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    An Emotional Prison

    This is my first POETRY drop EVER...so tell me what i need to work on and stuff.....im mostly a text battler......



    An Emotional Prison

    As I clench the alter podium my knuckles start to turn pale
    Words drip from my lips as my swollen heart begins to fail
    My soul’s burning to be released into an Everest of anger
    An Emotional Prison, my pain is entombed behind danger
    I can smell the stench of evil cloud my focus and my morals
    I sense the evil near me as I start to recall the horrors

    Engrossed into an enigma of overwhelming pain and sadness
    Giving into the thoughts that traveled tha eerie roads of darkness
    I was once a humble preacher but I was overcome by my own sins
    Forgotten thoughts, as I wiped away the tears that hung from my chin

    Deep pressure of hate builds up and my oxygen starts to clog up
    I have proven to be faltered as I always manage to fuck up

    Before I died I prayed to God to save me and make my life better
    But…………. he didnt seem to hear me because……………..
    An Emotional prison has scarred me and chambered my heart forever

    ….God didn’t let me die…..my own past actions did….
    VERBAL INTERCOURSE

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    ayo yall know im ya poetry leader right? lol you good yo, keep up what u doing u dont need no damn help lol

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    yo tight ass poetry Cuz...i didnt know oyu had it in ya....lol
    well anyways keep werking on it!!!!!!!

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