I am I

[Sykonaut]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...html?p=8361932
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...113/index.html




Hopefully the beat and sound is better now.

[Sykonaut]

Sorry fixed the video, it wasn't playing for some reason >.<

[Longway]

This is on some different type shit.... Quality is a real issue but I love what you came with.... would sound real dope if you actually had some solid equipment cause you have a really tight recording voice


Please return the favor

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...023/index.html

[Sykonaut]

Thanks yeah I know it sounds okay with headphones but through speakers it's shit >.< I have a good mic I'm just doing something wrong when I mix it. Too much db?

[Mr. Write]

Not really sure what to make of this to be honest. Lyrics were pretty cool actually, but the beat was monotonous and weird. It was almost like some spoken word with a horrible beat in the background. Delivery and emotion were good, but flow completely clashed with the beat. Its like you wrote down your verse, had what you wanted to say, then performed it over a generic fruity loops sample. Quality could be better but you already know that. Basically, Good lyrics, interesting sound, but didnt work with the instrumental.

[Sykonaut]

Appreciate it I kinda feel the same way I am reworking this currently

[DeathChamberz]

Sounds like some dub poetry lyricsm is there but it doesn't seem to match the beat at all no rhythmic rules behind how you are spitting. It would actually sound better if you spit this on a accpeella to appreciate the writing.

refeed


http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...787/index.html


http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...912/index.html

[Sykonaut]

I'm working on the beatand audio quality, I know there is something missing it is a kind of empty beat, but I can fix it this was a real quick song, like 45 minutes, including writing as I recorded, I do very much appreciate the critique's