliveries
lol. 2/5

Eddy HasKuL - 10/25

Overall- jmbstat your getting better but clean the structure up it looks like it retarded on itself. eddy takes this because of more original punches.

Vote - Eddy HasKuL

[Alyse Miller]

10lines or ten bars u'll still get split, trust im the shit
i got punches that'll twist J so tight u wont get a hit
im punch 4 punch...people feel my delivery like molesting mail
Skillwise? im weigh above him like Jesus checkin the scale
im wreckin him WOW! ill imprint ur head with the metal like faces on quarters

vs

check it,,,killin emcees my game---and all i need is one token
bust ya dome swollen like hulk hogan ill rip ya----shirt----open
crushed and broken,,,,drink'n out of a straw and ya---still---chokin
leave ya drownin like the philippines and im----the---pacific---ocean

Jm you getting there just dont put thoes -- in your verses it makes it look newbish but if you was more consisant you would of got this eddy got this with thoes bars imo decent battle here

vote eddy