Lethargic (2-2) vs JoeBoston (2-3) Leth wins

[The Archetype]

LLL Season 15, Week 7

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[Lethargic]

Check

[Joe Boston]

check gl man

[Joe Boston]

Sorry for quick drop busy

Posted by Lethargic:Sure thing bud. When you get done with your verse, PM it to Token or Arch...with having to work 2 midnight launches and all kinds of other craziness with work, I honestly don't know when I'll have time to post. I'm pulling a 14 hour day today and I'm just on my lunch atm or else I'd do it right now. Hit up my wall when you're done with your verse and I'll try and get my done as soon as I can.

What an emotional bitch,grow some hair on ur chest
Skillz suck so bad be a man tell them the real reason why u left
His bitch a soldier at giving head see her standing about face
Only time she screaming out LT is when she be fucking them at the army base
Predictions you'll beat joe,how many dickriders will be there when i aim
It's expected you'd fuking sleep on me because ur reputation of having a tired ass name
Just admit it man that everything u drop on here is shit
No excuse for having Lethargic ass verses even if u work 14 hr shifts
Put ur bitch in a cortortionist twist and watch her pussy get mangled
Last time we saw LE is when u was watching joe putting her pants to her ankles

[Lethargic]

This ain't a power diet, but you'll get ripped quick brother
I should list your location..as much as I'm in your mother
Gassed up like no other, but ya talent's on E..you gettin older
So I'll rip the GT out ya seGmenT and make you swallow the leftovers
Forumlatin labyrinths of wackness, ya verse always amazes
I'ma roll through Boston quickly..off to more important places
Leavin your moms with no hope..her pussy's totally wrecked bro
We ain't even havin sex, I slap her stomach and follow the echo
Put a sticky bomb under your neck ho..I'm on some C-4 shit
I ain't exaggeratin, but you'll get blown all outta proportion

soooo late...gotta be at work at 8am...I'm off. Fuckin midnight launches.

[ALIEN]

Joe had some misses with the LE n LT nameplays... seemed forced as hell. Opener was aight and the tired ass name was nice lol. I thought lethargic didn't come too great here bit I guess he had a lot going on... I mean u have all week still but I guess not. Roll thru boston line was nicebut I didn't really like anything else aside from that. I got it 2-1in on quotes in joes favor. Both had a lot of misses but I got joe edging this one. Can't bar by bar cuz im on phone so u can count it or not.

Vote - joeboston

[Joe Boston]

good drop leth man uppin

[Meters]

joe -

What an emotional bitch,grow some hair on ur chest
Skillz suck so bad be a man tell them the real reason why u left
(seems like a miss unless i don't get it - wording a lil off)
His bitch a soldier at giving head see her standing about face
Only time she screaming out LT is when she be fucking them at the army base
(miss again, mostly the wording but okay, not bad)
Predictions you'll beat joe,how many dickriders will be there when i aim
It's expected you'd fuking sleep on me because ur reputation of having a tired ass name
(good - not that harsh against him, saying he'll sleep on you, but pretty clever)
Just admit it man that everything u drop on here is shit
No excuse for having Lethargic ass verses even if u work 14 hr shifts
(kinda similar to last punch but w/o the creativity)
Put ur bitch in a cortortionist twist and watch her pussy get mangled
Last time we saw LE is when u was watching joe putting her pants to her ankles
(not bad, again, but kinda weak on variety, even in terms of nameplay - his name is one word, the initials angle is kinda off)


leth -

This ain't a power diet, but you'll get ripped quick brother
I should list your location..as much as I'm in your mother
(old school kinda dozens punch, okay though)
Gassed up like no other, but ya talent's on E..you gettin older
So I'll rip the GT out ya seGmenT and make you swallow the leftovers
(i like punches like this, creative)
Forumlatin labyrinths of wackness, ya verse always amazes
I'ma roll through Boston quickly..off to more important places
(dope, best line of battle so far, clean wording)
Leavin your moms with no hope..her pussy's totally wrecked bro
We ain't even havin sex, I slap her stomach and follow the echo
(lol, decent-ish punch but the concept made me laugh)
Put a sticky bomb under your neck ho..I'm on some C-4 shit
I ain't exaggeratin, but you'll get blown all outta proportion
(old school swag kinda punch, decent closer)

I got Leth with the line of the battle and more hits - Joe was good in spots but not enough variety (too many nameplays, some forced - gets boring.) Cool lil battle, nice read

vote - Leth

[Lethargic]

So, since I'm assuming he feels like there's beef between us to the point he wants to not allow my vote in his battle, i guess we can't have Qwaun voting in this battle. It's obvious he's on some gay shit right now.

When you want to man up and stop actin gay, lemme know and I'll vote on/allow you to vote on my battles again. It's really not that serious to me, lmao.

[Letterman]

JB
What an emotional bitch,grow some hair on ur chest
Skillz suck so bad be a man tell them the real reason why u left
No real punch here...

His bitch a soldier at giving head see her standing about face
Only time she screaming out LT is when she be fucking them at the army base
Tried to force the nameplay here. I mean I get it but better worded would've made for a better punch.

Predictions you'll beat joe,how many dickriders will be there when i aim
It's expected you'd fuking sleep on me because ur reputation of having a tired ass name
Lol nice...

Just admit it man that everything u drop on here is shit
No excuse for having Lethargic ass verses even if u work 14 hr shifts
Personal attempt? Even if, its not really hardhitting.

Put ur bitch in a cortortionist twist and watch her pussy get mangled
Last time we saw LE is when u was watching joe putting her pants to her ankles
Nah...

Leth
This ain't a power diet, but you'll get ripped quick brother
I should list your location..as much as I'm in your mother
Meh...this was weak!

Gassed up like no other, but ya talent's on E..you gettin older
So I'll rip the GT out ya seGmenT and make you swallow the leftovers
Ok...

Forumlatin labyrinths of wackness, ya verse always amazes
I'ma roll through Boston quickly..off to more important places
Haha...LOTB!

Leavin your moms with no hope..her pussy's totally wrecked bro
We ain't even havin sex, I slap her stomach and follow the echo
Lol really? Nooooooo...

Put a sticky bomb under your neck ho..I'm on some C-4 shit
I ain't exaggeratin, but you'll get blown all outta proportion
Lol nah...this aint gonna fly Leth!

Kinda weak battle from both sides...neither was too consistent. Matter of fact, neither really brought any kind of heat to this battle. Leth had one great bar but the rest were mediocre at best. But I have it 2-1 in Leth's favor, in terms of quoteables. Leth also had the LOTB even though his verse was meh! No hate to either though...

v/Leth

[Bongkers]

What an emotional bitch,grow some hair on ur chest
Skillz suck so bad be a man tell them the real reason why u left
Meh..
His bitch a soldier at giving head see her standing about face
Only time she screaming out LT is when she be fucking them at the army base
Okish, wordings off though
Predictions you'll beat joe,how many dickriders will be there when i aim
It's expected you'd fuking sleep on me because ur reputation of having a tired ass name
Lol, Okish
Just admit it man that everything u drop on here is shit
No excuse for having Lethargic ass verses even if u work 14 hr shifts
Meh..
Put ur bitch in a cortortionist twist and watch her pussy get mangled
Last time we saw LE is when u was watching joe putting her pants to her ankles
Nah

v

This ain't a power diet, but you'll get ripped quick brother
I should list your location..as much as I'm in your mother
Nah
Gassed up like no other, but ya talent's on E..you gettin older
So I'll rip the GT out ya seGmenT and make you swallow the leftovers
OK
Forumlatin labyrinths of wackness, ya verse always amazes
I'ma roll through Boston quickly..off to more important places
OK
Leavin your moms with no hope..her pussy's totally wrecked bro
We ain't even havin sex, I slap her stomach and follow the echo
What?
Put a sticky bomb under your neck ho..I'm on some C-4 shit
I ain't exaggeratin, but you'll get blown all outta proportion
No..


Well Joe was more consistent, but the two bars that I got from Leth were the two best of the battle, Joe your wordings too messy if you had cleaned it up a lil you'd have won but Leth got this IMO.. Meh battle no hate lol

V- Leth

[Chrit.]

Predictions you'll beat joe,how many dickriders will be there when i aim
It's expected you'd fuking sleep on me because ur reputation of having a tired ass name

vs

Forumlatin labyrinths of wackness, ya verse always amazes
I'ma roll through Boston quickly..off to more important places


Not a big fan of either verse. No big hitters on either side. Like Leth's quotable more than Joe's though. Also, Leth had better wording. Joe got a little wordy at times which hurt the effectiveness.

v/Lethargic

[The Gwapfather]

JOE:

What an emotional bitch,grow some hair on ur chest
Skillz suck so bad be a man tell them the real reason why u left

^naw..

His bitch a soldier at giving head see her standing about face
Only time she screaming out LT is when she be fucking them at the army base

^decent, build up n wording could be better..

Predictions you'll beat joe,how many dickriders will be there when i aim
It's expected you'd fuking sleep on me because ur reputation of having a tired ass name

^aha, pretty cool bar, wording was a lil off again though, could have made it hit harder, not bad though..

Just admit it man that everything u drop on here is shit
No excuse for having Lethargic ass verses even if u work 14 hr shifts

^naw, concept wasn't flipped well enough, and the concept as a whole might not have been anything you could have really turned into something dope tbh..

Put ur bitch in a cortortionist twist and watch her pussy get mangled
Last time we saw LE is when u was watching joe putting her pants to her ankles

^naw, n taking out the first couple letters of a name is forced right from jump..


LETH:

This ain't a power diet, but you'll get ripped quick brother
I should list your location..as much as I'm in your mother

^aha, naw..

Gassed up like no other, but ya talent's on E..you gettin older
So I'll rip the GT out ya seGmenT and make you swallow the leftovers

^eh, decent..

Forumlatin labyrinths of wackness, ya verse always amazes
I'ma roll through Boston quickly..off to more important places

^solid..

Leavin your moms with no hope..her pussy's totally wrecked bro
We ain't even havin sex, I slap her stomach and follow the echo

^ughhhhh no? haha..

Put a sticky bomb under your neck ho..I'm on some C-4 shit
I ain't exaggeratin, but you'll get blown all outta proportion

^played


OVERALL:

Overall nothing really impressed me, no hate.. Leth had a couple bigger misses then Joe, but Leth also had a couple stronger bars then Joe's, kind of a close battle but I got Leth taking this, lil less consistant but had the harder hits..



VOTE: LETHARGIC

[Joe Boston]

good looks on the votes yall and again good shit lethargic

[Lethargic]

good looks on the votes yall and again good shit lethargic

You too Joe.