Flim
Teddy
ya...alright battle.................teddy you could have worded better.......but good...........flim........good vocab....weak punches..................but my vote is.........
V/ TeddyBear awwwwwwwwww
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^^^ who is this dumbass??? lol aight yo tha big breakdown....
Teddy: ya rhymes was simple... but good. your opener was fuckin awesome!!! i laughed at that one... your punches was aight could use some elevatin tho... but still good... and your closer was pretty good.... hard to understand but i thought bout it and got it....
Flim: change that muppet shit f'real!!! but anyway lol, yah rhymes was simple to, u had bad structure tho! i hate when peeps write they rhymes like that! ya opener was gay... had nuffin to do wit teddy... ur punches... wack f'real.... ur closer... horrible... elevate much
overall teddy had better.... everything!!!
v/teddy
bitch
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fear is a throbred nucca........................
come on i know i used all my uppins but this is gay shits like weeks old please finish this...
yo that battle was ight but i saw more onto teddy's side of tha battle homie's nicer rhymin n shit and also netted shit together!!!!
v/ teddy yo teddy repay tha favor on ma battle in ma sig!! respect
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This guys a pedophile like the muppets in his sig/
Big bird plays with children and so does this kid/
personal. . not a great punch but at least it was personal
Sesame street died years ago so should this fool/
Can of gas in my hand bitch your to be my fuel/
didn't quite make sense. . you said you had a 'can of gas'. . so why would your opponent be your fuel?
Like a fish on a hook this kid will be struggling/
While i take my words and just start juggling/
set up didn't relate to the punch
To string along setences like death for the kiddy fiddler/
Noose round his neck while he is dangling from some timber/
a tad stretched. . an you've used the paedophile angle already[/b]
Axis bone snapped poor guys gone on time out/
Lifeless you hanging cos i caused you to flat line out/
not feeling it
Few words get on my level..U couldn't shoot fire if u had a personal devil..
Leave yah brain collaspe override..Have"em switch aliases with no overtime..
didn't make sense
Kill"em let"em swim ona single breath..talking bout strugging 2lines yah whole rep..
Smoke this kid like a Straight Blunt..Nigga u a teddy so i can divoure u like a runt..
what's his being a teddy got to do with a runt?
U caught up N its pain time..Don't Be so Obsurded he Ghoust With RE-named lines.'
Im hot im hot on fire..This kids Whole work is based off my Lyrical aquire...
i'v just figured your rhyme scheme out. . not feeling it. . an 'lyrical aquire' is made up. . no such term my friend
Imma lunch out on his mother..Now u lifeless cause 4 lines ate u with butter..
Its all a take of mind..Use"em then watch"em Sufficate in his own txt rhyme...
you're not making sense duke
Let go of this innocent kid..have'em up on ebay for the person with the highest bid..
Da last verse how teddy was hit by my belt..I bet he won't B satisfied till he stock.N.Selfed
an 'e-bay' line?
v/ teddy
concise, made more sense, personals were evident
hit up my battle vs. jonezy.
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cheers for the votes. does that mean i won cos i got more vote but only a 4 poll voted? i will vote in the battles asap...
PLEASE FINISH THIS! i no ihave upped too many times but i have been away for a month and still no result i will vote asap if some one will finish this... please...
teddy got this cos he had a few nice punches and his flow was good
the other guy had a confusin format but he also came wit a few punches
i suggest elevation to both thou cos yall need to be more creative wit ur lines
vote=teddy
please return the favors..check the sig...
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uppin for voters please fininsh this. any admin can this get closed? i got votes but they not polled...
This guys a pedophile like the muppets in his sig/
Big bird plays with children and so does this kid/
it wusnt dat good but ok
Sesame street died years ago so should this fool/
Can of gas in my hand bitch your to be my fuel/
tru tru man dats da truth nice
Like a fish on a hook this kid will be struggling/
While i take my words and just start juggling/
it wuz ok
To string along setences like death for the kiddy fiddler/
Noose round his neck while he is dangling from some timber/
..........
Axis bone snapped poor guys gone on time out/
Lifeless you hanging cos i caused you to flat line out/
lol dat wuz funny
Few words get on my level..U couldn't shoot fire if u had a personal devil..
it was wak
Leave yah brain collaspe override..Have"em switch aliases with no overtime..
wak
Kill"em let"em swim ona single breath..talking bout strugging 2lines yah whole
rep..
iight
Smoke this kid like a Straight Blunt..Nigga u a teddy so i can divoure u like a runt..
woooo it wuz iight
U caught up N its pain time..Don't Be so Obsurded he Ghoust With RE-named lines.'
didnt like it
Im hot im hot on fire..This kids Whole work is based off my Lyrical aquire...
No sorry dusnt go
Imma lunch out on his mother..Now u lifeless cause 4 lines ate u with butter..
not cool
Its all a take of mind..Use"em then watch"em Sufficate in his own txt rhyme..
.............
Let go of this innocent kid..have'em up on ebay for the person with the highest bid..
OK
Da last verse how teddy was hit by my belt..I bet he won't B satisfied till he stock.N.Selfed
vote 4 ma otha battles plz as a favor
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