.InTr0. vs The MC

[The MC]

up 2....vote plz!

[The MC]

up 3

[Fre$hmeat]

this is a "Fre$h" battle its pimperish(thats my word bitch)
this go for MC

[The MC]

up 4......i will return favors i am active now

[Rule.]

MC..

Kid must be a schitzo,thinkin he'll win yo,
Why u call yaself intro,when this is ya end hoe,
Decent
Your a bitch,i can see it right thru u like a window,
U don't even "matter fams",YOUR NOT CARL WINSLO,
Nah..
Your more pussy than a cherry tree,isn't scary b?,
He's "pissed when he spits",like when after the tooth fairy pees,
Wtf? .. filler
Nigga thinks he "runs the roads" just cuz he yells out beep beep,
Retard wouldn't be "down" even if he had a deep sleep!,
Beginning was wack. Finisher was meh
His fucken flow's worse than a broken faucet,
THIS KID MUST BE LOSEN HIS HEAD LIKE AN ALQUEDA HOSTAGE!,
Nope.

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Intro-

OMG nigga, he's so lame..
Dropped a verse.. seems ill only need three letters to B O K
...?
lets even say each flow paid..
My verse'll be Fucking with Chips, mc couldnt get a Frito Lay
Forced.
my lyrics stretch out slindid..
Fuck a solid verse, hed prolly kill himself tryin to run-on sentence
Meh
either this cat's dying or he got nine lives..
or a doctor that can stetch out his life like time lines
Blah
I even tried to make this closer..
but they see whos the wackest of us two.. My verse showed them its over
Weak..

Overall, this was one sided, but still not that great of a battle. MC, you had a lot of newbish lines.. wtf was the 'beep beep' shit? C'mon.. both of you need to up your game. Intro, you actually had some promising concepts and ideas, just learn how to word them and work them into punches & personals.

Vote / The MC

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=151658
Thanks.

[Madd Preacher]

.....no need for overall battle feed.....just read ya shit

both emcees came super weak...but MC edged the opponent off by a margin....MC came with better punches than intro....you have the ideas down...but your punches deliver very weak....

Intro....u need help man..

OMG nigga, he's so lame..
Dropped a verse.. seems ill only need three letters to B O K
lets even say each flow paid..
My verse'll be Fucking with Chips, mc couldnt get a Frito Lay


u tryin to write a poem o somethin...where every other line rhymes....nah man....dont do that....

n the fact that you used the frito lay rhyme....you lost buku points on that sitcho....

vote - MC

igido

peep:


http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148542

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=151879

[The MC]

up 5................................................. ........

[Amp]

This battle wasn't anything developed at all. Very newbie like punches from both, no real personals except for maybe a name play. Flow wasn't totally on-point, but the MC had a better structure. No real creativity from either. Both should up their vocab and complexity to overall help their veres. Also, work on punches. This battle wasn't the greatest but The MC had enough to pull it off and get my vote.

Keep elevating.

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[BIGGUNZ]

cant vote afficialy but would have to say MC, he was nicer to read