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    Career: Microsoft Painter

    We're all born ordinary, although miss verity called commentary
    Yea it's a God complex, when he found Moses caught courting Mary
    Short stories ended, but just as they did life sentences started
    tentative laughing replacing points of view, tension is pardoned
    We evolve in non norm shadows, working in search of false profits
    translated body language when being made to make forced comments
    Here in shoes that are too big and my inner child is a man stuck
    my mirror image is that of one that'll bring me 7 years of bad luck
    Put my hands up, as I give up, that's the only giving I'll give
    it's just the way that life's testing me for this D, missing a kin
    Piston of sin, spinning, condition- 3rd eye vision crimson tinted
    beaten within an inch of life, but life and death is within inches
    Coherent to this whole purpose appearance of above-board existence
    but why live for the moment, if every moment is done in fear of?
    I'd rather peel off from routine dawn breakers and sunrise wakers
    so I can harbor a voice of my own and become my very own hater
    I'd be mad at myself for being a product of such a foreign path
    from A to B like the blueprint was a dot-to-dot, the common graft
    Anyone would take-over from a price tag, how do you value yourself?
    all that glitters is not Gold, its not how you tower your wealth!
    Because the power was dealt, I have bad hands, no grip on reality
    I drop knowledge, I can't hold my sanity it's shown systematically
    So as I sit and bleed my heart my two cents are worth chicken feed
    people catch their Z's from me, no-one cares, it's a given, see?!
    People think they see how the pigeons see, prospect high and mighty
    What a load of non-sense, it'll go up in the incense of fire lighting
    Empire tyrants pilot this plain sailing, they're trained Damiens
    was it even a contest playing preying to these war game assailants?!
    I'm poor and staying it, wasting this [space] and state of living
    showing this obsolete feat that paced my prison, grace decisions
    Only to haste positions I'm in, it's a case of chasing the wind
    as the anxiety begins, my high spirits are in that case for the gin
    Face is the twin of a distoreted image that landed on Picasso's canvas
    And I guess that's it..standard! As a matter of fact!
    Last edited by N-Demik; January 17th, 2004 at 06:19 PM

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    ''Give and you shall Receive'' - Joseph lol. .

    I liked this piece even tho` Joseph tisn't God. . but yeeah. .
    Great vocab per usual and everytime you use biblical reference
    it always seems to be relevant. . which is a good thing. . My
    part is:

    We evolve in non norm shadows, working in search of false profits
    translated body language when being made to make forced comments
    People shouldn't be sleeping on this. . Word to this line:

    people catch their Z's from me, no-one cares, it's a given, see?!
    All in all, a very nice piece. . keep it up dude. . and
    write about something more happier.
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    ..Never read anything but amazing from you..and it probaly won't change anytime soon...

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    Thank you for the replies you two.

    Don't make me start that God convo again lol..

    Anyway..appreciate it.

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    Wow, u use a dope level of vocab , .. :O Good story painted here, w/ a solid flow.. nice, a little poetic thingy do it, real enjoyable to read..

    Can u hit up my Day and night..preciate that = ) .

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    Quote Originally Posted by N-Demik
    Thanks for the reply Ed..Appreciate it

    ...I think I'll down this as 3 replies is a little.. eh LOL

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    dope
    you and maven are the only peoples verse ive read today which are quality..
    kind of sad really
    anyway
    plenty of quotables..none of which i'll be quoting
    nah errmm..

    'We evolve in non norm shadows, working in search of false profits
    translated body language when being made to make forced comments
    Here in shoes that are too big and my inner child is a man stuck
    my mirror image is that of one that'll bring me 7 years of bad luck
    ^ill

    I'd rather peel off from routine dawn breakers and sunrise wakers
    so I can harbor a voice of my own and become my very own hater
    yup^

    when i started reading it i thought heres one of them verses trying to incorporate as much vocab as possible while making no sense stylee things
    but i was pleasantly surprised
    really got into this and understood what you were talking about..i think
    props
    check mine..i'd like some feedback if possible
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    Thankies for the feedback man =)

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    ok I got a few things to say....
    one thing is very very dope imagery!
    and second... very ill multis!
    whole piece was on tact and topic...
    keep droppin and hit up my 2part story...
    ....Dead..To..Live....
    and
    ....Dead..To..Live....(II)
    both are done and in OM
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    Put down the pebbles in my hand, climbed a ladder, put a brick right through your window.
    "You're gonna hear me out." Yeah, hear me out on this!

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    Thanks for reading

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    Wish i could say the same o.O =(

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    Mostly a tight piece with a plethora of vocabulary touches... but i think it was a bit rushed... felt like the meaning got twisted by attempts to add multis... the structure was tight but didn't vary much so there is an area to consider uppin...

    good work overall...

    {Peace}

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    I will I admit that I probably did rush it..I dunno..I just kinda do that nowadays *Shrugs*

    But I don't think my multis threw the piece off-topic..all in all it was a piece about me being a nobody.

    Thanks for the reply though

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