a nice collab, i was feelin this, it was detailed and that is good, and you had good structure, didnt do too much with every line just kept it basic but it was hott
i give that high marks
keep writin fams much love l8r 1
a nice collab, i was feelin this, it was detailed and that is good, and you had good structure, didnt do too much with every line just kept it basic but it was hott
i give that high marks
keep writin fams much love l8r 1
very nice collaboration... no need to up the vocab or rhyme scheme, they both went together perfect..
One of the dopest peices ive seen on this site...
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peep my battle as well if ya don't mind... it needs some votes
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very dope....the emotion was immaculate....i loved tha wordplay and the slight bit of complexity you used which did accent this piece very well....like i said the emotion was mos def there....rhye scheme and flow...very tight....i loved tha ending...good twist....both of yall used real vivid imagery....very ill drop...keep droppin tha hottness.~1`
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good scheme and i liked the idea :yes:
i aint a killa but dont pushme
revenge is like the sweetest thing nexta gittin pussy
yeah this was real good i could feel your emotion and what is it to say
execpt it was flames
^shush
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