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Thread: Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0) Miracle wins

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    Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0) Miracle wins

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    Re: Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0)

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    Re: Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0)

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    Re: Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0)

    scratch
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    Last edited by Networth; October 18th, 2019 at 12:16 PM Reason: Cause Miracle is pussy

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    Re: Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0)

    Bro.. Im not writing 16 lines... Shit say 10lines..i havent wrote a verse in 5yrs... You need to edit that shit to 10 bro.. No hate i just dont have time for that shit

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    Quote Originally Posted by miracle View Post
    Bro.. Im not writing 16 lines... Shit say 10lines..i havent wrote a verse in 5yrs... You need to edit that shit to 10 bro.. No hate i just dont have time for that shit
    S'why u'll never write for the green, w/ quotes like that can yall tell he ready?
    You aint bust off in five years? Then U should have blue balls Not a yellow belly!
    Coward keep it quiet and leave, snuffin fucks like you is how I became violent
    Don't be shocked not to hear'em again, Miranda glock gotta right to remain silent.
    He'll be This close to his last breath, as I flatten his chest like a sports bra
    I'll beat u within an inch of your life, Mir I think yu just drew the short straw!
    Back from hiatis wit new rules.. Cole makin them kinda demands'll get u shot
    How could you be so insistent on the windows, can't tell if I got a fullclip or not?
    The mag reads like a toss up, well u better shogun damn you cuz im skeptical
    Naw Im just samurai got honor to fight for, n I wish dude would commit Seppuku!



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    Re: Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0)

    @miracle 10 it is
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    Re: Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0)

    Glad u are going 10, And im not trying to get a thank u from people that vote
    I just couldnt fucking imaging having to read 16lines that you wrote
    we can freestyle bar 4 bar..go ahead, spit them rhymes coming out your head
    but the second you pull a blankets, over like scared kids in bed
    2 guns in my fists i''ll unload clips..you don't wanna die? I bet
    With both sides i'm pulling, and you will die from this magnet
    His wife is a slut,  So going home is something he dreads
    guy's showing up outta no where to get IN that bitch more than week 7 sign up threads
    You won our 3way fight in 1-2.. For voters It was a close race
    But if any1's on the fence in this battle it's to see me stomping your face

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    Re: Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    S'why u'll never write for the green, w/ quotes like that can yall tell he ready?
    You aint bust off in five years? Then U should have blue balls Not a yellow belly!
    He'll be This close to his last breath, as I flatten his chest like a sports bra
    I'll beat u within an inch of your life, Mir I think yu just drew the short straw!

    vs

    we can freestyle bar 4 bar..go ahead, spit them rhymes coming out your head
    but the second you pull a blankets, over like scared kids in bed


    those are the best bar from both for me...


    V- Net ….I can notice subtle improvements to ur approaches...

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    Re: Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    bump, brb with vote

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    Re: Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

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    Coward keep it quiet and leave, snuffin fucks like you is how I became violent
    Don't be shocked not to hear'em again, Miranda glock gotta right to remain silent.

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    Glad u are going 10, And im not trying to get a thank u from people that vote
    I just couldnt fucking imaging having to read 16lines that you wrote
    You won our 3way fight in 1-2.. For voters It was a close race
    But if any1's on the fence in this battle it's to see me stomping your face

    basically it comes down to these bars for me, I got networth having the miranda bar and stomping your face, and 16 lines that you wrote goes to mir, I feel myrical was going for networth's throat more than he was going at myrical, I mean he has the personal about networth wanting to do 16 lines, and basically saying networth wasn't worth that, it could of been a viscous punch to, but it did what it needed to win IMO. I got myrical edging this.

    V/myrical

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    Re: Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    I got it smack deadeven 3-3
    Sports bra
    Miranda
    Quote punch
    Vs
    Opener
    Fence and
    the week 7 punch made me smile nice way to add humor
    There were some misses and some filler in both, I got it smack even, I'm yelling tie

    Vote-draw

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    Re: Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    S'why u'll never write for the green, w/ quotes like that can yall tell he ready?
    You aint bust off in five years? Then U should have blue balls Not a yellow belly!
    Coward keep it quiet and leave, snuffin fucks like you is how I became violent
    Don't be shocked not to hear'em again, Miranda glock gotta right to remain silent.

    vs

    we can freestyle bar 4 bar..go ahead, spit them rhymes coming out your head
    but the second you pull a blankets, over like scared kids in bed
    2 guns in my fists i''ll unload clips..you don't wanna die? I bet
    With both sides i'm pulling, and you will die from this magnet

    i got it even in quotes but i think nets yellow belly line was a nice personal attack and lotb so hes gonna get my vote

    v/ networth

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    Re: Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    S'why u'll never write for the green, w/ quotes like that can yall tell he ready?
    You aint bust off in five years? Then U should have blue balls Not a yellow belly!
    ...good concept even tho it was obv after reading the quote, not a fan of the delivery and wording. Decent....
    Coward keep it quiet and leave, snuffin fucks like you is how I became violent
    Don't be shocked not to hear'em again, Miranda glock gotta right to remain silent.
    ...its miranda rights but I'll over look that even tho u coulda worded it to include rights. How does a glock have the right to remain silent? It has the ability not the right. This coulda been nice but as is its aite...
    The mag reads like a toss up, well u better shogun damn you cuz im skeptical
    Naw Im just samurai got honor to fight for, n I wish dude would commit Seppuku!
    ...good idea delivered poorly....

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    Glad u are going 10, And im not trying to get a thank u from people that vote
    I just couldnt fucking imaging having to read 16lines that you wrote
    ...well written but to obv...
    we can freestyle bar 4 bar..go ahead, spit them rhymes coming out your head
    but the second you pull a blankets, over like scared kids in bed
    ...cool...
    2 guns in my fists i''ll unload clips..you don't wanna die? I bet
    With both sides i'm pulling, and you will die from this magnet
    ...worded odd but it hit, felt u coulda done more with it tho...
    His wife is a slut, So going home is something he dreads
    guy's showing up outta no where to get IN that bitch more than week 7 sign up threads
    ...decent....
    You won our 3way fight in 1-2.. For voters It was a close race
    But if any1's on the fence in this battle it's to see me stomping your face
    ...lol cool...


    Overall this battle was better than expected, I can tell yall elevating and taking suggestions and implementing them. Keep writing you'll keep getting better.

    This was a close battle both were consistent which is the first thing I look at, miracle had one or two solid connections tho whereas net stayed in the decent area. Miracles verse was a smoother more enjoyable read. Good battle


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    Re: Week 7: Networth (4-2) vs Miracle (0-0) OPEN FOR VOTES

    3-3 bump

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