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Thread: As I Glance Back

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    OG Poet, er some shit.
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    As I Glance Back

    As I Glance Back


    Rewinding my mind into a poet’s lost times
    Reversing the future, stepping back through the stop sign
    Reminiscing my feeling for a poet’s flowing remembrance
    Beautiful memories come back to my undying dependence

    Glancing back through struggles which I could not break
    Living through heartless moments which no one can ever relate
    Written upon the slate of this lost poets bleeding page
    Never forgetting my life, as I’m seeing through each age

    Timeless recordings of voices that are lost in my head
    Missing links to written poetry that has never been read
    Forgive me mankind, for anything ungrateful I have said
    I know now I will leap back, before I ever race ahead
    Looking back, I make an oath that I will never move forward again
    When I glance behind, I move on, to make countless poetic threads

    As I gaze upon the mirror, I notice an unknown face
    Who returns his past experiences upon the human race
    He lives for unknown reasons in the rewound place
    Fast forwarding in the opposite direction as my story takes place

    As I long for the end, I reach upon light from the open door
    I recognize this scenario, I know I have seen it before
    As the tape rewinds, it blinds the youth from useless minds
    As I glance back once again, I repeat my final rhyme

    The mirror breaks, time has cracked, everything known has torn apart
    Reaching the end, only to find that it is repetitive to the start
    Last edited by Bloom.Quist; May 15th, 2004 at 03:28 AM
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    Uppin. Can i get some replies on this please?
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    Respond...Sleep...
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    Never got one reply...this place is dead...uppin...
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    SOMEONE REPLY!!! 7 days without a reply...damnn
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    Damn, I'm surprised that this was slept on. It's a very good piece. The message was that of two sides. To you poetry is a great thing and that you love to write, but the other side is that a repetition. You're running out of inspiration and everything seems to be repeating itself. The repetition is annoying but the joy of writing poetry that you can be proud of is great.
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    Finally a respones Thanks homie. Appreciate the feedback.
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