hey all, I wrote this piece for mother's day, which I know was awhile ago, but I'm finally getting around to posting it, any feedback is appreciated, thanks
A Mother's Poem
A mother is a person who is there through heaven and through hell
A mother will be there, when you are sick or when you’re well
A mother is a person who will always love and always care
A mother is a person who is there when the hallway’s bare
When everyone else has left, too busy with their life
A mother will be there, a mother will be right
And even if you think she’s not, and if sometimes you think she’s dumb
A mother will be there, when you have no place to run
A mother will be there, with her arms always open wide
Even if you have no place run, you always have a place to hide
A place where everything is nice, a place that makes you feel you’re loved
A place that makes you realize there is someone above
Looking down on everyone, and doing what he can
Working with mothers everywhere, to turn a boy into a man
It may be tough, you may give up, and sometimes it may be hard
But there will always be a special place for you, inside a young one’s heart
And although he may not always say those three words you want to hear
And even though his life window may not be crystal clear
He does love you, this is the truth, and truth it will always be
Now I guess I should say “I love you”, instead of always “me”