Lethargic (3-3) vs, Vinzr (3-5) LETH WINS

[A.T.]

LLL Season 15- Week 8

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
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Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
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Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm EST.

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[Vinzr]

I'm going 12-16 lines.

[Lethargic]

Unless I go 10 first

[Lethargic]

Whether its sex or battleraps, we know what your fuckin status at
Vinzr's found down under and I ain't talkin bout your habitat
Ya flippin concepts like an acrobat and bout to get run over dude
I'll repo the Vin's vet status...dope statements long past overdue
Take a hint and get a clue, you'll get crushed for pullin gay shit
Research pasts like Gumshoes, my boots'll just stick to your face a bit
Face it bitch, you're lackin experience and act like a total retard
You can't be hard when you're the reason they call it a fuckin V Card
The Write of Passage opened my eyes to this faggot I was about beat
When his OM on love showed off his internal war on his sexuality

[Vinzr]

Fuck it

At least Justin Bieber realized his problem of having a fringe…
But how could you manage your problems when you can’t even manage to win?
A homosexual? Or just a bitch in a man’s body…either way you’re hated
We would think you’re a farmer, the way you raisin’ cocks on a daily basis
I’m a gambler, I take risks so does everyone else that you see shines…
If you were found stacking chips, it would be the crumbs we leave behind
His coach said he’s got the spirit…of a pedophile in his forties…
His always first in the huddles so he can be in the middle and experience an orgy
I’d be have a legendary verse on lock if you were in charge of it
I could key up a verse that your thief minded ass would be dumb enough to pick

[ArchDevil]

Whether its sex or battleraps, we know what your fuckin status at
Vinzr's found down under and I ain't talkin bout your habitat
^ ehh, kinda soft

Ya flippin concepts like an acrobat and bout to get run over dude
I'll repo the Vin's vet status...dope statements long past overdue
^ first line is a bit filler, but decent punch

Take a hint and get a clue, you'll get crushed for pullin gay shit
Research pasts like Gumshoes, my boots'll just stick to your face a bit
^ not bad

Face it bitch, you're lackin experience and act like a total retard
You can't be hard when you're the reason they call it a fuckin V Card
^ cool nameplay flip

The Write of Passage opened my eyes to this faggot I was about beat
When his OM on love showed off his internal war on his sexuality
^ rhyme is kinda off here, took away from the punch


vs.


At least Justin Bieber realized his problem of having a fringe…
But how could you manage your problems when you can’t even manage to win?
^ statementish

A homosexual? Or just a bitch in a man’s body…either way you’re hated
We would think you’re a farmer, the way you raisin’ cocks on a daily basis
^ this is kinda corny and pretty played/basic...

I’m a gambler, I take risks so does everyone else that you see shines…
If you were found stacking chips, it would be the crumbs we leave behind
^ decent at best

His coach said he’s got the spirit…of a pedophile in his forties…
His always first in the huddles so he can be in the middle and experience an orgy
^ not feelin the wording on the 2nd line, punch isnt that great, could've been better

I’d be have a legendary verse on lock if you were in charge of it
I could key up a verse that your thief minded ass would be dumb enough to pick
^ not feelin this


i dont know, seen way better from vinzr...i was strugglin to find a good hit from vin...after i read leth's verse i thought vin is gonna seal it here...but his punches didnt really hit hard...while leth was JUST a bit more consistent and had a couple more hits than vin, gets my vote but not by much though...
vote - lethargic

[Cody Nash]

Whether its sex or battleraps, we know what your fuckin status at
Vinzr's found down under and I ain't talkin bout your habitat
played idea
Ya flippin concepts like an acrobat and bout to get run over dude
I'll repo the Vin's vet status...dope statements long past overdue
nah
Take a hint and get a clue, you'll get crushed for pullin gay shit
Research pasts like Gumshoes, my boots'll just stick to your face a bit
not bad
Face it bitch, you're lackin experience and act like a total retard
You can't be hard when you're the reason they call it a fuckin V Card
okay
The Write of Passage opened my eyes to this faggot I was about beat
When his OM on love showed off his internal war on his sexuality
weak rhyme, okish idea

vs

At least Justin Bieber realized his problem of having a fringe…
But how could you manage your problems when you can’t even manage to win?
no punch..
A homosexual? Or just a bitch in a man’s body…either way you’re hated
We would think you’re a farmer, the way you raisin’ cocks on a daily basis
ehhhhh, okay... lol, so fuckin' corny.
I’m a gambler, I take risks so does everyone else that you see shines…
If you were found stacking chips, it would be the crumbs we leave behind
eh, could've been harder
His coach said he’s got the spirit…of a pedophile in his forties…
His always first in the huddles so he can be in the middle and experience an orgy
again, wording was off.. needs more. coulda been like "always first in the huddles at school.. and the last one out with sundusky" or some shit that isn't played. but fresher..
I’d be have a legendary verse on lock if you were in charge of it
I could key up a verse that your thief minded ass would be dumb enough to pick
nah



leth had two semi-solid hits.. both needed to do better.



vote Lethargic

[King]

Take a hint and get a clue, you'll get crushed for pullin gay shit
Research pasts like Gumshoes, my boots'll just stick to your face a bit

vs

At least Justin Bieber realized his problem of having a fringe…
But how could you manage your problems when you can’t even manage to win?


Vin, tbh i was being generous with the Manage punch. its not bad, but not really harsh enough to pull off the statement. Leth was more consistent, some played stuff but better attempts throughout.

Vote Leth

[Token]

I tried to pick quotes but I really couldn't come up with any. Lethargic had the better ideas, just alot of played material. Vin, this could've been one of the weakest verses I've seen from you bro. The raising cocks was your best idea but it's really played. I'm going with Lethargic just because he had the better ideas and most of Vin's verse missed. I think you could've really capitalized on this one and if you'da really tried you'da won.

Vote: Lethargic

[The Archetype]

Take a hint and get a clue, you'll get crushed for pullin gay shit
Research pasts like Gumshoes, my boots'll just stick to your face a bit

vs

A homosexual? Or just a bitch in a man’s body…either way you’re hated
We would think you’re a farmer, the way you raisin’ cocks on a daily basis

both looked like they didn't try or over tried tbh... i was generous w/ quotes, but I have to give it to Leth simply because he was more polished...

vote Leth

[Flash]

Face it bitch, you're lackin experience and act like a total retard
You can't be hard when you're the reason they call it a fuckin V Card

vs.

nothing

kinda dissapointed.. i expected vinz to do some crazy shit to prove himself n shit but he didnt do much. leth didnt have anything either but what i quoted was ok but too straight forward.

v-leth

[The Gwapfather]

Face it bitch, you're lackin experience and act like a total retard
You can't be hard when you're the reason they call it a fuckin V Card

VS

nothing


OVERALL:

No hate to Vinzr, but you didn't have anything that really hit homie, Leth didn't do a ton for me either but he had a couple solid bars, some just needed a bit more work on em, Leth gets my vote though, he had the only real hit and didn't miss as much as Vinzr did..


VOTE: LETHARGIC

[Knux]

Leth wins