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  1. December 28th, 2003, 08:21 PM #1
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    freestyle

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    tell wot u think of this shit
    little on off the top

    You think you having me...hold it clown
    I got a crew like gravity....we hold shit down
    stab u in the ankle....make you roll around(yeah)
    Ima reckless mo'fucka....like drunk drivers
    Take ya necklace mo'fucka....Im drunk wild
    raised no dad jus a mother....Ima punk child
    No morals no manners....gonna end up in Parva
    hoods and bandanas.....no gucci no Prada
    Screwdrivers and hammers....We aint fixing no cars up
    This aint no Hears'say....Its pure and simple
    Fuck wit katz u gonna popped like a pimple






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  2. December 28th, 2003, 10:00 PM #2
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    you got any better shit hommie. danm I know that was just off the top of your head but I need to see somthing better
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  3. December 28th, 2003, 10:12 PM #3
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    Sounds like Run-DMC, circa 1987. Those were good times, but it's time to update and upgrade, Mr. Katz. Also: drunk drivers suck.
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  4. December 28th, 2003, 10:21 PM #4
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    I agree with the above 2 posts... You really need to elevate man. There is no complexity to your form... Flow is futile... it's like you trying to battle your way out of a paper bag... but can't because you aint got no punchiness to it. Nowadays people looked to be entertained, educated and / or enlightened by a piece... this did neither for me. It sounds more like you were in a rap battle that you were losing.

    So reallly, though this may sound like an attack... it's really not. I suggest you maybe attempting due some Topical stuff to build that creative side of your game.

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    You think you having me...hold it clown
    I got a crew like gravity....we hold shit down

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    stab u in the ankle....make you roll around(yeah)
    Ima reckless mo'fucka....like drunk drivers

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  5. December 29th, 2003, 05:26 AM #5
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    aiiight thanx. I think
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  6. December 29th, 2003, 09:15 AM #6
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    firstly its not got long enough barz....just dont flow right....the rhyming needs expanded on and internals would really help this along....jus work on one thing at a time though and youll get it....pZ...jus elevate...
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  7. December 29th, 2003, 09:24 AM #7
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    Its descent, but i was expecting a little more hommie...

    Try to use some better vocab in your freestyles dogg.....
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  8. December 29th, 2003, 09:38 AM #8
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    It was okay. It seemed simple. I wasn't really feeln' it. It wasn't terrible though. You had some good punches in there.
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  9. December 29th, 2003, 10:41 AM #9
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    ..this was weak..very weak..your content,flow,wordplay..everything seemed out of order..
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