20 bars
Due 24 hrs
20 bars
Due 24 hrs
Last edited by Donald Trump; March 28th, 2015 at 07:18 PM
Good bars, my Dude...I got you.
My 2nd battle on RB, shiiit, now I gotta face E the Real?
This muthafucker’s generously offering me a cap to peel, 1
Ur verses: weak, full of references to movies,
Ur a molehill, bitch ass, it takes mountains just to move me, 2
Did some research, read your posts, one conclusion: You’re a faggot,
Smelt ur girl’s pussy, like ewww, good decision to double bag it, 3
I was stalling, cuz she’s fugly, she told me to “Get the lead out”
Thought better to shoot ropes down her throat,
blew the back of her fucking head out, 4
and no, I wont lie, used her grill as a bullseye,
cocked back & unloaded, dropped my goo in her “good” eye, 5
E, your hoe’s mad flirtatious, several times I caught her winking,
Didn’t know my jizz was like super glue, prevents the trick from ever blinking, 6
Sorry, back to dissin’ E,
aint a thing but to do it, effortlessly, 7
Opp ass n**ga, Don’t want none of the Wrath,
“Pussy ass clown”, written on the first line of your epitaph, 8
Wrath One rips the Richter scale,
Abusive on the mic til it’s time to bail, 9
E’s scribing mad hard, to little avail,
Time to drop the hammer on this fuckin penny nail 10
C’mon, E, You a REAL n**ga? Please..
Bars smelling booty, mad covered in fleas, 11
Or are those bedbugs? Fronting, like one of these ghetto thugs, 12
Word to God, perpetrating, that ur strapped with the llama,
Bout time, someone sent his bitchboy back home to his momma 13
Hyperventilating on her shoulder, crying bout ur issues,
Flubbering, stuttering, using up all momma’s tissues 14
Stay the fuck home, E, instead of coming to these fields,
Next time bring artillery, not used up panty shields, 15
My verse’s Shrapnel, severing ur arteries and capillaries,
All too easy to decapitate this fuckin’ fairy 16
My prominence is dominant, Dude, u wondering where ur momma went? 17
Down on deez nuts, giving brains to the tyrant,
That’s what happens when I vent, concocting shit all violent 18
Ur transparent, muthafucker, more like a mirage,
Step up to the Wrath, Nephew, get hit with a barrage, 19
My stylo’s fire like molten steel, tearing thru ur sinews,
Ur shit’s soft like twinkie filling, straight up …discontinued. 20
(took em off the shelves)
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No offense to ur girl & ur momma, y'know...that's jus how we throw...
Last edited by Massaker; February 17th, 2015 at 05:52 PM
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post8674580
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?483778-Lenox-vs-Professor-Frost-OPEN-FOR-VOTES&p=8674585&posted=1#post8674585
20 bars due in 24 hrs
I get to review 40 lines of fed & ancient shit
i'll give a grand budapest like im watching your favorite flick
Your a fanboy at best, it's vital not to fuck with E
I got grapes of wrath while noob fanning me & it's no bible study
Only thing he retains is a purity ring & sponge bob mouthpiece
Your bed ain't seen action, since you wet the Wreck it Ralph sheets
How about thinking of wordplay you wrote yourself?
I got a sickburn in my verse, your sickburn is below the belt
Girl has a primitive vybe & looks Basic
Ur girl lookin like masterpiece, on some 12 years a slave shit
Thought dropping 40 bars would scare E or be fun???
I'm colder than that shower u take after brokeback mountain re-runs
Slut always surrounded by dicks, you cant stand it too
Last time ur girl had a 3d view... Imax banned the dudes
A face made for re-enacted crime scenes i'd lose pride geek
so hideous that people quit on you during hide & seek
Slept on? Please not taking vets advice is weak
sleep on me & your girl wont shit right for a week
New kid in the block claims he's god & narley
But Only time you hear voters give one love, is singing bob marley
Lenox fanboy & alternate for a Glee club
Only wrath i ever felt, was my wifes for leaving the toilet seat up
Shitty lines take more time to get than a Letterman spit
My lines fucking pierce as Halle berry in a 007 flick
Your a d-leaguer at best & all you do is fight pride
In miami, if your the center of attention... I'm Hassan whiteside
A close casket face, i got the brass to tell ya
Your face got more blackheads then the cast of Selma
Dates a backpage masseuse & wants cred bitch
such a lifeless fuck... pimps nicknamed her deadfish
Washed up? You were never known as good here
Me Stepping on competition has more appeal then Suhs career
i'll drink you under the bar with cinnamon whisky @ parties yo
This Flake wont fuck with fireballs playing the original super mario
Breast fed adult & the lonely boy still takes a bottle
Known to Miss MA more than a massachusetts state model
I can't take anything serious this troll writes
If Your tough as nails... your about to play the role of christ
Double bar battlers never have anything great to say
Smh @!Idiot thought the ghost busters logo was the end of the KKK
Last edited by Massaker; February 17th, 2015 at 05:49 PM
I have to post this vote in two because tap a talk is a cunt
My 2nd battle on RB, shiiit, now I gotta face E the Real?
This muthafucker’s generously offering me a cap to peel, 1
Close but no cigar.
Ur verses: weak, full of references to movies,
Ur a molehill, bitch ass, it takes mountains just to move me, 2
No
Did some research, read your posts, one conclusion: You’re a faggot,
Smelt ur girl’s pussy, like ewww, good decision to double bag it, 3
No
I was stalling, cuz she’s fugly, she told me to “Get the lead out”
Thought better to shoot ropes down her throat,
Didn't even rhyme
blew the back of her fucking head out, 4
and no, I wont lie, used her grill as a bullseye,
cocked back & unloaded, dropped my goo in her “good” eye, 5
Nope
E, your hoe’s mad flirtatious, several times I caught her winking,
Didn’t know my jizz was like super glue, prevents the trick from ever blinking, 6
Sorry, back to dissin’ E,
Again.. No
aint a thing but to do it, effortlessly, 7
Opp ass n**ga, Don’t want none of the Wrath,
“Pussy ass clown”, written on the first line of your epitaph, 8
What?
Wrath One rips the Richter scale,
Abusive on the mic til it’s time to bail, 9
E’s scribing mad hard, to little avail,
Time to drop the hammer on this fuckin penny nail 10
Trying to make multis over punches will never work.
C’mon, E, You a REAL n**ga? Please..
Bars smelling booty, mad covered in fleas, 11
Please kill me.
Or are those bedbugs? Fronting, like one of these ghetto thugs, 12
No
Word to God, perpetrating, that ur strapped with the llama,
Bout time, someone sent his bitchboy back home to his momma 13
Stfu
Hyperventilating on her shoulder, crying bout ur issues,
Flubbering, stuttering, using up all momma’s tissues 14
I hate u.
Stay the fuck home, E, instead of coming to these fields,
Next time bring artillery, not used up panty shields, 15
Don't know what panty shields are..
My verse’s Shrapnel, severing ur arteries and capillaries,
All too easy to decapitate this fuckin’ fairy 16
No.
My prominence is dominant, Dude, u wondering where ur momma went? 17
Huh?
Down on deez nuts, giving brains to the tyrant,
That’s what happens when I vent, concocting shit all violent 18
Statement.
Ur transparent, muthafucker, more like a mirage,
Step up to the Wrath, Nephew, get hit with a barrage, 19
No
My stylo’s fire like molten steel, tearing thru ur sinews,
Ur shit’s soft like twinkie filling, straight up …discontinued. 20
Horrible..
VS
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I get to review 40 lines of fed & ancient shit
i'll give a grand budapest like im watching your favorite flick
Eh.. Ok.
Your a fanboy at best, it's vital not to fuck with E
I got grapes of wrath while noob fanning me & it's no bible study
Choppy asf.
Only thing he retains is a purity ring & sponge bob mouthpiece
Your bed ain't seen action, since you wet the Wreck it Ralph sheets
Lmao
How about thinking of wordplay you wrote yourself?
I got a sickburn in my verse, your sickburn is below the belt
Ok
Girl has a primitive vybe & looks Basic
Ur girl lookin like masterpiece, on some 12 years a slave shit
Nice
Thought dropping 40 bars would scare E or be fun???
I'm colder than that shower u take after brokeback mountain re-runs
Lol
Slut always surrounded by dicks, you cant stand it too
Last time ur girl had a 3d view... Imax banned the dudes
Nah
A face made for re-enacted crime scenes i'd lose pride geek
so hideous that people quit on you during hide & seek
No
Slept on? Please not taking vets advice is weak
sleep on me & your girl wont shit right for a week
Weak/week?? Come on bro...
New kid in the block claims he's god & narley
But Only time you hear voters give one love, is singing bob marley
Lenox fanboy & alternate for a Glee club
Only wrath i ever felt, was my wifes for leaving the toilet seat up
Eh.
Shitty lines take more time to get than a Letterman spit
My lines fucking pierce as Halle berry in a 007 flick
Nice.
Your a d-leaguer at best & all you do is fight pride
In miami, if your the center of attention... I'm Hassan whiteside
Uh..
A close casket face, i got the brass to tell ya
Your face got more blackheads then the cast of Selma
Nice..
Dates a backpage masseuse & wants cred bitch
such a lifeless fuck... pimps nicknamed her deadfish
No
Washed up? You were never known as good here
Me Stepping on competition has more appeal then Suhs career
Who?
i'll drink you under the bar with cinnamon whisky @ parties yo
This Flake wont fuck with fireballs playing the original super mario
Cool
Breast fed adult & the lonely boy still takes a bottle
Known to Miss MA more than a massachusetts state model
Nah
I can't take anything serious this troll writes
If Your tough as nails... your about to play the role of christ
Not really feeling it.. Close though.
Double bar battlers never have anything great to say
Smh @!Idiot thought the ghost busters logo was the end of the KKK
Lmao.
Overall: wrath is a cock sucker who counts his bars.. A first for RB.. & is also worst then yoda.. Therefore..
Vote: E
Last edited by Donald Trump; March 28th, 2015 at 07:15 PM
I get to review 40 lines of fed & ancient shit
i'll give a grand budapest like im watching your favorite flick
Weak Opener
Your a fanboy at best, it's vital not to fuck with E
I got grapes of wrath while noob fanning me & it's no bible study
Forced Rhyme Scheme but see what u were shooting for creativity there
Only thing he retains is a purity ring & sponge bob mouthpiece
Your bed ain't seen action, since you wet the Wreck it Ralph sheets
humorous
How about thinking of wordplay you wrote yourself?
I got a sickburn in my verse, your sickburn is below the belt
Played Concept but decent STD Flip so good
Girl has a primitive vybe & looks Basic
Ur girl lookin like masterpiece, on some 12 years a slave shit
Like how your trying to keep shit creative
Thought dropping 40 bars would scare E or be fun???
I'm colder than that shower u take after brokeback mountain re-runs
again humorous but not that hard
Slut always surrounded by dicks, you cant stand it too
Last time ur girl had a 3d view... Imax banned the dudes
weak joke fam
A face made for re-enacted crime scenes i'd lose pride geek
so hideous that people quit on you during hide & seek
miss
Slept on? Please not taking vets advice is weak
sleep on me & your girl wont shit right for a week
ya better then that bro
New kid in the block claims he's god & narley
But Only time you hear voters give one love, is singing bob marley
Cool Concept Couldve Been Harder
Lenox fanboy & alternate for a Glee club
Only wrath i ever felt, was my wifes for leaving the toilet seat up
Cool Concept doesnt hit too hard
Shitty lines take more time to get than a Letterman spit
My lines fucking pierce as Halle berry in a 007 flick
Nice Punch Creative
Your a d-leaguer at best & all you do is fight pride
In miami, if your the center of attention... I'm Hassan whiteside
not really feeling
A close casket face, i got the brass to tell ya
Your face got more blackheads then the cast of Selma
Cool Punch idk if its personal or not
Dates a backpage masseuse & wants cred bitch
such a lifeless fuck... pimps nicknamed her deadfish
not feeling
Washed up? You were never known as good here
Me Stepping on competition has more appeal then Suhs career
dont really understand tbh
i'll drink you under the bar with cinnamon whisky @ parties yo
This Flake wont fuck with fireballs playing the original super mario
Cool concept but coulda been stronger if made more battle oriented
Breast fed adult & the lonely boy still takes a bottle
Known to Miss MA more than a massachusetts state model
weak bar
I can't take anything serious this troll writes
If Your tough as nails... your about to play the role of christ
not feeling the flip
Double bar battlers never have anything great to say
Smh @!Idiot thought the ghost busters logo was the end of the KKK
Jokes for days in this battle lol
wrath
My 2nd battle on RB, shiiit, now I gotta face E the Real?
This muthafucker’s generously offering me a cap to peel, 1
no hit
Ur verses: weak, full of references to movies,
Ur a molehill, bitch ass, it takes mountains just to move me, 2
not fit for text
Did some research, read your posts, one conclusion: You’re a faggot,
Smelt ur girl’s pussy, like ewww, good decision to double bag it, 3
not hard
I was stalling, cuz she’s fugly, she told me to “Get the lead out”
Thought better to shoot ropes down her throat,
blew the back of her fucking head out, 4
cool concept
and no, I wont lie, used her grill as a bullseye,
cocked back & unloaded, dropped my goo in her “good” eye, 5
nah its gettin a lil much with ur focus on his chick or w,e
E, your hoe’s mad flirtatious, several times I caught her winking,
Didn’t know my jizz was like super glue, prevents the trick from ever blinking, 6
shoulda stopped after lead line
Sorry, back to dissin’ E,
aint a thing but to do it, effortlessly, 7
nothing there
Opp ass n**ga, Don’t want none of the Wrath,
“Pussy ass clown”, written on the first line of your epitaph, 8
weak concept coulda been worded better
Wrath One rips the Richter scale,
Abusive on the mic til it’s time to bail, 9
no punch
E’s scribing mad hard, to little avail,
Time to drop the hammer on this fuckin penny nail 10
no bro
C’mon, E, You a REAL n**ga? Please..
Bars smelling booty, mad covered in fleas, 11
its like ur freestylin rhyming whatever
Or are those bedbugs? Fronting, like one of these ghetto thugs, 12
Word to God, perpetrating, that ur strapped with the llama,
Bout time, someone sent his bitchboy back home to his momma 13
no and y is 12 just one line
Hyperventilating on her shoulder, crying bout ur issues,
Flubbering, stuttering, using up all momma’s tissues 14
weak bro
Stay the fuck home, E, instead of coming to these fields,
Next time bring artillery, not used up panty shields, 15
your fading man
My verse’s Shrapnel, severing ur arteries and capillaries,
All too easy to decapitate this fuckin’ fairy 16
ended weak
My prominence is dominant, Dude, u wondering where ur momma went? 17
Down on deez nuts, giving brains to the tyrant,
That’s what happens when I vent, concocting shit all violent 18
again no pucnh or personal n a one line bar on 17
Ur transparent, muthafucker, more like a mirage,
Step up to the Wrath, Nephew, get hit with a barrage, 19
u start with a punch n end with self hype?
My stylo’s fire like molten steel, tearing thru ur sinews,
Ur shit’s soft like twinkie filling, straight up …discontinued. 20
(took em off the shelves)
prob ur best attempt
Vote: E the Real for actual punches wrath had no structure to set up punches nor punches to end with it was more like a audio freestyle ..E had creativity and humor.. punches coulda hit harder but he was on the right track
nothing
vs
Slut always surrounded by dicks, you cant stand it too
Last time ur girl had a 3d view... Imax banned the dudes
Lenox fanboy & alternate for a Glee club
Only wrath i ever felt, was my wifes for leaving the toilet seat up
A close casket face, i got the brass to tell ya
Your face got more blackheads then the cast of Selma
One sided battle. I'm not leaving incredible feed on this because reading it took long enough. Wrath need to check some LLL battles or something and get a better idea of how to form a punch=. E got this/.
V/E
To me this was pretty one sided. Wrath seemed to have rushed the verse and never got into a flow. The concepts lacked a little which didnt mix with the lack of flow. I definitely see if you fix the structure to start and then flow will be easier to get a handle on.
E you had a solid verse. Filled with consistent punches and that landed. The middle part really was nice lol you kept the pressure on the whole verse, for those reasons....
Vote-E
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Nobody was consistent as it's hard for anyone to be consistent for 40 lines lol, but throughout this E kept jabbing and wrath kept missing so although nothing really stood out from both sides, e bad the more technically sound verse while wrath was all over the place. So my vote here goes to e the real for a better harder hitting verse
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